Rough Cut Feedback

By Olivia Houlton

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Summary of ResultsPOSITIVES:• We noticed that many people said they thought

that the mismatching reflection was very effective which we were very pleased about as our film is based on the concept of appearance and reality

• Also we noticed several comments on our use of the silhouette and lighting at the start which we were also very pleased about because we thought this was an effective visual image

• Several people also commented on our build up of tension

Summary of ResultsIMPROVEMENTS• Many commented on our use sound, therefore we

used both GarageBand and Freesound to create a more complex soundscape

• Also, there were comments on our lack of titles and credits. We improved on this by using our previous teaser titles timelines to insert titles on Final Cut Pro

• Also, there was a comment on our lack of idents. We improved on this by creating an ident on Final Cut Pro and added it to the beginning of our teaser