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THE EFFECTIVENESS OF PICTURE SERIES ON STUDENTS
ABILITY IN WRITING DESCRIPTIVE TEXT
(A Quasi-Experimental Study in the Seventh Grade
Students of MTSN 33 Jakarta)
A SKRIPSI
Presented to the Department of English Education
In a Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of “S.Pd”
(S-1) in Department of English Education
By:
Eka Rosdiana Putri
NIM. 1112014000080
DEPARTEMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
FACULTY OF EDUCATIONAL SCIENCES
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY
JAKARTA
2017
ABSTRACT
EKA ROSDIANA PUTRI, 2017, The Effectiveness of Picture Series on Students
Ability in Writing Descriptive Text (A Quasi-Experimental Study in the Seventh
Grade Students of MTSN 33 Jakarta). Skripsi, Department of English Education,
The Faculty of Tarbiyah and Teachers’ Training, State Islamic University Syarif
Hidayatullah Jakarta.
Advisor I : Dr. Atiq Susilo, M.A
Advisor II : Devi Yusnita, M. Pd
Keywords: picture series, descriptive text, writing.
The purpose of this research is to investigate the effectiveness of picture series
on students ability in writing descriptive text, specifically it is written on the title
of this research that is “The Effectiveness of Picture Series on Students Ability in
Writing Descriptive Text, A Quasi-Experimental Study in the Seventh Grade
Students of MTSN 33 Jakarta.”
Experimental research was used as a method in this study. The study was
carried out in two classes, one as the controlled class and the other as the
experimental class. The data were gathered through tests. The test consisted of the
pre-test and post-test.
The research was conducted at the seventh grade of MTSN 33 Jakarta, on
September 11th
until October 5th
2017 of the school year 2017/2018. The sample
used were the student class VII.1 and VII.3which consist of 37 students in each
class, the experimental class of class VII.1 is taught by using picture series,
whereas in controlled class VII.3 is taught descriptive text as usual, without it.
After giving the treatment on experimental class and without it on controlled
class, the data collected and analyzed by using t-test. According to the result of
statistical calculation, it is obtained the value of to (t-observation) is 1,818 and the
value of “tt”(t-table) from the df (72) on degree of significant of 5% = 1.672, as
known “to” is higher than “t” table as 1.818 > 1,672. It means that the null
hypothesis (Ho) is rejected and the alternative
Hypothesis (Ha) is accepted. Based on the finding this study it can be
concluded that picture series is effective in the teaching for students’ ability in
writing descriptive text, that showed by t-score above.
ABSTRAK
EKA ROSDIANA PUTRI, 2017, The Effectiveness of Picture Series On Students
Ability in Writing Descriptive Text (A Quasi-Experimental Study in the Seventh
Grade of MTSN 33 Jakarta). Skripsi, Department of English Education, The
Faculty of Tarbiyah and Teachers’ Training, State Islamic University Syarif
Hidayatullah Jakarta.
Advisor I : Dr. Atiq Susilo, M.A
Advisor II : Devi Yusnita, M. Pd
Kata kunci: gambar berseri, tulisan deskripsi, menulis.
Tujuan penelitian ini adalah untuk meneliti keefektifan dari gambar berseri
terhadap kemampuan siswa dalam menulis deskripsi teks. Penelitian ini berjudul
“The Effectiveness of Picture Series On Students Ability in Writing Descriptive
Text (A Quasi-Experimental Study in the Seventh Grade Students of MTSN 33
Jakarta)”.
Eksperimental adalah metode yang digunakanl. Penelitian ini dilakukan di dua
kelas, yakni kelas control dan kelas eksperimen. Data dikumpulkan melalui dua
tes. Tes terdiri dari pre-test dan post-test.
Penelitian ini dilaksanakan di kelas tujuh SMPN 33 Jakarta pada tanggal 11
September sampai dengan tanggal 5 Oktober 2017 tahun akademik 2017/2018,
sampel yang digunakan adalah kelas VII.1 dan VII 3 dan terdiri dari 37 siswa
pada masing-masing kelas. Kelas eksperimen adalah kelas VII.1 yang
mendapatkan perlakuan yaitu gambar berseri dalam menulis deskripsi teks dan
kelas control adalah kelas VII.3 yang tidak mendapatkan perlakuan. Setelah
diberikan perlakuan terhadap kelas eksperimen dan tanpa perlakuan di kelas
control dan setelah dilakukan pre-test dan post-test maka data yang sudah di
dapatkan kemudian di analisa menggunkan t-test. Berdasarkan hasil dari kalkulasi
statistic, nilai to atau t-observasi adalah 1.818 dan nilai t-table (ttabel) dengan
derajat kebebasan 72 dalam signifikansi 5 persen adalah 1.672. maka diketahui
bahwa to (observasi) lebih tinggi nilainya dari t-tabel, 1.818>1.672 berdasarkan
data hasil penghitungan statistic di atas maka dapat disimpulkan bahwa Null
Hipotesis (Ho) ditolak, sedangkan Alternatif Hipotesis (Ha) dapat diterima, yang
berarti gambar berseri efektif terhadap kemampuan siswa dalam menulis teks
deskripsi di kelas tujuh.
Berdasarkan penjelasan diatas dapat disimpulkan bahwa gambar berseri efektif
terhadap kemampuan siswa dalam menulis deskripsi teks di kelas tujuh di MTSN
33 Jakarta, yang dapat dilihat dari nilai t-skor diatas.
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
In the name of Allah, the Beneficent, the Merciful
All praises be to Allah the Lord of the worlds
Peace and blessing be upon our prophet Muhammad, his family, his descendants,
and his followers
This skripsi is presented to the English Education Department of English
Education Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’ Training, State Islamic University
Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta.
In this good occasion, the writer would like to express her greatest gratitude
and appreciation to her beloved parents (Mr.soekarno and Mrs. Rosidah) for their
encouragement, support and patience to motivate the writer to finish her study.
Her beloved sisters Citra Aulia Widyanti, Hany Asri Mulyani and her beloved
brothers Pradita Hari Mukti for their motivation and praying.
Her gratitude and honor also go to:
1. Prof. Dr. Dr. H. Ahmad Thib Raya, M.A, the Dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and
Teachers’ Training.
2. Dr. Alex, M. Pd, the Head of English Education Department.
3. Zahril Anasy, M.Hum, the Secretary of English Education Department.
4. Dr. Atiq Susilo,M.A and Devi Yusnita, M. Pd, her advisors.
5. All of the lecturers of English Education Department.
6. The Headmaster Dra. Hj.Nining Sumarni , Vice Siti Jubaedah and all teachers
and staff of Junior High School MTsN 33 Jakarta.
7. All of her best friend, Tri Fadhillah S,Pd, Anida Qurrotul Aini S.P.d, Lisa
Rusrianti S.P.d Putri Utama S.P.d, Annisa, Aulia, Seha for gathering and
supporting . I love you always.
8. All of her friends of English Education Department in year 2012, especially C
class, for gathering and sharing their knowledge and whose names cannot be
mentioned one by one.
9. My big brother who always support me, Haken
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Really expected that this paper will give advantages for the writer, and also for
other people in general. Therefore, criticism and suggestion will be useful for the
writer in correcting the mistakes and the weakness of this paper.
Jakarta, 21 November 2017
The Writer
Eka Rosdiana Putri
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Page
ENDORSEMENT SHEET ............................................................................ ii
SURAT PERNYATAAN KARYA SENDIRI .............................................. iii
ABSTRACT .................................................................................................... iv
ABSTRAK ...................................................................................................... v
ACKNOWLEDGMENT ............................................................................... vi
TABLE OF CONTENTS ............................................................................... viii
LIST OF TABLES ......................................................................................... x
LIST OF PICTURES ..................................................................................... xi
LIST OF APPENDICES ............................................................................... xii
CHAPTER I. INTRODUCTION .................................................................. 1
A. Background of study ............................................................................ 1
B. Identification of the Problem ............................................................... 4
C. Limitation of the Problem .................................................................... 4
D. Formulation of Study ........................................................................... 4
E. Objective of the Study .......................................................................... 4
F. Significance of the Study ..................................................................... 4
CHAPTER II. THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK ..................................... 6
A. Writing .............................................................................................. 6
1. Definition of Writing................................................................... 6
2. The Writing Process .................................................................... 8
3. The Purpose of Writing ............................................................... 10
4. Types of Writing Forms .............................................................. 13
5. Problem in Writing Development ............................................... 15
B. Descriptive Text ................................................................................ 17
1. Definition of Descriptive Text .................................................... 17
2. Kinds of Descriptive Text ........................................................... 20
3. Purpose of Descriptive Writing ................................................... 22
4. Function of Descriptive Writing ................................................. 23
C. Picture Series ..................................................................................... 24
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1. Definition of Picture Series ......................................................... 24
2. The Advantages of Using Pictures .............................................. 25
D. Relevant Study .................................................................................. 27
E. Conceptual Framework ..................................................................... 28
F. Theoretical Hypotheses ..................................................................... 28
CHAPTER III. RESEARCH OF METHODOLOGY ................................ 29
A. Place and Time ................................................................................ 29
B. Research Method and Design .......................................................... 29
C. Population and Sample .................................................................... 29
D. The Instrument of Research ............................................................. 31
E. The Technique of Collecting Data................................................... 32
F. Technique of Data Analysis ............................................................ 34
G. Significance of Level Coherence ..................................................... 36
CHAPTER IV. FINDING AND DISCUSSION .......................................... 38
A. Data Description............................................................................. 38
1. Students Score of Pre-Test and Post-Test in Experimental Class
and Controlled Class ................................................................ 38
2. Normality Test ......................................................................... 42
3. Homogeneity Test .................................................................... 44
B. Data Analysis ................................................................................. 45
C. Data Interpretation ......................................................................... 51
CHAPTER V. CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION ................................ 52
A. Conclusion .......................................................................................... 52
B. Suggestion .......................................................................................... 52
REFERENCES ............................................................................................... 54
APPENDICES ................................................................................................
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LIST OF TABLES
1. Table 3.1 Writing Rating Scale Table ................................................ 32
2. Table 3.2 Table of Categorization and Writing Score ........................ 34
3. Table 3.3 Table Coherence of Significance ........................................ 36
4. Table 4.1 The Students’ Scores of Experimental Class (X) ............... 39
5. Table 4.2 The Student’ Scores of Controlled Class (Y) ..................... 40
6. Table 4.3 Normality of Pre-Test Result between Experimental and
Controlled Class.................................................................................. 42
7. Table 4.4 Normality of Post-Test Result between Experimental and
Controlled Class.................................................................................. 43
8. Table 4.5 Homogeneity of Pre-Test Result between Experimental and
Controlled Class.................................................................................. 44
9. Table 4.6 Homogeneity of Post-Test Result between Experimental
and Controlled Class ........................................................................... 45
10. Table 4.7 The Result of t-Test Calculation ......................................... 46
11. Table 4.8 Independent Sample Test of Gained Score......................... 46
12. Table 4.9 Comparison of Students’ Gained Score between Students
in Experimental Class and Controlled Class ...................................... 48
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LIST OF PICTURES
1. The wheel process of writing taken from Harmer ............................... 9
2. Control group, pre-test, post-test design .............................................. 29
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LIST OF APPENDICES
Appendix 1. The Instrument of Pre-Test ......................................................
Appendix 2. The Instrument of Post-Test .....................................................
Appendix 3. Students’ Score of Pre-Test and Post-Test in Experimental
Class and Controlled Class ......................................................
Appendix 4. The Result of Test Normality and Test of Homogeneity .........
Appendix 5. The Result of T-Test Calculation .............................................
Appendix 6. Comparison of Students’ Gained Score between Students in
Experimental Class and Controlled Class ................................
Appendix 7. Lesson Planning of Experimental Class ...................................
Appendix 8. Lesson Planning of Controlled Class .......................................
Appendix 9. Surat Pengesahan Proposal Skripsi ..........................................
Appendix 10. Surat Bimbingan Skripsi ..........................................................
Appendix 11. Surat Permohonan Izin Skripsi ................................................
Appendix 12. References Examination Paper ................................................
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
This chapter presents and discusses the background of the study,
identification of the problem, limitation of the problem, formulation of the
problem, the objective of the study and the significance of the study.
A. Background of the Study
In English there are four skills which are important to learn, they are
listening, speaking, reading and writing. All of the four skills. Writing is one
of skill taught at school. Writing is one of the skills which has to master by
the seventh grade students of junior high school. According to Heaton,
writing skill is complex and sometimes difficult to teach, requiring mastery
not only grammatical and rhetorical devices but also of conceptual and
judgmental elements.1 That needs to be mastered by students, because writing
is one of a ways of people to communicate to each other for expressing their
thinking and feeling. Writing is unnatural act like speaking. Writing needs
more efforts than speaking. Writing should be learned first before mastering
it.2
The writer needs to learn how to gain and to sharpen the knowledge and
memory. Writing makes word permanent and thus expends the collective
memory human beings from relatively small store that we can remember and
pass on orally to the invite capacity of a modern library. Because writing is
important so we can be really to be interesting. And by writing we can more.
