Audience Feed Back

Effects made it interestingI liked how the shots cut to one another in time

with the music notesSometimes I though that there was too long takes on the lava and when they played the

instrumentsProps were effective e.g. balloons helped

understand the narrativeOverall very interesting with effects

Really interesting editing, experimental almost-loved the balloons shotDisliked the random clips shot with all the disco ballsReally cool tho

Good use of colour overlapping and colourChanges in time e.g. slow motion and speeding up of the ink in the water, worked really wellSome of the shots seemed a bit too slow compared with the music but most were on time and sat perfectly

Colour changed with music niceThe changes with balloons and the disco balls, niceI think some shot lengths could be cut down some are too longThe use of colour in general was very effective!

Better than ours, much, much, much better than ours.Good use of colourGot a tad bit bored of the drop but the mirror ball workedI think the parts with the girl could have been longer and more dominantGirls hands on the piano…all male band..Good narrative you could tell what the story wasGood mis-en-scene. I liked how it all went togetherBalloons-mirror…colourThink it was really creative considering the band are a bunch of useless lumps who can’t be bothered to be in their own video. You had to work with nothing and you pulled it off.

At the end the clips that match the music fits wellThe effects of the liquids are really well done but I’m not sure if they fit in with the structure- although parts of the story shown is clear - shows good creativityLighting effects are good- shows a lot of time taken

Very effective use of colour and light – randomVideo fit very well with music- narrative structureProps used very well – balloons etcMay be seen as a bit “too” random, hard to follow, but then again fits with music perfectlyVery entropic, but you can tell a lot of research went in to it for editing and sue of colour and light

Accurate instruments – goodGood sue of colour- bright and happy Mis-en-scene of prom, mirror ball etcSlow editing good change of pace for slow solo bitCool ink and lava lamp effectsWasn’t sure who Dave was supposed to be. I thought at first he was annoyed cuz she was late but was he a jealous ex or something? Not very clear narrative structureRubbish Sound! =]

Seems quite entropic not to have the actor singing. May have been niceHowever, looks great. Love the use of colour and the change of colour between each beatNice Effect of lighting also with the overlap of clips and also the disco ballNice mis-en-scene of appropriate props also

Shot transitions use the beat of the music wellShot of instruments are authenticity – typical genre of musicNarrative works well –boy meets girl – girl getting readyPlus mis-en-scene when walking down stairs is good – as music changes, location does tooLots going on at the beginning not sure what’s going on, but is clear after a little while

Colour changing guitar is amazingA few too many disco balls- the overlapping isn’t greatThe ink in water is brilliantly doneEnding montage during “love you babe” is good editingBalloons popping up on each beat are cleverly done, as is the guy throwing the balloons down at the end, further good editingGood sue of colour through out, maybe a little bit move on the prom girl would have been even better.

Emma Jones – 18 - Student

Abigail Rhodes – 23 - Chef

VideoMost peculiar (in a good way!)Don't really understand. Was a girl getting ready to go somewhere, and then ended up going to prom?Maybe should have been a bit more of a storyLoved the lots of colour, and the weird disco balls

Digi PakGoodBright colourful and very eye catchingTitle needs to be a brighter colour, not as obvious against balloons

Mag AdLooks printed (like potato printing)Seems a bit white, and youngShould have used the guitars for the magazine, cuz they looked awesome and would incorporate better. You’d know which CD to look for after seeing the advert

Sam Lloyd – 21 – Plasterer/Barman

Very goodLiked the filming of the clipsThe effects were greatNot sure it was very approprate to the song, and lyrics

AncillaryLike coloursGuitars are wickedAd’s a little bit girly, but good thoughLooks a little bit like a kids birthday party, maybe should be black to appeal to a more mature audience