Burned_____________________________________________________________________Outro, beach, day; A single dead body lays on the sand, for a moment all is still, then two people walk in to shot and stop at the body. A: so what do you think happened?B: Hell knows, probably some phyco getting his kicks. Makes me damn sick!A: We’re gunna have to call this in… get the chief.B: it’s happened again.

Cut to chief for quick scene then him as non-diegetic phone voice over next scene_____________________________________________________________________________________________Into, day, bedroom; sleeping, hangs half out of his duvet begins to moan as his phone rings, tired, he falls out of bed sighs and answers the phone.James white: (indecisive mumbling)C: (on phone) Get your ass out a bed; we got a scene at west court beachfront.James white: hold on... I’ll be one minuteC: (on phone) hurry up.Then we implement jump cuts of him getting dressed and grabbing clothing from the wardrobe, reminiscent of a montage.

White gets out of car at the scene where all the by-standers on looking_____________________________________________________________________________________________Walking from the car and treads on a lighter, picks it up and looks seriously at itRichard: White, what took you so long, its been the fourth one this month for Christ-sakeJames white: fourth?Lifts the lighter up to the camera and shows the notches in the lighter.