Teaching English as foreign language involves as four skills: listening,
reading, speaking and writing. Writing is one of skills that are learnt in the
class. In writing activity they can write every things to express their idea and
thinking. Writing is the important skill in the learning process
In Indonesia, English is used as a foreign language. the objective of
teaching English is to enable students to communicate both orally and in
1 J. B. Heaton, Writing English Language Test, (New York: Longman Group, 1995), p. 135.
2 James C. Raymond, Writing is an Unnatural Act, (New York: Harper Publisher, 1980), p.3
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written form. Meanwhile teaching and learning English as a foreign language
is not easy thing to do. There are some language components to be mastered
by the learner, such as pronunciation, vocabulary, grammar and so on. Not
only should language components be mastered by the learner but also the four
language skill, namely listening, speaking, reading, writing. Neverth less
mastering language skill is the objective of English teaching based on the
current school-based curriculum.
Based on the current school-Based curriculum, writing is one of the
language skill that must be taught in senior high school and junior high
school. The teaching of writing aims to enable students to master the
functional texts and monologue text or paragraph in the form of descriptive,
narrative, recount, procedure and report.3 The form of writing which is taught
is presented in the form of type text. Descriptive writing is one of text type
which are learned in in junior high school.
Descriptive writing is a text type which describes about person, place or
thing as if the reader can see, feel, hear or touch it. 4
Besides descriptive
paragraph is a set of sentences which are related to each other to reflect the
writer’s thought and ideas vividly in describing the object that the writer has
seen.
In teaching learning process, students often find difficulties in digging
their ideas and imagination in writing descriptive text. Beside lack of
vocabulary and grammar patterns, the way of teaching learning also has a
significant role. It can be seen from the still many students who have
difficulty in putting their intent into writing. confused to pour his idea. slow
in expressing opinions. many mistakes in writing a word into English in the
writing lesson, so that their value becomes low.
In teaching learning process, the teacher merely uses a whiteboard, marker
etc. so it might hinder the students to broaden their ideas and imagination.
3 Hidayati, Kurikulum KTSP 2006, Standar Isi SD, SMP, SMA
4 John Langan, College Writing Skills, (New York: McGraw Hill Higher Education, 2013),
p.11
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Meanwhile in descriptive writing the imagination of students is badly needed
in order to make colorful and vivid writing.
One of learning strategies which can be used in teaching learning process
to improve the students’ ability in descriptive writing is using picture series.
Picture series is a concatenation of images arranged in sequence. According to
Sadiman, picture series is that combine several different images but are intertwined
so as to form a theme or a series of specific stories.5 Picture have some benefits
such as giving true, concreate and realistic concept. Picture also can motivate
the students, make the subject they are dealing clearly and illustrate the
general idea and forms of an object or action which are particular to a culture.
Moreover the writer would like to know how well the use of picture series in
learning descriptive writing. As Raimes state that a picture can support for not
just one task but many, sentence combining exercise or sequencing of
sentences to the writing of dialogues, letters, reports or essays.6 The pictures
inspire the students in expressing their ideas into paragraph. Pictures series
will be effective towards students’ writing skill in descriptive text because the
students have motivation to increase their potential in writing descriptive text
after they imagine the pictures.
In MTsN 33 Jakarta, the learning process especially on English subjects
has been presented with teaching methods and media, especially the picture
media. But the reality is in the field, the students' writing ability is still lack.
That can be proved at the field for English subjects on descriptive writing
materials is still lack, from the seventh grade of the five classes, the average
students get the value under the criteria of drinking limitations. Where the
minimum value of mastery at the writing lesson description in curriculum
2013 is 7. While there are still many students who get below the achievement.
This is seen in the passivity of students when following the learning
English class just listen to it without giving a response, the lack of
5 Arif Sadiman, Media Pendidikan, (Jakarta: Rajawali Press, 2003), p.29
6 Ann Raimes, Techniques in Teaching Writing, (New York: Oxford University Press,
1983), p.27
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compassion to make the students is possible there are various obstacles and
difficulties.
There are various possibilities that cause these obstacles and difficulties.
Perhaps the learning presentation is monotonous and boring, or it may be the
lack of a teacher's ability to create or use the picture series.
Based on the explanation and problems above, the writer is interested in
finding out the factor from the observation above which made the students
got the low score in writing descriptive test. The factor is picture series to
make a good paragraph in writing descriptive text. The writer intends to
conduct study entitled, “The Effectiveness of Picture Series on Student's
Ability in Writing Descriptive Text. A Quasi-Experimental Study in the
Seventh Grade of MTsN 33 Jakarta”.
B. Identification of the Problem
Based on the background of the study the researcher can identify many
problems why the students’ writing skill of the seventh grade of MTsN 33
Jakarta is still low. They are as follows
1. Students are not interested in writing descriptive text because of their lack
of ideas.
2. English teacher are lack in using effective picture series.
3. Students are lack vocabularies in writing descriptive text.
C. Limitation of the Problem
In this quantitative experimental research, the writer will focus on the
effectiveness of picture series on students’ ability in writing descriptive text.
D. Formulation of Study
Based on the identification of the problems and problem limitation
mentioned above, the study will be formulated as follows:
“Is there any effectiveness of picture series on students’ writing ability in
descriptive text?”
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E. Objective of the Study
The purpose of the study is to know the effectiveness of picture series on
students’ ability in writing descriptive text.
F. Significance of the Study
In this research the writer hopes that it would have some significance not
only to the writer herself but also to other English teachers, students’ and other
researchers. To English teachers, the writer hopes this study can help them
find ways in teaching descriptive text by using the picture series. To students,
the result of this study is hoped that they will enjoy and be more interested in
learning descriptive text that can increase their understanding to this material.
And the last to other researchers, the results in this researcher are expected to
be important information and knowledge to give a good contribution for the
researchers who are interested in conducting a better research on the same
issue.
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CHAPTER II
THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK
In this chapter, the writer discussed and elaborated some theories which
related to the study. The discussion focuses on writing descriptive text and
pictures series.
A. Writing
1. Definition of Writing
Writing is one way of people to communicate to each other for expressing
their thinking and feeling. Writing is unnatural act like speaking. Writing
needs more efforts than speaking does. Writing needs hard effort to dig and
manage the ideas which are from the writer‟s mind and pour it into written
from effectively so it will be readable. Before starting to write, the writer
need to remember and think first what the writer is going to write. The writer
has to recall all memory related to the topic which is going to be written to
get the details. As Raymond states that writing is unnatural form of speech.
Writing is how to produce a written product. The process involves a series
of thinking activities in which the writers have to transform their ideas
coherently and cohesively into written text. According to Brown, writing is a
transaction with words whereby you free yourself from what you presently
think, feel, and perceive. Writers are not only required to transmit a message
but also to grow and cook a message.1
There are many definitions of writing according to many language experts.
Spratt et al. state that writing is a productive skill which involves
communicating a message by making signs on a page2. According to Gordon
in McDonald and McDonald, writing is a process which different things
1 H. Dauglas Brown, Teaching by Principles: An Interactive Approach to Language
Pedagogy (2nd Edition). New York: Addison Wesley Longman, Inc., 2001), p.337 2 Mary Spratt, et al., The TKT Course, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2005), p.26
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happen at different stages in the process of putting thoughts into words and
words onto paper.3
Writing can also be defined as both physical and mental activity that is
aimed to express and impress.4 It is categorized as the physical activity
because the writer must act of committing words or ideas like typing an e-
mail into a computer. As a mental work, the activities of writing focus more
on the act of inventing ideas, thinking about how to express and organize
them into statements and paragraphs that enable a reader in understanding the
ideas of the written work.
To complete the definition of writing proposed by Brown states that
writing is the written products of thinking, drafting, and revising that require
specialized skills on how to generate ideas, how to organize them coherently,
how to use discourse markers and rhetorical conventions coherently into a
written text, how to revise text for clearer meaning and how to edit text for
appropriate grammar and how to produce a final products.5
Writing is a complex process that allows writers to explore thoughts and
ideas, and make them visible and concrete6. It is an activity that encourages
thinking and learning for it motivates communication and makes thought
available for reflection. When thought is written down, ideas can be
examined, reconsidered, added to, rearranged, and changed.
From the descriptions above, it can be concluded that writing is a process
of organizing ideas in which the writer is demanded to perform creativity in
using the language skills to produce a written text.
Generally writing is a complex process that involves a range of skills and
tasks because by writing students need frequent opportunities to write and to
3 McDonald, Christina R. and Robert L. McDonald, Teaching Writing (Carbondale: Southern
Illinois University Press, 2002), p.7 4 David Nunan, Practical English Language Teaching, (Boston: McGraw Hil, 2003), p.88
5 H. Douglas Brown, Teaching by Principles: and Interactive Approach to Language
Pedagogy. New York: A Pearson Education Company, 2001), p.335 6 Ghazi Ghaith, The Problem of Teaching Writing, (American University of Beirut (online)
2002), Available at http://nadabs.tripod.com/writing.
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apply the stages or the writing process, each or which focuses on specific
tasks.
Writing is one of the basic skills in learning a language. Naturally, before
learning to write, man learns to listen, speak, and read. It indicates that people
firstly need to be able to listen, to speak, and to read before they write since
writing can be considered as a combination of those three skills. Meaning that
we can write what we listen, speak, and read.
Lado states that to write is to put down the graphic symbols that represent
a language that one understands, so that others can read those graphic
symbols for they know the language and the graphic representation.7
Write activity is a form of manifestation of abilities and language skills are
mastered most recently by learners after listening skills, speaking and
reading. Compared with the other three language skills, writing ability more
difficult in controlled even by native speakers of the language in question
though. This is due to the ability to write requires mastery of various
linguistic elements and elements outside the language itself will be content
writing.8
In other words, the above theories explain that the term of writing can be
defined as a process of productive skills both physical and mental activity that
are aimed to express and impress from the products of thinking, drafting, and
revising.
2. The Writing Process
Writing is a complex cognitive activity in which the writer is required to
demonstrate control of a number of variables simultaneously. At the sentence
level those include control of content, format, sentence structure, vocabulary,
punctuation, spelling, and letter formation. Beyond the sentence, the writer
must be able to structure and integrate information into cohesive and coherent
paragraphs and texts.
7 Robert Lado, 1977, Language Testing, (London: Longman, 1977), p.14
8 Iskandar Wassid and Dadang Senendar, Strategi Pembelajaran Bahasa, (Yogyakarta:
Remaja Rosdakarya, 2008), p. 248-251
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Richard and Renandya state that the skills involved in writing are highly
complex.9 Writers have to pay attention to higher level of skills of planning
and organizing as well as lower level skills of spelling, punctuation, word
choice, and so on.
In addition, Ghaith states that writing is most likely to encourage thinking
and learning when students view writing as a process.10
Teachers need to
understand that writing is a recursive process, and that every writer uses the
process in a different way, so that students experience less pressure and more
willing to experiment, explore, revise, and edit.
Writing process, further, incorporates some stages structurally. Harmer
states that the stages on writing are planning, drafting, revising, and final
drafting.11
Writing process as a classroom activity that incorporates those four
basic stages is seen as a recursive process. It has cycle which integrates
among stages. It can be seen as a process wheel in which it clearly shows the
directions that the writers may take during their process in writing.
Picture 2.1
The wheel process of writing taken from Harmer
9 J. C., Richards, & Renandya, W., A Methodology in Language Teaching. An Anthology of
Current Practice, (New York: Cambridge University Press, 2002), p.303 10
Ghaith Ghazi. Writing. http:/www.uhu.es/antonia.dominguez/virtualwriting/writing.htm.
Retrieved on June 14th, 2013 11
Jeremy Harmer, The Practice of English Language Teaching (Third Edition), (London:
Pearson Education Limited, 2007), p.326
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In picture 2.1, Harmer compares writing to a “wheel.” Writers move not
only around the circumference of the wheel but also across the spoke, which
means writers revisit a certain stage as well as move from a planning stage to
final draft stage. In the classroom, planning presupposes that students obtain
new writing ideas through brainstorming, group work or note-taking in order
to avoid the well-known writer‟s block. Drafting entails choosing and
sequencing the optimal ideas to be included in the piece of writing. Then,
editing means putting everything together in a coherent and cogent manner
whereas revising asks the learners to check their written work one more time
for the sake of crossing out any possible inadvertences. Although paying
attention to writing as a process is a time-consuming activity, it is quite
helpful when teachers require students to decide together on the stages of
composition even before engaging in planning writing. Mention has to be
made of the fact that, in reality, the stages of writing are never linear.
Based on the definition above, the researcher concludes that writing is a
process in which the writer is required to use some variables of writing, such
as content, format, sentence structure, vocabulary, punctuation, spelling, and
letter formation at the same time in order to demonstrate knowledge and
express the ideas, feelings, and thought in the written form so that other
people can understand the message. There are some steps in writing that can
be done recursively, i. e. planning, drafting, editing, final product. The writers
may loop backwards and move forward between those various stages. Since
writing is a complex process, the teacher should consider facilitating the
students with appropriate learning experience of writing so that they are
encouraged to explore and experiment their ways of writing.
