SECOND CUT FEEDBACK

The Digipak I asked people their opinion on what should be used as my digipak, as I would be able to expand on their ideas and create a unique digipak for

my product.

People said using this as my digipak cover

with a shot of me and Dayle walking away

away from each other would make a

digipak which created meaning for

someone buying this album.

Another idea that I got from asking my

peers was that the last shot at the end of

the music video would make a interesting

digipak. Here also it has good framing to

be able to place text in most places.

Jump Cuts It was obvious that from my feedback the jump cuts in the music

video were its best feature:

They said that in these jump cuts, they were timed well to fit in with the changing of beats in the music.

It was also said that they fit in with generic conventions well.

Links Between Lyrics and Visuals During the editing stage of making my music video, I chose

to create some strong links between lyrics and visuals on the screen. When getting audience this was a feature that people thought was a good feature within the music video. Here are some examples of those:

‘Pulling against the stream’

‘Wave after wave’