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It may seem people were friends but most of the time,

they ended up just using people.

“Hard work beats talent when talent

doesn’t work hard”.

Having learned my lesson I’m now

training as hard as possible.

I didn’t start them until the day of the due date

and the teacher said everything on the

rubric form had to be included.

I was upset and I did not understand why.

I should of started on the projects

beforehand and work slowly until the due date so I would of gotten everything

done.

My experience from this quote are when I

was...

We could barely pay for are cars, or other

bills.

Suddenly I heard my name being called to report to the skating

ring.

When I finally ended my skating piece

people were clapping and cheering I felt confident again.

While doing my homework it got

really late and I got tired and went to

bed.

I brushed my teeth, washed my

face, and then I ate breakfast.

I soon found out who it was and he just kept talking about me.

Each individual has the right and ability to change, if they put

their mind to it.

There is plentiful crops, lots of water, and

abundance of shelters too.

It seemed like the situation was getting worse and

worse everyday I was falling a part.

The quote I choose is “Even at my weakest

moments I am strong” (Anonymous).

While I was laying there crying on the

floor I prayed to god

Weather she likes it or not, the secret will come out. Now if one of them did it once and didn't get caught it won't come out unless they feel guilty and decide to tell

the other loved one.

Lying will only lead to trouble, no one wants

to be friends with a lier/criminal.

I tried and tried to stop lying but I could

not stop.

But luckly I had my cousin who was in his

sophmore year.

Recently I have changed and I try my best to be nice and grateful.

This ever so clever saying is important to me because, I've personally experienced a scenario relating to it.

Of course I still eat food cooked by my loving

family, but every now and then I'll make myself

a treat.

I said, then she looked at me with a blank look on her face, it didn't look sad and it definitely wasn't happy, I couldn't make out what she was feeling.

The one thing that could conquer or overrule a humans judgement is their emotions.

I wish I was stronger.

Whether we like it or not, fear is an emotion that is unpleasant, because everyone likes to think as though they are superman of some sort; however, by overcoming these fears, we are able to grown humanly.

So beginning of my 9th grade year, I put pressure on myself to get straight A's.

We were completely different but our feelings for each other was exactly the same and that's what mattered. We would go on dates, we would go with each others family and do activities.

As more people began to realize that I was the girl who betrayed a best friend, the more I was hated.

I told her I had never had company while she was not home.

She began to treat me different and everything I said to her was a lie.

Even though life wasn't so great i still had fun in

anyway i could.

Im more than thankful to living one, I have everything i possibly need roof over my head, food on the table, a bed to sleep on, while

so many suffer and have half or none of the thing i have.

A few months had passed being ingulfed in WWII my family felt like going

to the pool.

My dad was on the ladder saying either jump or I will push you in.

...because she didn't want me to lost my childhood to quickly.

I thought to my self, maybe she is rite, maybe I shouldn't think less of myself.

Suddenly I heard my name being called to report to the skating ring.

My experience from this quote are when I was a wealthy boy...

Also, when we had to move to Georgia.

I didn't start them until the day of the due date and the teacher said everything on the rubric form had to be included.

Friends weren't the answers to problems but I am just seen by many people as too friendly.

At times, I never realize my emotions can get the best of me, including my anger problems, it has got me into trouble and almost got me into fights.

While I was laying there crying on the floor, I prayed to god.....

Everybody who has ever lived on earth has had an event where they have learned a law of life.

While doing my homework it got really late and I got tired and went to bed.

But after 3 months of running 6 days a week around 7 miles a

day, I had outworked 7 people and had gotten a minute a

faster.