3. The Purpose of Writing
Talking about the purpose of writing means talking about the aims or the
reasons why people or students in specific do writing. Looking up the
definitions of writing, it can be inferred that the main purpose of doing
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writing is to convey message, information or ideas to other people. Much
writing is done to convey information for the people.
According to Cox, writing has four purpose, they are to inform, to amuse,
to satirize and to persuade.
a. To inform
Writing to inform contains the information about something to the
reader. Moreover. It should be accurate, clear, concise and objective
and based on vast factual information. There are many form of
writing to inform, such us as essay examination in the collage, report,
repost, recipe books, etc.
b. To amuse
Writing to amuse concerns on entertaining the reader through the
writing itself. Chose the humor/joke which is still appropriate and
acceptable or not in the society is needed by the writer.
c. To satirize
Writing to satirize means writing to criticize and affect reform. The
writer need to be sure it can make the reader aware of the fact which
is conveyed in the writing. It is important to avoid misinterpretation
for the reader.
d. To persuade
Writing to persuade is writing to influence the readers‟ thoughts or
actions. In this case, the writer will use persuasion in order to accuse
or to defend and to affect the readers‟ mind. 12
Brookes & Grundy state that the purposes of writing for each person are
different. The answer may be to get information to someone. A second
answer might be to solve the problem of volume, of having to store more than
the human brain can remember.13
The third reason for writing might be to
filter and shape our experience. Writing also fulfills a pedagogic purpose in
12
Martha Heasley Cox, Writing form process Purpose, (California: Chandler Publishing
Company, 1962),pp.261-330. 13
Arthur Brookes and Peter Grundy, Writing for Study Purposes: A Teacher's Guide to
Developing Individual Writing Skills, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press,1991), p.3
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second language teaching. It is used to fix the structures and vocabulary
already learnt.
According to Mattix, she states that purpose refers to writer‟s aim or
reason in writing which can be stated or implied. Identifying our purpose
early can help us to keep our draft on track and select organizational
strategies to fit ideas. Purpose can be divided into two terms: general and
specific.14
The General Purpose, writing has four general purposes: to inform,
to persuade, to express and to entertain. Those can be combined in various
ways.15
For example, most writing is intended to express the writers idea
about something, but it directly leads to the secondary purpose that is to
entertain the reader. Therefore, the general purposes could combine in various
ways. The Specific Purpose, the specific purpose may be implied or stated.
The purpose is invariably implied in a theme that permeates the piece. In
expository writing, the purpose is usually stated directly for clarity either in a
topic sentence or in thesis.16
In order to be clear, writing should have a specific purpose. For clarity in
our writing, we have to revise and edit our writing. If we edit and revise our
writing it will help our paragraphs to be clear. As what has been mentioned
before, it can be concluded that the purposes of writing are to inform, to
persuade, to express and to entertain as general purpose. As for specific
purpose in writing, it is to make clarity in writing.
Writing can be said as a means of communication where written form
used to express the writer's purpose based on his experience. A writer
expresses her ideas, experiences, thoughts, and feeling through writing for a
specific purpose. The important thing of writing is the selection and
organization of experiences and carrying out a certain purpose.
14
Betty Mattix Dietsch, Reasoning & Writing Well : A Rhetoric, Research Guide, Reader,
and Handbook, (New York: McGraw Hill. 2006), p. 7. 15
Ibid., p.7 16
Ibid., p.8
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4. Types of Writing Forms
Finocchiaro pointed out that naturally; the type of writing system
(alphabet, picture) which exists in the native language is an important factor in
determining the case or speed which students learn to write.17
Lado also gives statements that the ability to write a worthwhile
composition is not possessed by all the speakers of a languages, the ability to
write requires special talent and special training.18
From both explanation
above we can conclude that it is not guarantee that native speaker is always he
able to write a good composition in his native language without having a
creative power of anything beautiful or of intrinsic value for the content of a
composition. Furthermore , Lado explains that writing a foreign language is
the ability to use the language and its graphic representation productively in
ordinary writing situations.19
More specially, he also adds that writing a foreign language is the ability
to use the structures. The lexical items and their conventional representation in
ordinary matter of fact writing. Nevertheless, he also gives for their
explanation that the ability to write a worthwhile composition is not possessed
by all the speakers of a language. The ability to write requires special talent
and special training. Louis Robinson, states that writing is divided into two
types as follows:
a. Guided writing
Guided writing helps ascertain the students feel certain that they are doing
the right thing. They follow instruction and change or complete sentences.
The students were instructed to write certain sentences into organized
simple paragraph based on the certain clues or guidelines. For instance, the
students were given a picture and some questions leading to simple
paragraphs describing about the given pictures. Then the students were
also given a series of pictures telling a story and some sentences
17
B. Finocchiaro, Teaching English as a Second language: From Theory to Pratice, (New
York: Regent Publishing Company Ltd, 1974), p.85 18
Lado, R., Language Testing, (London: Longman Group Limited, 1967), p.248 19
Ibid., p.248
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representing the picture, but the sentences were not in order. The students
were then instructed to rewrite the sentences according to the pictures so
that they form a paragraph that makes sense.
b. Free writing
In free writing, the students are given a composition topic, which makes it
possible to use freely what they have just practiced. This statement is in
line with Pincas, who gives the objective of free writing in Karmaden, the
ability to write freely what has been taught not the ability to write anything
at all. Based on the objective given by Pincas above we can say that what
is meant by free writing here is not writing freely what we want to write,
but, writing according to what has been taught. „Free‟ here means free in
expressing our ideas.20
Based on Wilshon and Burks, there are four types of writing forms. They
are exposition, argumentation, description and narration.21
a. Narration is the form of writing that contains the story of acts or events
and tells what happened based on natural time sequences. For example,
short stories, novels and new stories.
b. Description is the form of writing which is used to describe and create
visual imagination of particular place, person or unit of times, such as time
of season, etc.
c. Exposition is used to give information, make explanations and interpret
meaning. It includes editorials, essay, and informative and instructional
material.
d. Argumentation is used to persuade and convince in order to make a case or
to prove or disprove a statement or opinion.
20
Lois Robinson Ross, J., Guided Writing and Free Writing: A Textbook in Composition for
English as a Second Language". TESOL Quarterly, TESOL Quarterly, Vol. 1, No. 2. 1 (2) 1967,
p.58–60 21
George E. Wilshon and Julia M. Burks, Let‟s Write English, (New York: Litton
Educational Publishing, Inc., 1980),p.378-383.
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5. Problem in Writing Development
In junior high school, children are have started developing the elements of
writing for the next level, from the formation of letters, to organizing their
ideas, to using correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Junior high school
students are expected to advance from learning the rules of writing to
automatically applying those rules beginning in grade four. By the end of
junior high school, students should be writing independently and producing
multiple-paragraph essays that contain formal introductions, supporting
evidence, and conclusions.
Signs of difficulties can vary from person to person. The way that
problems appear can also vary, depending on the individual. This stands in
regard to writing. Some people can be very good at masking and
compensating for their difficulties, so their shortcomings are more difficult to
notice.
According to Suriamuharja, good and effective paragraphs must meet
three requirements, namely (1) Cohesion (Unity); (2) Coherence
(Cohesiveness); and (3) Development / Completion of paragraphs22
(1) Cohesion (Unity)
Points out that what is meant by cohesion in paragraphs is that all
sentences that construct paragraphs together state one thing, one
particular theme.
(2) Coherence (Cohesiveness)
What is meant by coherence / alignment in paragraphs is the
cohesiveness of relationships between a sentence with another
sentence that forms the paragraph.
Cohesion and coherence aren't too difficult to explain. Cohesion refers
to connectivity in a text. Coherence refers to how easy it is to
understand the writing.
Example Cohesion & Coherence:
22
Agus Suriamihardja, Petunjuk Praktek Menulis, (Jakarta: Depdikbud, 2007), p.48
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"My favorite color is blue. I like it because it is calming and it relaxes
me. I often go outside in the summer and lie on the grass and look into
the clear sky when I am stressed. For this reason, I'd have to say my
favorite color is blue."
This sentence is both coherent and cohesive, but let's focus on the
cohesion first. I've highlighted the ways that each sentence is
connected to the sentence before.
Cohesion with NO Coherence. Now, here is a sentence that has
cohesion but is not coherent. Example:
"My favorite color is blue. Blue sports cars go very fast. Driving in
this way is dangerous and can cause many car crashes. I had a car
accident once and broke my leg. I was very sad because I had to miss
a holiday in Europe because of the injury."
As you can see, there is plenty of cohesion here. The sentences
connect clearly together but if you read the paragraph, it really makes
no sense - I start talking about blue and I finish talking about a holiday
in Europe. There is no coherence in this sentence.
Coherence with NO Cohesion
Now, let's take a look at a sentence that is coherent but not cohesive.
"My favorite color is blue. I'm calm and relaxed. In the summer I lie
on the grass and look up."
This is more difficult to understand but basically this lack of cohesion
means a lack of sufficient connectors to join the ideas together. If I try
hard I can understand what the person is saying: a short answer, an
explanation, an example; however the sentences don't fit together.
Cohesion & Coherence in Conversation
Now, in spoken discourse, the easiest example I can think of is a
Cambridge First Certificate speaking exam, part 3: the students'
conversation. Two students are asked to talk about some pictures but
if they do not respond to what each other is saying and make no
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attempt to reference each other then the conversation can be coherent
but can completely lack cohesion. For example:
A. "I think these people are having a good time."
B. "It appears these people are enjoying themselves."
A. "They seem to be on holiday."
B. "It looks like they are on vacation."
Obviously there is no connection between A and B in this
conversation. We understand them and they are coherent. What is
missing is cohesion. They are not connected. A is not listening to B
and B is not listening to A.
On the other hand, take a look at this example:
A. "I think these people are having a good time."
B. "Time is difficult to manage. I am always late for my social
appointments like when I have a date with a girl."
A. "I like girls with long, dark hair and brown eyes."
B. "My dog has brown eyes and a long tail."
etc, etc.
This example shows that there is cohesion but the conversation makes
no sense and therefore it is missing coherence.
(3) Development / Completion of paragraphs
Paragraph development is the compilation or detail of the ideas that
construct the paragraph". A paragraph is said to be developed or
complete if the main topic or sentence phrase is developed or
explained by describing it in concrete form, by way of exposure and
giving examples, analyzing and values.
B. Descriptive Text
1. Definition of Descriptive Text
Description is writing about characteristic features of a particular thing.
According to Oshima and Hogue, descriptive writing appeals to the senses, so
it tells how something looks, feels, smells, tastes, and/ or sounds. In addition,
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a good description is like a “word picture”; the reader can imagine the object,
place, or person in his or her mind. A writer of a good description is like an
artist who paints a picture that can be seen clearly in the mind of the reader.23
Alan Meyers explains that description is a useful tool in many kinds of
writing. In descriptive writing it will help to create a sense of realism of the
scene of the story of descriptive text. Through the right word choice, reader
also can feel the scene. Describing also useful to clarify argument and appeal
reader‟s emotions in persuasive writing, while in the report or explanation, it
clarifies makes ideas more specific.24
The generic structure of a descriptive text are as follows:
a. Identification: an introduction to the subject of the description;
b. Description of features: describe the characteristic features of the
subject.
While the language features of a descriptive text are follows:
a. Use of particular nouns;
b. Use of detailed noun groups to provide information about the subject;
c. Use of a variety of types of adjectives;
d. Use of relating verbs to provide information about the subject;
e. Use of thinking and feeling verbs to express the writer‟s personal view
about the subject or to give an insight into the subject‟s thoughts and
feelings;
f. Use of action verbs to describe the subject‟s behavior;
g. Use of adverbials to provide more information about this behavior;
h. Use of similes, metaphors and other types of figurative language,
particularly in literary descriptions.
According to Anderson and Anderson that descriptive or description
describes a particular person, place or thing. Its purpose is to tell about the
23
A. Oshima & Hogue, A., Introduction to Academic Writing (2nd Edition), (New York:
Addison Wesley Longman, Inc., 1997), p.50 24
Alan Meyers, Gateways to Academic Writing, (United Stated of America: Pearson
Education, 2005), p.60
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subject by describing its features without including personal opinions. 25
There are some features in a descriptive that we must give a serious attention,
they are: the feature in construction a description. A typical description has an
opening paragraph introduction the subject of the description. Followed by a
series of paragraph each describing one feature of the subject. There can also
be a final concluding section that signal the end or the description or in
another hand, there are an identification and description in a descriptive text.
The identification of the descriptive text is usually as a main idea of the
paragraph or called as a general statement and the description of descriptive
text is about the explanation of the general statement or main idea or
supporting details to the general statement.
In description, we take a scene or an object and capture it in language.
That is, we organize the details of the object or scene we wish to describe in
the way that will most effectively convey the sensual image.26
To be
effective, written description should have an efficient, sensible, carefully
thought-out plan. Description can also be oriented from the general to the
specific or from the specific to the general.
