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I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they smell my clothes and notice that I smoke. I really want to quit but I'm getting addicted to it now. Have you got any suggestions for me to quit smoking? To: [email protected] om From: [email protected] Subject: I'm getting addicted to cigarettes HI Anne, Sincerely, e a look at this email, how many parts can you see? you see 3 parts? Are there two parts? t does each part contain? Does it contain an email address? s it contain a greeting? Ron Smoker

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Page 1: I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they

I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they smell my clothes and notice that I smoke. I really want to quit but I'm getting addicted to it now.

Have you got any suggestions for me to quit smoking?

I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they smell my clothes and notice that I smoke. I really want to quit but I'm getting addicted to it now.

Have you got any suggestions for me to quit smoking?

To: [email protected]: [email protected]

From: [email protected] From: [email protected]

Subject: I'm getting addicted to cigarettesSubject: I'm getting addicted to cigarettesHI Anne,HI Anne,

Sincerely, Sincerely,

Have a look at this email, how many parts can you see?Do you see 3 parts? Are there two parts?What does each part contain? Does it contain an email address? Does it contain a greeting?

Ron SmokerRon Smoker

Page 2: I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they

To: [email protected]

From: [email protected]

Subject: help!

Dear Mary,

The kids at my school tease me because I'm a vegetarian and I don´t play sports. I feel like I don't have any real friends

because they're always telling me bad things, and one of my classmates enjoys throwing my pens and notebooks off

my desk. I talked to my mom about this, but she told me to ignore them and it didn't work. They say my food is

disgusting and they never listen to what I have to say. Sometimes I get so angry, that I start screaming at them. Then

they ask me why I'm so mad. It's like they purposely upset me for fun. What should I do?

I need your help

Sincerely

Alexandra

Is this part telling me about the writer’s email address? Is this part telling me about the reader’s name? Is Is this part telling me about the message of the email? Etc.

Page 3: I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they

To: [email protected]

From: [email protected]

Subject: help!

Dear Mary,

The kids at my school tease me because I'm a vegetarian and I don´t play sports. I feel like I don't

have any real friends because they're always telling me bad things, and one of my classmates enjoys

throwing my pens and notebooks off my desk. I talked to my mom about this, but she told me to

ignore them and it didn't work. They say my food is disgusting and they never listen to what I have

to say. Sometimes I get so angry, that I start screaming at them. Then they ask me why I'm so mad.

It's like they purposely upset me for fun. What should I do? I need your help.

Sincerely,

AlexandraReader’s email ADDRESS

CLOSING

SIGNATURE

BODY

GREETING

SUBJECT

Writer’s email ADDRESS

What concept best names each part? What´s the name of this part? What if this part is missing?

C O N C E P T S

Page 4: I have started to smoke and I'm not proud of it at all. And if my boyfriend finds out he will ignore me for days. Besides, my parents get sad when they

To: [email protected]

From: [email protected]

Subject: help!

Dear Mary,

The kids at my school tease me because I'm a vegetarian and I don´t play sports. I feel like I don't have

any real friends because they're always telling me bad things, and one of my classmates enjoys

throwing my pens and notebooks off my desk. I talked to my mom about this, but she told me to

ignore them and it didn't work. They say my food is disgusting and they never listen to what I have to

say. Sometimes I get so angry, that I start screaming at them. Then they ask me why I'm so mad. It's like

they purposely upset me for fun. What should I do? I need your help.

Sincerely,

Alexandra

Reader’s email ADDRESS

CLOSING

SIGNATURE

BODY

GREETING

SUBJECT

Writer’s email ADDRESS