According to Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson that descriptive or
description describes a particular person, place, or thing. Its purpose is to tell
about the subject by describing its features without including personal
opinions.27
Besides, the word descriptions from two words: scriber, meaning
“to write,” and de, meaning “down” or “about”. There is a hint in the
etymology of the word description that something is being traced drawn, that
in describing you will follow the outline of an object visually and then write
it down or “draw” it in word.28
25
Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Text Type in English 3,(Australia: Macmillan
Education Australia Pty Ltd, 1998), p. 26. 26
Robert Scholes and Nancy R. Comley, The Practice of Writing, 2nd
ed. (New York: St.
Martin‟s Press, 1985), p. 11. 27
Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Op.Cit., p.26. 28
Frank J. D‟Angelo, Process and Thought in Composition, (Massachusetts: Winthroup
Publishers, Inc, 1977), p. 123
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Katherine Ploeger defines, description is a development method used to
depict physical items or objects that have concrete, touchable features.29
It
means description is used to add details about something physical such as: a
person, place, or thing. This method uses sensory language that is words that
appeal to the five senses. If you are writing about a physical, real, concrete
object that you can touch, describe it with sensory language, especially if the
reader might not be familiar with the object. Remember, the reader cannot
read your mind, only your words.
2. Kinds of Descriptive Text
We know that descriptive text is to describe something, such as a person,
place or thing. Usually when the people want to describe something, for
example in describing people, they often describe each of people in terms of
age, nationality, clothes, hair, face, height, etc. therefore based on that
statement, it can be seen that descriptive has three types of kinds30
:
a. Description of people
People are different, and writing description of people is different.
You are probably already aware of some of the complications because you
have often been asked, “What‟s so-and-like?” In replying, you might
resort to identification, an impression, or a character sketch, depending on
the situation. Let‟s examine each.
(1) Identification. Although you might provide identification, you would
probably want to go further than that. Used mainly in official records
and documents, identification consists only of certain statistical
information (height, weight, age), visible characteristics (color of hair,
skin, and eyes), and recognizable marks (scars, birthmark).
(2) Impression. Unlike the identification, the impression may not identify
a person, but it does convey an overall idea of him or her. Many details
29
Katherine Ploeger, Simplified Paragraph Skill, (California State University, Stanislaus:
NTC publishing group, 1999), p.241 30
Mariana Karim, and Sabrony Rahmadie, Writing, (Jakarta: Departemen Pendidikan dan
Kebudayaan, Direktorat Jenderal Pendidikan Tinggi, Proyek Pendidikan Tenaga Akademik, 1996)
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may be missing, yet the writer does provide in a few broad strokes a
general feeling about the subject. Although impression is usually less
complete and informative than identification, it may be more effective
in capturing an individual‟s striking or distinctive traits.
(3) Character Sketch. More complete descriptions of people are usually
called character sketch; they may also be referred to as profiles,
literary portraits, and biographical sketches. As its name indicates, a
character sketch delineates the character of a person, or at least his or
her main personality traits. In the process, it may include identification
and an impression, but it will do more than tell what people look or
seem like: it will show what they are like. A character sketch may be
about a type rather than an individual, revealing the characteristics
common to the members of a group, such as campus jocks,
cheerleaders, art students, religious fanatics, television devotes.
b. Description of places
In describing a place for example a room, what should you
describe first? The walls? The Floor? Unlike a chronologically
developed paragraph, there is no set pattern for arranging sentences in
descriptive paragraph. It is not necessary to begin with one area and
then proceed to another one. Nevertheless, the sentences should not be
randomly arranged.
The description must be organized so that the reader can vividly
imagine the scene being described. To make the paragraph more
interesting, you can add a controlling idea that states an attitude or
impression about the place being described. The arrangement of the
details in your description depend on your subject and purpose.
c. Description of things
To write a description about something, the writer must have a
good imagination about the thing that will be described. Besides, to
make our subjects as interesting and as vivid to our readers as they are
to us: using proper nouns and effective verbs.
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(1) Using Proper Noun. In addition to filling our descriptive writing
with concrete details and figures of speech, we might also want to
include a number of proper nouns, which, as we know, are the
names of particular persons, places, and things. For example;
Arizona, University of Tennessee. Including proper nouns that
readers recognize easily can make what we are describing more
familiar to them.
(2) Using Effective Verb. We know how important verbs are to
narration, but effective verbs can also add much to a piece of
description. Writers use verbs to make descriptions more specific,
accurate, and interesting. For instance, “the wind had chiseled deep
grooves into the sides of the cliffs” is more specific than “the wind
had made deep grooves.” The verb chiseled also gives the reader a
more accurate picture of the wind‟s action than made does.
3. Purpose of Descriptive Writing
There are three purposes of writing; informative writing, descriptive
writing, and persuasive writing.31
Students need to breakdown the purpose
in order to plan and compose a text. The genre defines the style that the
writer will use and suggest about the language and structure of each
genre. Informative writing used to share or give knowledge and
information. Descriptive text include to the informative writing. it is
because descriptive text tell and explain the description of people, things,
or place based on fact and writer visual experiences of sound, shape, and
feel of it.
Descriptive writing is often based on observation of people, places
and things or objects and includes creative speculations and interpretation.
This is personal or imaginative expression that produced by the writer.
31
J. Michael O‟Malley and Lorraine Valdez Pierce, Authentic Assessment for English
Language Learner Practical Approaches for Teachers, (United State of America: Addition-
Wesley Publishing, 1996), p.137
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Writer will allow reader to see, hear, and feel the subject matter clearly
based on the description.
4. Function of Descriptive Writing
According to Hartono descriptive writing has a social function is to
describe a particular person, place, or thing, for instance, description of a
particular building, specific animal, particular place, and specific
person.32
Its function is almost same with the concept of descriptive itself,
whereas, the purpose of description as stated by Lila Fink, et.al is to
present the reader with a picture of a person, subject, or setting.33
Therefore, as a reader of description, we should take a note of some
elements of description as follows: a). Concrete details. A concrete detail
is a specific description that supports, reflects, or expands a writer‟s
attitude or purpose. b). Images. An image is a concrete, literal (real,
actual) description of a person, physical object, or sensory experience
that can be known through one of the five senses (sight, sound, taste,
touch, and smell). c).Similes. A simile is a comparison, using like or as,
between two objects. The comparison is between two things essentially
different yet similar in one aspect.34
In other hand, with good descriptive writing can stimulate the reader‟s
imagination to form sensory responses from all five senses. Frequently,
the reader has no choice; many people cannot read an article about the
taste of citrus fruits for example, without having a physical response to
the imagined taste. And a passage about a specific food left out of the
refrigerator too long will procedure a shudder from readers as they
imagine the resulting smell.
32
Rudi Hartono, Genres of Texts, (Unpublished, Semarang State University: English
Department Faculty of Language and Art, 2005), p. 6.
33
Lila Fink, et al., A Text for Writing and Reading, (Boston: Little, Brown and Company,
1983), p. 41 34
Ibid., p.42
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C. Picture Series
1. Definition of Picture Series
Picture is a visual representation (of an object or scene or person or
abstraction) produced on a surface.35
Marianne and Sharon said that
pictures are kinds of visual materials that might be used more effectively
to develop and sustain motivation in producing positive attitudes toward
English. Pictures can also be used in various configurations to enhance
learning and practice.36
According to Wright on his book Pictures for Language Learning
states that, “pictures are not just an aspect of method, but through their
representation of places, objects, and people they are essential part of the
overall experience”.37
It means that, pictures can help the learners to
understand the meaning of a word because it represents the meaning of it.
According to Raimes, pictures will bring everything the outside world into
the classroom in a vividly concrete way. So a picture is a valuable resource
as it provides:
a. a shared experience in the classroom;
b. a need for common language forms to use in the classroom;
c. a variety of tasks;
d. a focus of interest for students.38
Based on the theory, students will be focus and interested in writing
using picture. Students have imagination about the picture that they saw.
Therefore, it can influence to the students‟ writing skill because they write
many sentences based on the picture and their imagination. From the
explanation above, it can be concluded that pictures series is one of a
media in study which can be used to help the teacher in delivering a
35
http:www.thefreedictionary.com/pictures 36
Marianne Celce and Sharon Hills, Technique and Resource in Teaching Grammar, (New
York: Oxford University Press,1998), p.73. 37
Andrew Wright, Pictures for Language Learning, (Cambridge: Cambridge University
Press, 1989), p. 2. 38
Ann Raimes, Techniques in Teaching Writing, (New York: Oxford University Press,1983),
p. 27-28.
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material which is given to the student. This media is used to stimulate the
participation of the student in learning process. It is needed to make
learning process more attractive. It makes the material easier to be
accepted by the student. Media is mediator between teacher and student in
teaching and learning process. As one of a media in learning process,
pictures series is also intended to make student‟s motivation in study be
increase. Pictures series are an art which is used to draw are unmovable
goods if they are arranged well.
Picture is a drawing object. It is one of visual aids that are very useful
in teaching, especially for English teaching. Pictures can really help the
learners to ease them in comprehending the meaning of a word, a sentence,
or a paragraph. By using picture, the learners can get the imagination
about the objects or the situations. Picture consists of lines and shapes
which are drawn, painted, or printed on a surface. It also shows a person,
thing, or scene.
2. The Advantages of Using Pictures
Using pictures series as media in writing is a good way for students
because it has many advantages that can help their writing ability.
according to Finnonchiaro said that there are many advantages of picture
are obvious:39
They provide added incentive to learn and are popular and
interesting for the students They give necessary variation and to create a
context within which his written text will have meaning.
They are ready means of establishing a quick and a clear concept of
what word of structure may mean And also according to Arthur and
William, picture helps people to comprehend and remember the text.
When the texts were presented alone or with pictures the order in which
steps were describe in the text. Subject will tend to mentally represent the
text.40
39
Marry Finnochiaro and Michael Bonomo, The Foreign Language Learner: A Guide for
Teacher, (New York: Regents Publishing Company,1973), p. 164. 40
Arthur M. Glenberg and William E. Langston, Journal of Memory and Language, (New
York; Academic Press. Inc., 1992),p.129.
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Picture is one of visual and printed media and it is widely used for
educational purposes. Picture as one of media can be used by teacher in
teaching learning process has some advantages. Based on Gerlach and Ely,
restated in research by Dwi Nur Indah, the advantages of picture are.41
a. Picture is inexpensive and widely available.
b. Provide common experiences for an entire group.
c. Visual details make it possible to study subject that would otherwise
be impossible.
d. Picture after stimulus to further study reading and research.
e. Pictures help to focus attention and develop critical judgment.
f. Pictures are easily to manipulate.
In Wright‟s book, Pictures for Language Learning, he wrote some
advantages of pictures:42
a. Easy to prepare.
b. Easy to organize.
c. Interesting.
d. Meaningful and authentic.
e. Sufficient amount of language.
Besides the five advantages above, Wright also said that picture can be
used for teachers and students in whatever syllabus they are following.
There are some suggestions for general strategies for teachers using any
picture in a classroom:43
a. Whole-class discussion – it can lead to writing by giving any type of
pictures.
b. Changing information – it can lead to speaking by dividing 2 groups in
a class. One group one picture, then they share and exchange their
information about the picture.
c. Working in pairs or small groups – the teacher gives each student of
the pair or give each group different picture to work with.
41
Dwi Nur Indah, Improving Writing Recount Text by Using Photographs, (Semarang: IKIP
PGRI Semarang, 2010), p. 10. 42
Andrew Wright, Op.cit., p. 3. 43
Ann Raimes, Op.cit., p. 28.
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d. Real communicative tasks – students provide themselves their own
pictures. It has advantage that teacher is relieved of the task of finding
a picture and students can share their personal moments.
D. Relevant Study
Some students of English education Department in Indonesia have
conducted the researches about using picture sequences in teaching English as
a Foreign Language. One of them is Puji Astuti (2011), titled “Improving
Students’ Ability in Writing Recount Text Through Picture Sequences” She
applied a classroom action research design at the first year of MA Darul
Ma‟arif Cipete. From her research can be taken a conclusion that using picture
sequences can improve the students‟ ability in writing recount text. It can be
seen from the result of the result of the student. As the result, the mark of
students in experimental class is higher than the mark of students in control
class. From the research can be said that there are equations with the
researchers that both use the image media, especially the media image series.
While the difference is in research done Puji Astuti to know the ability in
writing recount text, is the author doing research on the ability in writing
description text.
In other side, Acik Lisna Vandiwi (2013) on her study “Using Picture
Series to Teach Writing Procedure Text at First Grade of SMP
Muhammadiyah 3 in Mentoro Sumobito, Jombang” indicated that picture
series is attractive and effective for teaching English especially for teaching
writing procedure text. It also can make the students‟ interest and help them to
understand more about the materials from the teacher. Whereas in the
comparison of the second study, have similarities that are related to the
development of serial image media. But research conducted by Acik Lisna
Vandiwi to know the teach writing test procedure, while the author is to know
the ability in writing description text.
From the two of the previous researches above, there are similarities in this
research that is discussing about the effectiveness of using picture series in
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improving students‟ writing skill, both writing recount text and writing
procedure text. Meanwhile the similarities in this study is the using of picture
series.
E. Conceptual Framework
Based on theoretical above, the writer synthesize that writing is one of four
basic skill that cannot be mastered as easy as speaking. Writing is not just
combining some words or sentences, it has forms and rules that not equal with
something we use in conversation. We need a lot of practice and have
interesting techniques in order to make the students accustomed to learn
English. One of those technique is the using of picture series in the teaching of
descriptive text writing.
The writer assumes that picture series can be adapted in teaching learning
English, especially writing descriptive text. It works well for stories process
and sequences of events and it will help students more focus on the story that
they will write. Then, the use of picture series is more efficient and practice
than words, they will be easier to recall and to remember because those picture
series will be exposed in real life situation.
By using pictures in teaching description writing, the student will have fun
and easier to learn it. Picture can increase the understanding of the student
about the material. Moreover, picture can be used as ornament to make the
material more appealing. Then foremost, pictures can stimulate the students to
enhance their ideas and imagination so that it will help them in writing a good
and vivid descriptive text.
F. Theoretical Hypotheses
Based on conceptual mentions above, there is a significance effect of
picture series on students‟ ability in writing descriptive text.
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH OF METHODOLOGY
A. Place and Time
The research of this study is conducted at Junior High School; the focus is
in the first semester of the seventh grade students. The writer organizes the
meeting with students once a week for both experimental and controlled class.
There are four meetings for treatment and for the pre-test and post-test after
the class has been given treatment. Then, the writer collects the data, and
begins to analyze them. The writer conducts this study at MTsN 33 Jakarta, Jl.
Pertengahan no.3A RT01/RW03 Cijantung Pasar Rebo, Jakarta Timur, DKI
Jakarta, in academic year 2017/2018 from 11th
September up to 5th
October
2017.
B. Research Method and Design
In conducting this research, the writer apply a quasi experimental design
(quantitative). McMillan and Schumacher state that quasi experimental
research is a good design of the research because while not true experiments,
it provides reasonable control over most sources of invalidity.1 There are two
classes of this study, one as experimental class and another as controlled class.
The experiment class was given treatment by using picture series and another
class was taught by conventional technique. The designed of experiment and
control class by Sugiyono for conducting the result, as followed:
Picture 3.1
Control group, pre-test, post-test design
1 James H. McMillan and Sally Schumacher, Research in Education (6thed), (Boston:
Pearson
Education, 2006), p. 126
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Where:
R1 : Random Class (Experimental Class)
R2 : Random Class (Controlled Class)
01&03 : Pre-test
X : Treatment
02&04 : Post-test.2
In this study, the researcher took two classes as sample and it was given
pretest and posttest. The pretest is ensure the equivalency of the control and
the experiment group before conducting the treatment. The post test is to see if
there is any statistically significant in the teaching of descriptive text writing
through picture series. The dependent variable in this study was students’
score in writing descriptive text whereas the independent variable was the use
of picture series`.
C. Population and Sample
1. Population
The population of this study is all the students at the seventh grade of
MTsN 33 Jakarta in academic year 2017/2018. The total number of the
population is 185 students and it is distributed into five classes, VII-1, VII-
5.
2. Sample
The aim of sampling is to construct a sample that can represent the
entire population. In this study, The writer used the purposeful random
sampling technique. McMillan stated that, “purposeful random sampling
(sometimes called purposive, judgment, or judgmental sampling), the
researcher selects particular elements from the population that will be
representative or informative about the topic of interest.3
2 Sugiyono, Metode Penelitian Kuantitatif, Kualitatif dan R&D, (Bandung: Alfabeta, 2009),
p.76 3 James H. McMillan, Sally Schumacher, Research in Education Evidence-Based Inquiry 6th
Edition, (Boston: Allyn and Bacon, 2006), p.126
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Or can defined as the process of identifying a population of interest
and developing a systematic way of selecting cases that is not based on
advanced knowledge of how the outcomes would appear. The purpose is
to increase credibility not to foster representativeness. The use of a
randomized sampling strategy, even when identifying a small sample, can
increase credibility The writer choose all students at the seventh grade of
MTsN 33 Jakarta as the sample. The total number of the sample is 74
students and it is divided into two classes, the VII-1 as experimental class
and VII-3 as controlled class.
D. The Instrument of Research
Before collecting data, the researcher must use instrument to get the better
data. The instrument of the research is a tool or facility that is used by
researcher for collecting data in order to get better result.
The writer used pre-test and post-test on the control and experiment class,
to see the effectiveness of pictures series by looking pre-test, and post-test
measurement and comparing the gained scores between both classes. The
effectiveness can be seen from the improvement of students’ score of
experiment class in the post-test.
E. The Technique of Collecting Data
The score was taken by the writer after student had been given some
treatments and from the comparison of both classes. The experiment class was
given the technique by using pictures series in the classroom and the
controlled class without using pictures series. In this study the researcher
conducted test as an instrument. The test is divided into two parts, as follows:
1. pre-test
The pre-test is given in the beginning of attending class to ensure the
equivalency of the control and the experimental group before conducting
the experiment. The test is an instruction to write a descriptive text about
one of the picture series that the students know with their own words.
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2. post-test
The post-test is given in the end of the treatment in order to see if
there are any statistically significant difference in the teaching of
descriptive text writing through picture series. The test in this post-test is
like the test in the pre-test. The test is an instruction to write picture series
with the students’ own words.
As a writing test, the writer could require candidates to write down a
descriptive text based on the picture series. There are some requirements:
minimal three paragraphs, each paragraph consists of eight sentences and
the candidates must think the cohesive, unity, and clarity in their writing.
To administered the writing test, the writer used as analytic score in order
to be more reliable in scoring students’ writing. The following rating scale
revisited by Jacob, et al.’s (1981):4
Table 3.1
Writing Rating Scale Table
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Content
30-27 Excellent to
Very Good
Knowledge – substantive – thorough
development of thesis – relevant to
assigned topic.
26-22 Good to
Average
Some knowledge of subject –
adequate range – limited
development of thesis –mostly
relevant to topic, but lack detail.
21-17 Fair to Poor
Limited knowledge of subject – little
substance – inadequate development
of topic.
16-13 Very Poor
Does not show knowledge of subject
– non substantive – not pertinent –
OR not enough to evaluate.
Organization 20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Fluent expression – ideas clearl
stated/supported – succinct – well
organized – logical sequencing –
cohesive
4 H.J. Jacobs, et al., Testing ESL Composition: A Practical Approach, (Newbury House:
Rowley, MA., 1981), p.78
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
17-14 Good to
Average
Somewhat choppy – loosely
organized but main ideas stand out –
limited support – logical but
incomplete sequencing.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Non fluent – ideas confused or
disconnected – lacks logical
sequencing and development.
09-07 Very Poor
Does not communicates – no
organization-OR not enough to
evaluate
Vocabulary
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Sophisticated range – effective
word/idiom choice and usage – word
form mastery – appropriate register.
17-14 Good to
Average
Adequate range – occasional errors
of word/idiom form, choice, usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Limited range – frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
09-07 Very Poor
Essentially translation – little
knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form – OR not enough
to evaluate.
Language
Use
25-22 Excellent to
Very Good
Effective complex constructions –
few errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions.
21-18 Good to
Average
Effective but simple constructions –
minor problems in complex
constructions – several errors of
agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
prepositions but meaning seldom
obscured.
17-11 Fair to Poor
Major problems in simple/ complex
constructions – frequent errors of
negation, agreement, tense, number,
word order/function, articles,
pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions –
meaning confused or obscured.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
10-5 Very Poor
Virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules – dominated by
errors –does not communicate – OR
not enough to evaluate.
Mechanics
5 Excellent to
Very Good
Demonstrates mastery of
conventions – few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
4 Good to
Average
Occasional errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing but meaning not
obscured.
3 Fair to Poor
Frequent errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – poor handwriting –
meaning confused or obscured.
2 Very Poor
No mastery of conventions –
dominated by errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – handwriting illegible
– OR not enough to evaluate.
SCORE:
Content: __ + Organization: __ + Vocabulary: __ + Language Use: __ +
Mechanics: __ = (TOTAL SCORE)
Table 3.2
Table of Categorization and Writing Score
Categorization Score
EXECELLENT 80 – 90
GOOD 70 – 80
FAIR 60 – 70
POOR 50 - 60
F. Technique of Data Analysis
After collecting the data by using test, the writer analyze the result of the
test. To find out the result of the test, the writer used t-test to find out the
difference score of students’ writing of descriptive text through picture series
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compared without it. Data processing is the step to know the result of both
experimental class with using picture series as variable X and controlled class
with using the conventional technique as variable Y. The writer will use
comparative technique. The comparative technique is an analysis technique to
evaluate hypothesis concerning the differences between two variables
examined. In the comparative technique, the variables are compared to
recognize whether the differences are significant or not. The writer used t-test
formula with the significance degree 5% and 1 % and Gained Score that
adapted from Sugiyono. Before using t-test formula, the writer has sought
some formula below.
1. Determining Mean with formula:
(
∑
)
𝐼 = the average of variables score
Σ 𝑓 ′ = sum of frequency multiply the student’s score
= number of students
2. Determining Standard Deviation score with formula:
𝑆𝐷𝐼 = standard deviation of gained score
Σ 𝑓𝑥′2 = sum of squared gained score
Σ 𝑓𝑥′ = sum of gained score
= number of students
2. Determining of Standard Error mean with formula:
𝑆𝐷 √∑𝑓𝑥
(
∑𝑓𝑥
)
𝑆D𝐼 = standard deviation of gained score
∑𝑓𝑥 = sum of squared gained score
∑𝑓𝑥 = sum of gained score
= number of students
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3. Determining Standard Error Mean with formula:
𝑆
𝑆𝐷𝐼
√
𝑆 𝐼 = standard error mean of gained score
𝑆𝐷𝐼 = standard deviation of gained score
= number of students
4. Determining Standard Error Mean of variable X and variable Y with
formula:
𝑆 √𝑆 𝑆
5. Determining t-observation (t0) with the formula:
𝑆 𝑆
6. Determining t-table in significant level 5% and 1% with degree of freedom
(df), with formula:
𝑑𝑓 = ( 1 + 2) 2
𝑑𝑓 = degree of freedom
= number of students
7. Significance level by coherence.
This table is to know how significance this observation.
Table 3.3
Table coherence of significance
And then, the criteria used as follows:
1. If t-test (to) > t-table (tt) in significant degree of 0.05, Ho (null hypothesis)
is rejected. It means that the rates of mean score of the experimental group
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are higher than the control group. The using of picture series is effective
on students’ writing of descriptive text.
2. If t-test (to) < t-table (tt) in significant degree of 0.05, Ho (the null
hypothesis) is accepted. It means that the rates of the means score of the
experimental group are same as or lower than the control group. The using
of pictures series is not effective on students’ writing of descriptive text.
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CHAPTER IV
FINDING AND DISCUSSION
This chapter present the result of test given to the class experimental and
controlled class which consists of pre-test and post-test in both classes.
Furthermore, the description will be followed by the discussion of the research
finding.
A. Data Description
In the following description, it would be presented research finding. The
finding was obtained from students pre-test and post-test scores.
1. Students Score of Pre-Test and Post-Test in Experimental Class
and Controlled Class
The Experimental class in this research was students in VII-1 in
MTsN 33 Jakarta. This class consisted of 37 students, 18 Male and 19
were female students and controlled class in VII-3 consisted of 37
students, 15 were male and 22 were female student.
The pre-test given to students of experimental class was to write
down a descriptive text based on the picture series (consisted of three
pictures). It was given to know their writing ability of descriptive text
before treatment was given. Based on the test given to experimental
class, the pre-test mean score (X) was 60,22 and the lowest score in
pre-test was 50 while the highest score in pre-test was 70
After pre-test was conducted, the students were given treatment by
writing descriptive text by picture series in class VII-1. Then, after the
treatment was given, the post-test was conducted. After the treatment,
mean score (X) of students was increased to 71,68, whereas the lowest
score in post-test was 65, while the highest score in post-test was 85.
The finding showed that students’ post-test scores were higher than
students’ pre-test score. The range between pre-test mean score and
post-test mean score was 11,46 points. Furthermore, the mean of
gained score was 424. It mean that the increasing score between pre-
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test and post-test was quite significant. The pre-test and the post-test
score of the students can be seen in table 4.1
Table 4.1
The Students’ Scores of Experimental Class (X)
Pre-Test Post-Test Gained
Student Score Score Score
1 69 80 11
2 60 72 12
3 55 65 10
4 62 70 8
5 60 74 14
6 61 72 11
7 60 73 13
8 55 66 11
9 61 72 11
10 56 66 10
11 56 70 14
12 55 69 14
13 62 70 8
14 56 70 14
15 60 71 11
16 67 77 10
17 64 74 10
18 52 72 20
19 67 77 10
20 50 65 15
21 54 69 15
22 52 68 16
23 58 68 10
24 63 73 10
25 56 69 13
26 64 71 7
27 57 67 10
28 55 65 10
29 60 72 12
30 60 73 13
31 68 85 17
32 68 75 7
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Pre-Test Post-Test Gained
33 65 75 10
34 70 78 8
35 62 72 10
36 62 72 10
37 66 75 9
F=37 60.22 71.68
424
Based on the description table above, in pre-test, there was 1
student getting score 50, the minimum score. This meant that they still
had extremely difficulty in comprehending writing descriptive text.
The most frequent scores appeared in the table was 60. There were 6
students who got score 60. In addition, there was no student got score
above 70, and the highest score was 70 only 1 student who got this
score.
In post-test, there were 3 students getting score 65 the minimum
score. The most frequent scores appeared in the table was 72. There
were 7 students who got score 72, however, there was no student who
got above 85, and the highest score was 85 only 1 student who got this
score. Table 4.2 below shows the description of the students’ scores in
the controlled class (variable Y).
Table 4.2
The Student’ Scores of Controlled Class (Y)
Pre-Test
Post-
Test Gained
Student Score Score Score
1 67 77 10
2 64 74 10
3 62 67 5
4 59 69 10
5 65 75 10
6 60 69 9
7 63 73 10
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Pre-Test
Post-
Test Gained
Student Score Score Score
8 69 70 1
9 59 69 10
10 57 61 4
11 57 67 10
12 56 64 8
13 57 67 10
14 55 66 11
15 57 67 10
16 67 77 10
17 62 72 10
18 61 70 9
19 64 74 10
20 60 70 10
21 61 68 7
22 55 65 10
23 60 63 3
24 60 68 8
25 61 68 7
26 55 66 11
27 54 64 10
28 58 66 8
29 69 72 3
30 59 69 10
31 56 59 3
32 56 61 5
33 58 62 4
34 60 70 10
35 62 72 10
36 74 78 4
37 63 73 10
F=37 60.59 68.70 300
Based on the description table above the result of pre-test in
controlled class, there was 1student getting score 54, the minimum
score. The most frequent score appeared on the table there were 5
students who got 60. In addition, there was no student who got score
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above 74, and the higher score was 74 with only 1 student who got
these scores. The mean score of pre-test was 60,59. It was higher than
the experimental class.
In post-test, it can be seen that the mean score of post-test was
improved and it was 68,70 and the mean gained score was 8,11. There
was 1 student getting score 59 the minimum score. The most frequent
scores appeared in the table was 67, 69 and 70. There were 4 students
who got score 67, 4 students who got score 69 and 4 students who got
score 70. But there was no student who got above 78, and the highest
score was 78 was gained by 1 student. It can be concluded that there
was still improvement of the students’ achievement in learning writing
descriptive text although they were not taught by using pictures series.
2. Normality Test
Kolmogorov-Smirnov was used to check normality of the data. The
test was done to determine if distribution of the data from the sample is
normal or not. Hen SPSS version 22 was used. If the normality is more
than the level of significance α (0,05), the test is normal. The result
was gained as follows: Analyze → Descriptive Statistics → Explore.
Insert pretest/posttest in Dependent List and Class in Factor List. Click
Plots and Checklist Normality plots with tests → Continue → OK. The
results of normality test of the data are presented as follows:
Table 4.3
Normality of Pre-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled
Class
Tests of Normality
Class
Kolmogorov-Smirnova Shapiro-Wilk
Statistic df Sig. Statistic df Sig.
Score_PreTest Experimental .116 37 .200* .971 37 .448
Controlled .120 37 .200* .937 37 .036
*. This is a lower bound of the true significance.
a. Lilliefors Significance Correction
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Based on data described normality test above, it could be showed
that data of pre-test in experimental class and controlled class were
normal. In test of normality test, the writer used Kolmogorov-Smirnov
critical points table in determining the t-table. According to the
consideration of n=37 and significance level 0,05, the t-table of this
normality the test was 1,70. The values were smaller than t-table, in
other words, t-value < t-table (0,116 < 1,70). For experimental class,
and (0,120 < 1,70) for controlled class. Therefore, Ho was accepted
and Hi was rejected. It meant that the distribution of the data was
normal. Also, the significance of experimental class was 0,200 and the
significance of controlled class was 0,200. The result shown that the
significance of both classes are above 0,05. It means that both classes
are normal.
Table 4.4
Normality of Post-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Tests of Normality
Class
Kolmogorov-Smirnova Shapiro-Wilk
Statistic df Sig. Statistic df Sig.
Score_PostTest Experimental .119 37 .200* .952 37 .111
Controlled .093 37 .200* .984 37 .868
*. This is a lower bound of the true significance.
a. Lilliefors Significance Correction
Test of normality was also conducted in post-test data used
Kolmogorov-Smirnov critical points table in determining the t-table.
According to the consideration of n = 37 and significance level 0,05,
the t-table of this normality test was 1,70. Furthermore, table 4.4
shown that the t-value of experimental class was 0,119 and the t-value
of controlled class was 0,093. The values were smaller than t-table, in
other words, t-value < t-table (0,119 < 1,70) for experimental class,
and (0,093 < 1,70) for controlled class. Therefore, Ho was accepted
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and Hi was rejected. It meant that the distribution of the data was
normal. Also, the significance of experimental class was 0,200 and the
significance of controlled class was 0,200. The result shown that the
significance of both classes were above 0,05. It means that the samples
of both classes are normal.
3. Homogeneity Test
The homogeneity test was used to test whether the data from
experimental class and controlled class have the same variant so that
hypotheses can be tested by using t-test. SPSS version 22 was also
used to do homogeneity test. Homogeneity test was calculated by
using Levine. The result was gained as follows: Analyze → Compare
means → One Way Anova →Put pretest/posttest I Dependent list and
Class in Factor List → Click option and Checklist Homogeneity of
variance test → Continue → OK.
The following tables contained the results of homogeneity test
between both classes:
Table 4.5
Homogeneity of Pre-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Test of Homogeneity of Variances
Score_PreTest
Levene Statistic df1 df2 Sig.
1.053 1 72 .308
The table of homogeneity above shown that the significance of pre-
test results between experimental and controlled class is 0,308.
Therefore, it can be concluded that both classes have the same variant
because of 0,308 .> 0,05. It means the pre-test form both classes is
homogeneity.
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Table 4.6
Homogeneity of Post-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Test of Homogeneity of Variances
Score_PostTest
Levene Statistic df1 df2 Sig.
.450 1 72 .505
The table of homogeneity above shown that the significance of
post-test results between experimental and controlled class is 0,505.
Therefore, it can be concluded that both classes have the same variant
because of 0,505 > 0,05. It means the post-test from both classes is
also homogeneity.
B. Data Analysis
Test of Hypothesis
Based on the hypotheses that have been explained in chapter II, which are:
Alternative Hypothesis (Ha): There was effectiveness of using pictures series
on students’ writing of descriptive text at the seventh grade students of MTsN
33 Jakarta.
Null Hypothesis (Ho): picture series is not effective in on students’ writing of
descriptive text at the seventh grade students of MTsN 33 Jakarta.
To prove the hypothesis, the result of the t-test calculation was tested with
these conditions:
1. If to < t-table, or the significant was > 0,05, in significant degree 5%,
the Ho was accepted and Ha was rejected. It means that there was no
significant effect of using picture series on students’ ability in writing
descriptive text.
2. If to > t-table, or the significant was < 0,05 in significant degree 5%,
the Ho was rejected and Ha was accepted. It means that there was
significant effect of using picture series on students’ ability in writing
descriptive text.
The following tables contained the result of t-test calculation.
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Table 4.7
The Result of t-Test Calculation
Group Statistics
Class N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error Mean
Score Experimental 37 71.6757 4.32727 .71140
Controlled 37 68.7027 4.65394 .76510
Table 4.8
Independent Sample Test of Gained Score
Independent Samples Test
Levene's Test
for Equality of
Variances t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t df
Sig.
(2-
tailed)
Mean
Differe
nce
Std. Error
Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of
the
Difference
Low
er
Upp
er
Score Equal
variances
assumed
.450 .505 2.846 72 .006 2.9729
7 1.04473
.890
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5.05
561
Equal
variances
not
assumed
2.846 71.622 .006 2.9729
7 1.04473
.890
15
5.05
580
The first table contained of statistical result of the experimental class
and controlled class. Both class had the same N or number of students,
namely 37 students for each class. The mean score was taken post-test
score. The table showed that the mean score of students in experimental
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class was 71,67 and the mean score of students in controlled class was
68,70 it showed that there was significant difference in mean score of both
classes. The difference mean between both classes was 2,97 points, where
the mean score of experimental class was higher than the mean score of
controlled class.
Subsequently, the standard deviation (SD-1), experimental class was
4,33 and the (SD-2) was 4,65 beside showing the mean and standard
deviation, the table also showed the standard error mean. The standard
error mean of gained score of experimental class (SE-m1) was 0,711 and
standard error mean of gained score of controlled class (SE-m2) was 0,765.
The second table contained the result of independent sample test
analyzed using SPSS 22. The writer used Levene’s test to test the
homogeneity variance. The result showed that F= 0,450 and ρ = 0,505 the
writer used 5% as the significant level, therefore the data was
homogeneous because ρ > 0,05. Subsequently, because homogeneous,
then the writer used independent sample test result in the equal variance
assumed. The significance was 0,006 (ρ = 0,006) in other words ρ < 0,05.
It indicated that Ho was rejected and Ha was accepted; there was
significant effect of using picture series on student ability in writing
descriptive text. The table also showed the degree of freedom (df) 72 the
value of t-table with degree of freedom was 72 And significant level 5%
was 1,672 then, the to was 2,846 therefore to > t-table (2,846 > 1,672)
Furthermore, the writer also used manual calculation in analyzing the
data. The calculation started with calculating the gained score of
experimental and controlled class. The result showed that the total of
experimental class gained score was 424 and the controlled class gained
score was 300. Besides calculating the gained score, the writer also
calculates the x-2 and y-2 obtained from gained score minus the mean of
gained score. The result revealed that x2 was 291,189 and y
2 was 287,568.
Comparative technique was used to test the hypothesis in which the result
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pre-test and post-test of both classes (experimental and controlled classes)
were compared as follows:
Table 4.9
Comparison of Students’ Gained Score between Students in Experimental
Class and Controlled Class
Students'
Number
Score x = X- ̅ x
2 y=Y- ̅ x
2
Exp (X) Con (Y)
1 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
2 12 10 0.54 0.292 1.89 3.579
3 10 5 -1.46 2.130 -3.11 9.660
4 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
5 14 10 2.54 6.454 1.89 3.579
6 11 9 -0.46 0.211 0.89 0.795
7 13 10 1.54 2.373 1.89 3.579
8 11 1 -0.46 0.211 -7.11 50.525
9 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
10 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
11 14 10 2.54 6.454 1.89 3.579
12 14 8 2.54 6.454 -0.11 0.012
13 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
14 14 11 2.54 6.454 2.89 8.363
15 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
16 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
17 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
18 20 9 8.54 72.941 0.89 0.795
19 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
20 15 10 3.54 12.535 1.89 3.579
21 15 7 3.54 12.535 -1.11 1.228
22 16 10 4.54 20.617 1.89 3.579
23 10 3 -1.46 2.130 -5.11 26.093
24 10 8 -1.46 2.130 -0.11 0.012
25 13 7 1.54 2.373 -1.11 1.228
26 7 11 -4.46 19.887 2.89 8.363
27 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
28 10 8 -1.46 2.130 -0.11 0.012
29 12 3 0.54 0.292 -5.11 26.093
30 13 10 1.54 2.373 1.89 3.579
31 17 3 5.54 30.698 -5.11 26.093
32 7 5 -4.46 19.887 -3.11 9.660
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Students'
Number
Score x = X- ̅ x
2 y=Y- ̅ x
2
Exp (X) Con (Y)
33 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
34 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
35 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
36 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
37 9 10 -2.46 6.049 1.89 3.579
∑ 424 300 0.00 291.189 0.00 287.568
The data were calculated based on the step of the test. The formulation
is as follows:
1. Determining mean of variable X
∑
= 11,459
2. Determining mean of variable Y
∑
= 8,108
3. Determining standard of deviation score of variable X
√
=7,87
4. Determining standard of deviation score of variable Y
√
=7,77
5. Determining standard error of mean of variable X
√
50
√
= 1,312
6. Determining standard error of mean of variable Y
√
√
√
= 1,295
7. Determining standard error of different of mean of variable X and Y
√
√
√
√
√
8. Determining to
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9. Determining t-table in significance level 5% with df (degree of
freedom)
df = (37+37) – 2
= 74 -2
= 72
The result of the calculation above showed hat to was 1,818 and the
degree of freedom (df) was 72. In addition the value of t-table in the
degree of freedom 72 and in significant level 5% was 1,672.
Furthermore, based in the manual calculation, the value of to was 1,818
and the degree of freedom (df) was 72. The value of t-table in the degree
of freedom 72 and in significant level 5% was 1,672. Therefore, the value
of to was greater than t-table, or in other words, to > t-table (1,818 >
1,672). In addition, according to SPSS 22 result, the significance was
0,006 (ρ = 0,006). In other words ρ < α, it mean that null hypothesis was
rejected and there was statistically significant different between the two
groups. Hence, the Ho was rejected and Ha was accepted. It means that
there was significant effect of using picture series on students ability in
writing descriptive text.
C. Data Interpretation
Based on the result analysis of the data the writer takes conclusion that
there is a significance difference between students’ achievement in writing
description text in experimental class which was given picture series and the
controlled class without picture series. It can be seen from the students’ pre-
test and post-test score. The mean score of pre-test in experimental class was
60,22 and the post-test mean score was 71,68. Meanwhile, the mean score of
pre-test in controlled class was 60,59, and the post-test mean score was 68,70.
Furthermore, in calculating t-test, if ρ < α, it meant that Ho was rejected and
Hi was accepted. However, if ρ > α, it meant that Ho was accepted and Hi
was rejected. The result showed that ρ was 0,006 (ρ = 0,006 and α was 0,05 (ρ
< α). Therefore, it indicated that Ho was rejected and Hi was accepted. In
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other words, there was significant effect of having picture series in students’
writing descriptive text.
The researcher believed that picture series can improve students’ ability in
writing descriptive text. It also could be seen from the implementation of this
media in the class. Students who have experienced writing descriptive text
with picture series had more ability of writing, easier students to develop
ideas, and higher motivation in writing.
In conclusion having picture series can make students interest in writing
descriptive text increase students motivation, build students strength memory
and help students really understand and how the actor feels.
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion
The result of this study showed the gained score of experimental class is
higher than the score of controlled class at the significance level is 0,006 (ρ =
0,006) and also, the t observe is significantly higher than the t-table is 1,818 >
1,672. It means that there is a significant effect in students’ writing ability in
descriptive text after being taught by using picture series.
Besides, the mean score of post-test students’ of the experimental class
which is higher than the mean score of post-test of the controlled class. The
mean of students’ post-test in experimental class is 71,68 while the mean of
students’ post-test in controlled class is 68,70. In addition the calculation of
the hypothesis that t observe is 2,846 and t table is 1,672. Therefore to > t-table
(2,846 > 1,672) that means the alternative hypothesis (Ha) is accepted and null
hypothesis (Ho) is rejected.
B. Suggestion
The result of this study showed that it is effective to be applied in teaching
and learning process. After the writer conducted the research, suggestion
could be appeared related to research findings and discussion. The points are:
1. Students should use picture series to help them improve their writing skill
as picture has so many advantages.
2. Students who have skill in drawing can use it to improve language skills,
such as writing, so that they can increase their writing ability, especially
for academic purposes in school.
3. The teachers should develop students’ idea by using pictures (or other
media) and make it come easier when students should write. By using
picture – in this case students’ photo, their memory will appear about what
to write.
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4. The teachers should motivate students to develop their writing by using
media, and the simplest one is picture, because it makes students’
visualization refreshed. So, they do not only see their writing but also
pictures as their tool for writing description text.
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RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
I
A. IDENTITAS
· Satuan Pendidikan : MTS Negeri 33 Jakarta
· Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
· Kelas/Semester : VII/1
· Materi Pokok : Teks Deskriptif
· Keterampilan : Menulis (Writing)
· Alokasi Waktu : 2 x 40 menit
B. KOMPETENSI INTI
· KI 1 : Menghargai dan menghayati ajaran agama yang dianutnya
· KI 2 : Menghargai dan menghayati perilaku jujur, disiplin,
tanggungjawab, peduli (toleransi, gotong royong), santun, percaya diri, dalam
berinteraksi secara efektif dengan lingkungan sosial dan alam dalam jangkauan
pergaulan dan keberadaannya.
· KI 3 : Memahami pengetahuan (faktual, konseptual, dan prosedural)
berdasarkan rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya
terkait fenomena dan kejadian tampak mata.
· KI 4 : Mencoba, mengolah, dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret
(menggunakan, mengurai, merangkai, memodifikasi, dan membuat) dan ranah
abstrak (menulis, membaca, menghitung, menggambar, dan mengarang) sesuai
dengan yang dipelajari di sekolah dan sumber lain yang sama dalam sudut
pandang/teori.
C. KOMPETENSI DASAR DAN INDIKATOR
3. 10. Memahami fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan
dari teks deskriptif dengan
menyatakan dan menanyakan tentang
deskripsi orang, binatang, dan benda,
sangat pendek dan sederhana, sesuai
dengan konteks penggunaannya.
1. Menyebutkan fungsi sosial dan
struktur teks teks deskriptif.
4. 12. Menangkap makna dalam
teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis, sangat
pendek dan sederhana.
2. Mengidentifikaksi informasi
rinci dalam teks lisan berbentuk
deskriptif.
2. 2. Menunjukkan perilaku
jujur, disiplin, percaya diri, dan
bertanggung jawab dalam
melaksanakan komunikasi
transaksional dengan guru dan
teman.
3. Menyebutkan ciri-ciri dan sifat
seseorang dengan percaya diri
menggunakan bahasa inggris yang
berterima.
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D. TUJUAN PEMBELAJARAN
1. Disajikan gambar berseri tentang suatu cerita sederhana, peserta didik
dapat menyebutkan tertulis fungsi sosial dan struktur teks dari gambar
berseri untuk menyusun teks deskriptif.
2. Disajikan gambar berseri dari suatu cerita sederhana, peserta didik dapat
mengidentifikasi informasi rinci yang terdapat di dalam gambar berseri
tersebut secara tertulis dengan melengkapi teks rumpang.
3. Peserta didik membacakan teks lisan dari deskriptif teks gambar berseri
tentang cerita sederhana (3-4 gambar berurutan) dari guru dengan percaya
diri dan bertanggungjawab.
E. MATERI PEMBELAJARAN
Teks deskriptif melalui gambar berseri berfungsi untuk memudahkan
menggambarkan orang, hewan atau benda.
Struktur teks deskriptif:
Ø Identification Memperkenalkan orang, hewan atau benda yang
akan digambarkan.
Ø Description Gambaran tentang orang, hewan atau benda yang
digambarkan dengan menyebutkan ciri-ciri khusus
atau sifat tertentu.
·
Kata sifat yang dapat mencirikan seseorang: smart, beautiful, handsome,
tall, short, fat, slim, patient, nice, kind, wise, friendly.
· Pendalaman materi:
Ø Adjective, kata sifat yang memodifikasi kata benda (noun)
Contoh : - She is nice and smart.
- Miss Sinta is tall and slim.
Ø Simple present tense
Contoh : - She teaches English.
- The students enjoy her class.
F. METODE PEMBELAJARAN
Pendekatan ilmiah dengan pictures series.
G. MEDIA, ALAT DAN SUMBER BELAJAR
· Media : Gambar berseri yang terdiri dari 3-4 gambar berseri.
· Alat : Gambar dan script teks rumpang.
· Sumber belajar : Buku Bahasa Inggris, When English Rings a Bell, Edisi
Revisi. Jakarta: Kemendikbud RI, 2014.
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H. LANGKAH-LANGKAH PEMBELAJARAN
1. Kegiatan Awal
- Salam
- Tegur sapa
- Memeriksa kehadiran peserta didik
- Mengaitkan materi pembelajaran di pertemuan sebelumnya dengan
materi kegiatan yang akan dipelajari.
2. Kegiatan Inti
- Mengamati
- Disajikan gambar tentang beberapa profesi seperti polisi, petani, dan
dokter. Peserta didik mengamati gambar tersebut, dengan fokus
pengamatan kepada ciri-ciri khusus dan sifat. Guru menanyakan
kepada siswa tentang pekerjaan dan tugas mereka. Mendeskripsikan
pakaian dan tugas mereka.
- Memunculkan suatu gambar berseri sederhana tentang aktivitas
nelayan di pantai. Guru bersama peserta didik mendeskripsikan
gambar demi gambar hingga berbentuk cerita berangkai yang tepat
sesuai gambar.
- Menanya
- Peserta didik bertanya tentang gambar yang sedang ditayangkan (guru
dapat mengajukan pernyataan-pernyataan yang dapat memancing
perhatian peserta didik)
- Mengumpulkan informasi
- Peserta didik diberi pertanyaan yang mengarahkan peserta didik
kepada materi pembelajaran, yaitu ciri-ciri khusus dan sifat dari
pekerjaan seseorang ataupun aktivitas sehari-hari mereka mulai dari
bangun tidur hingga tidur kembali di rumah.
- Mengasosiasi
- Menuliskan deskripsi teks yang menggambarkan aktivitas siswa yang
hendak berangkat ke sekolah (terdiri dari 4 gambar berseri). Guru
menjelaskan maksud dan tujuan dalam pengambilan hasil kemampuan
menulis deskripsi teks peserta didik dengan point-point kategori
nilainya.
- Dibacakan salah satu deskripsi teks dari hasil mengarang siswa
berdasarkan gambar berseri tersebut. Dan bersama-sama siswa
menjelaskan atau menceritakan secara benar maksud dari gambar
berseri terebut.
- Guru menjelaskan point-point penting dalam penilaian menulis
deskripsi teks, sehingga peserta didik mampu meningkatkan
kemampuan menulis deskripsi teks nya.
- Mengkomunikasi
- Salah saru peserta didik membaca nyaring teks deskripsi teks yang
telah dilengkapi dengan jawaban yang benar.
3. Penutup
- Refleksi (kesimpulan kegiatan pembelajaran)
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- Memberitahukan materi untuk pertemuan selanjutnya.
- Salam
I. PENILAIAN
1. Tehnik: Tertulis
2. Bentuk: Deskripsi teks dari gambar berseri
3. Rubrik Penilaian
a. Penilaian Keterampilan
Pedoman Penilaian
- Tabel skala kemampuan menulis
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Content
30-27 Excellent to
Very Good
Knowledge – substantive – thorough
development of thesis – relevant to
assigned topic.
26-22 Good to
Average
Some knowledge of subject –
adequate range – limited
development of thesis –mostly
relevant to topic, but lack detail.
21-17 Fair to Poor
Limited knowledge of subject – little
substance – inadequate development
of topic.
16-13 Very Poor
Does not show knowledge of subject
– non substantive – not pertinent –
OR not enough to evaluate.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Organization
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Fluent expression – ideas clearl
stated/supported – succinct – well
organized – logical sequencing –
cohesive
17-14 Good to
Average
Somewhat choppy – loosely
organized but main ideas stand out –
limited support – logical but
incomplete sequencing.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Non fluent – ideas confused or
disconnected – lacks logical
sequencing and development.
09-07 Very Poor
Does not communicates – no
organization-OR not enough to
evaluate
Vocabulary
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Sophisticated range – effective
word/idiom choice and usage – word
form mastery – appropriate register.
17-14 Good to
Average
Adequate range – occasional errors
of word/idiom form, choice, usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Limited range – frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
09-07 Very Poor
Essentially translation – little
knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form – OR not enough
to evaluate.
Language
Use
25-22 Excellent to
Very Good
Effective complex constructions –
few errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions.
21-18 Good to
Average
Effective but simple constructions –
minor problems in complex
constructions – several errors of
agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
prepositions but meaning seldom
obscured.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
17-11 Fair to Poor
Major problems in simple/ complex
constructions – frequent errors of
negation, agreement, tense, number,
word order/function, articles,
pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions –
meaning confused or obscured.
10-5 Very Poor
Virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules – dominated by
errors –does not communicate – OR
not enough to evaluate.
Mechanics
5 Excellent to
Very Good
Demonstrates mastery of
conventions – few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
4 Good to
Average
Occasional errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing but meaning not
obscured.
3 Fair to Poor
Frequent errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – poor handwriting –
meaning confused or obscured.
2 Very Poor
No mastery of conventions –
dominated by errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – handwriting illegible
– OR not enough to evaluate.
- Nilai peserta didik = skor yang didapat/skor maksimal X 100
b. Penilaian sikap
No. Nama Kriteria Skor
Jakarta, September 2017
Guru Mata Pelajaran,
Eka Rosdiana Putri
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RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
II
A. IDENTITAS
· Satuan Pendidikan : MTS Negeri 33 Jakarta
· Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
· Kelas/Semester : VII/1
· Materi Pokok : Teks Deskriptif
· Keterampilan : Menulis (Writing)
· Alokasi Waktu : 2 x 40 menit
B. KOMPETENSI INTI
· KI 1 : Menghargai dan menghayati ajaran agama yang dianutnya
· KI 2 : Menghargai dan menghayati perilaku jujur, disiplin,
tanggungjawab, peduli (toleransi, gotong royong), santun, percaya diri, dalam
berinteraksi secara efektif dengan lingkungan sosial dan alam dalam jangkauan
pergaulan dan keberadaannya.
· KI 3 : Memahami pengetahuan (faktual, konseptual, dan prosedural)
berdasarkan rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya
terkait fenomena dan kejadian tampak mata.
· KI 4 : Mencoba, mengolah, dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret
(menggunakan, mengurai, merangkai, memodifikasi, dan membuat) dan ranah
abstrak (menulis, membaca, menghitung, menggambar, dan mengarang) sesuai
dengan yang dipelajari di sekolah dan sumber lain yang sama dalam sudut
pandang/teori.
C. KOMPETENSI DASAR DAN INDIKATOR
3. 10. Memahami fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan
dari teks deskriptif dengan
menyatakan dan menanyakan tentang
deskripsi orang, binatang, dan benda,
sangat pendek dan sederhana, sesuai
dengan konteks penggunaannya.
1. Menyebutkan fungsi sosial dan
struktur teks teks deskriptif.
4. 12. Menangkap makna dalam
teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis, sangat
pendek dan sederhana.
2. Mengidentifikaksi informasi
rinci dalam teks lisan berbentuk
deskriptif.
2. 2. Menunjukkan perilaku
jujur, disiplin, percaya diri, dan
bertanggung jawab dalam
melaksanakan komunikasi
transaksional dengan guru dan
teman.
3. Menyebutkan ciri-ciri dan sifat
seseorang dengan percaya diri
menggunakan bahasa inggris yang
berterima.
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D. TUJUAN PEMBELAJARAN
1. Guru mendeskripsikan tentang suatu cerita sederhana, peserta didik dapat
menyebutkan tertulis fungsi sosial dan struktur teks untuk menyusun teks
deskriptif.
2. Guru menceritakan dari suatu cerita sederhana, peserta didik dapat
mengidentifikasi informasi rinci yang terdapat di dalam suatu cerita atau
objek yang menjadi deskripsi tersebut secara tertulis dengan melengkapi
teks rumpang.
3. Peserta didik membacakan teks lisan dari deskriptif teks tentang cerita
sederhana dari guru dengan percaya diri dan bertanggungjawab.
E. MATERI PEMBELAJARAN
Teks deskriptif untuk memudahkan menggambarkan orang, hewan
atau benda.
Struktur teks deskriptif:
Ø Identification Memperkenalkan orang, hewan atau benda yang
akan digambarkan.
Ø Description Gambaran tentang orang, hewan atau benda yang
digambarkan dengan menyebutkan ciri-ciri khusus
atau sifat tertentu.
·
Kata sifat yang dapat mencirikan seseorang: smart, beautiful, handsome,
tall, short, fat, slim, patient, nice, kind, wise, friendly.
· Pendalaman materi:
Ø Adjective, kata sifat yang memodifikasi kata benda (noun)
Contoh : - She is nice and smart.
- Miss Sinta is tall and slim.
Ø Simple present tense
Contoh : - She teaches English.
- The students enjoy her class.
F. METODE PEMBELAJARAN
Pendekatan ilmiah dengan konvensional active method.
G. MEDIA, ALAT DAN SUMBER BELAJAR
· Media : Gambar suatu objek benda, hewan, orang.
· Alat : Gambar dan script teks rumpang.
· Sumber belajar : Buku Bahasa Inggris, When English Rings a Bell, Edisi
Revisi. Jakarta: Kemendikbud RI, 2014.
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H. LANGKAH-LANGKAH PEMBELAJARAN
1. Kegiatan Awal
a. Salam
b. Tegur sapa
c. Memeriksa kehadiran peserta didik
d. Mengaitkan materi pembelajaran di pertemuan sebelumnya dengan
materi kegiatan yang akan dipelajari.
2. Kegiatan Inti
a. Mengamati
Disajikan gambar tentang beberapa profesi seperti polisi, petani, dan
dokter. Peserta didik mengamati gambar tersebut, dengan fokus
pengamatan kepada ciri-ciri khusus dan sifat. Guru menanyakan
kepada siswa tentang pekerjaan dan tugas mereka. Mendeskripsikan
pakaian dan tugas mereka.
Memunculkan suatu gambar tentang aktivitas nelayan di pantai. Guru
bersama peserta didik mendeskripsikan gambar tersebut hingga
berbentuk cerita yang tepat sesuai gambar.
b. Menanya
Peserta didik bertanya tentang gambar yang sedang ditayangkan (guru
dapat mengajukan pernyataan-pernyataan yang dapat memancing
perhatian peserta didik)
c. Mengumpulkan informasi
Peserta didik diberi pertanyaan yang mengarahkan peserta didik
kepada materi pembelajaran, yaitu ciri-ciri khusus dan sifat dari
pekerjaan seseorang ataupun aktivitas sehari-hari mereka mulai dari
bangun tidur hingga tidur kembali di rumah.
d. Mengasosiasi
Menuliskan deskripsi teks yang menggambarkan aktivitas siswa yang
hendak berangkat ke sekolah (terdiri dari 4 paragraf). Guru
menjelaskan maksud dan tujuan dalam pengambilan hasil kemampuan
menulis deskripsi teks peserta didik dengan point-point kategori
penilainya.
Dibacakan salah satu deskripsi teks dari hasil mengarang siswa
berdasarkan instruksi dari guru. Dan bersama-sama siswa menjelaskan
atau menceritakan secara benar maksud dari gambar terebut.
Guru menjelaskan point-point penting dalam penilaian menulis
deskripsi teks, sehingga peserta didik mampu meningkatkan
kemampuan menulis deskripsi teks nya.
e. Mengkomunikasi
Salah saru peserta didik membaca nyaring teks deskripsi teks yang
telah dilengkapi dengan jawaban yang benar.
3. Penutup
a. Refleksi (kesimpulan kegiatan pembelajaran)
b. Memberitahukan materi untuk pertemuan selanjutnya.
c. Salam
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I. PENILAIAN
1. Tehnik: Tertulis
2. Bentuk: Deskripsi teks dan rumpang teks
3. Rubrik Penilaian
i. Penilaian Keterampilan
Pedoman Penilaian
b. Tabel skala kemampuan menulis
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Content
30-27 Excellent to
Very Good
Knowledge – substantive – thorough
development of thesis – relevant to
assigned topic.
26-22 Good to
Average
Some knowledge of subject –
adequate range – limited
development of thesis –mostly
relevant to topic, but lack detail.
21-17 Fair to Poor
Limited knowledge of subject – little
substance – inadequate development
of topic.
16-13 Very Poor
Does not show knowledge of subject
– non substantive – not pertinent –
OR not enough to evaluate.
Organization
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Fluent expression – ideas clearl
stated/supported – succinct – well
organized – logical sequencing –
cohesive
17-14 Good to
Average
Somewhat choppy – loosely
organized but main ideas stand out –
limited support – logical but
incomplete sequencing.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Non fluent – ideas confused or
disconnected – lacks logical
sequencing and development.
09-07 Very Poor
Does not communicates – no
organization-OR not enough to
evaluate
Vocabulary 20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Sophisticated range – effective
word/idiom choice and usage – word
form mastery – appropriate register.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
17-14 Good to
Average
Adequate range – occasional errors
of word/idiom form, choice, usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Limited range – frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
09-07 Very Poor
Essentially translation – little
knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form – OR not enough
to evaluate.
Language
Use
25-22 Excellent to
Very Good
Effective complex constructions –
few errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions.
21-18 Good to
Average
Effective but simple constructions –
minor problems in complex
constructions – several errors of
agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
prepositions but meaning seldom
obscured.
17-11 Fair to Poor
Major problems in simple/ complex
constructions – frequent errors of
negation, agreement, tense, number,
word order/function, articles,
pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions –
meaning confused or obscured.
10-5 Very Poor
Virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules – dominated by
errors –does not communicate – OR
not enough to evaluate.
Mechanics
5 Excellent to
Very Good
Demonstrates mastery of
conventions – few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
4 Good to
Average
Occasional errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing but meaning not
obscured.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
3 Fair to Poor
Frequent errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – poor handwriting –
meaning confused or obscured.
2 Very Poor
No mastery of conventions –
dominated by errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – handwriting illegible
– OR not enough to evaluate.
- Nilai peserta didik = skor yang didapat/skor maksimal X 100
b. Penilaian sikap
No. Nama Kriteria Skor
Jakarta, September 2017
Guru Mata Pelajaran,
Eka Rosdiana Putri
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RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
III
Satuan Pendidikan : MTSN 33 Jakarta
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Kelas/Semester : VII/1
Materi Pokok : Teks Deskriptif (Writing)
Alokasi Waktu : 2 x 40 Menit
A. KOMPETENSI INTI
1. Menanggapi dan mengamalkan ajaran agama yang dianutnya.
2. Menghargai perilaku jujur, disiplin, tanggungjawab, peduli (toleransi,
gotong royong), santun, percaya diri, dalam berinteraksi secara efektif
dengan lingkungan social dan alam dalam jangkauan pergaulan dan
keberadaannya.
3. Memahami pengetahuan (factual, konseptual, dan procedural) berdasarkan
rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya
terkait fenomena dan kejadian tampak mata.
4. Mencoba, mengolah dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret (menggunakan,
mengurai, merangkai, memodifikasi dan membuat) anah abstrak (menulis,
Membaca, menghitung, menggambar dan mengarang) sesuai dengan yang
dipelajari disekolah dan sumber lain yang sama dalam sudut
pandang/teori.
B. KOMPETENSI DAS AR DAN INDIKATOR
1. KOMPETENSI DASAR
3.10 Memahami fungsi sosial, struktur
teks, dan unsur kebahasaan dari teks
deskriptif dengan menyatakan dan
menanyakan tentang deskripsi orang,
binatang, dan benda, sangat pendek dan
sederhana, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya
3.10.1 Mengidentifikasi fungsi social
dari teks deskriptif.
3.10.2 Mengidentifikasi unsur
kebahasaan dari teks deskriptif
3.10.3 Mengidentifikasi struktur teks
dari teks deskritif
4.13 Menyusun teks deskriptif lisan
dan tulis, sangat pendek dan sederhana,
4.13.1 Menulis teks deskriptif tulis
sederhana
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tentang orang, binatang, dan benda,
dengan memperhatikan fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan,
secara benar dan sesuai konteks.
2.3 Menunjukkan perilaku tanggung
jawab, peduli,kerjasama dan cinta
damai, dalam melaksanakan
komunikasi fungsiona
2.3.1 Menunjukkan sikap santun,
bekerja sama , tanggung jawab,
C. TUJUAN PEMBELAJARAN
1. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi fungsi
social dengan benar
2. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi struktur
teks dengan benar
3. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi ciri
kebahasaan dengan benar.
4. Siswa dapat menulis teks deskriptif sederhana dengan unsur kebahasaan
dan struktur teks yang benar
D. MATERI PEMBELAJARAN
Teks deskriptif adalah teks yang menggambarkan orang, binatang, dan
benda, dan lain-lain
Fungsi sosial
Menggambarkan, Membanggakan, mengenalkan, mengidentifikasi, memuji,
mengkritik, dsb.
Struktur text
Generic Structure Sentence
Identification My favorite teacher is Miss Putri.
Description She teaches science.
She is beautiful and slim.
Her skin is white.
She has long and straight hair.
She is a friendly teacher.
She likes reading novels.
Her favorite writer is Andre Hirata.
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Unsur kebahasaan
1. Penyebutan kata benda singular dengan a dan the, dan plural (-s).
2. Kata ganti it, they, she, we, dst.; our, my, your, their, dst.
3. Kata sifat yang sangat lazim, old, fat, tall, short, beautiful, patient, nice, wise,
smart, fat dll.
4. Kata kerja untuk menyatakan keadaan dan tindakan rutin dalam simple present
tense: be, have ,has, like , love, dll.
5. Penggunaan nominal singular dan plural secara tepat, dengan atau tanpa a, the,
this, those, my, their, dsb secara tepat dalam frasa nominal
Topik
Menggambarkan guru untuk memberikan keteladanan tentang perilaku disiplin,
percaya diri, bertanggung jawab, cinta dan kerjasama
E. METODE PEMBELAJARAN
Metode Scientific
Strategi Collaborative writing
F. MEDIA DAN ALAT PEMBELAJARAN
Media : Pictures series
Alat : Poster
Sumber belajar : Buku Bahasa Inggris, When English Rings a bell Kelas 7
Edisi Revisi 2014,hal: 191 - Sumber dari internet : www.esllibrary.com ,
www.googleimages, www.123rf
G. LANGKAH-LANGKAH PEMBELAJARAN
Pendahuluan (5 menit)
- Mengucapkan salam dan berdoa
- Memberikan motivasi dan apersepsi
- Menginformasi tujuan pembelajaran
- Menyampaikan skenario pembelajaran
Kegiatan inti
1. Mengamati (10 menit)
c. Siswa mengamati gambar pada layar dan mendengar contoh
teks deskriptif yang dibacakan oleh guru dengan fungsi social,
struktur teks, unsur kebahasaan teks deskriptif
d. Guru mencatat/menilai aspek sikap dan kesungguhan/keaktifan
siswa.
2. Menanya : (10 menit)
e. Dengan mempertanyakan pengarah dari guru, peserta didik
mempertanyakan tentang fungsi social, struktur teks, unsur
kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
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f. Guru menilai aspek sikap dan kesungguhan/keaktifan siswa.
(10 menit)
3. Mengasosiasi(40 menit)
g. Guru menjelaskan point-point penting dalam menulis karangan
teks deskriptif yang baik dan benar melalui gambar berseri.
h. Memberikan contoh dari gambar berseri sederhana mengenai
aktivitas sehari-hari, misalnya gambar berseri aktivitas
“berkunjung ke rumah nenek di kampung”.
i. Siswa menuliskan kembali teks secara kolaborasi (draft )
j. Siswa merevisi draft
k. Guru memberikan feedback
4. Mengomunikasikan (10 menit)
a. Siswa menulis teks deskriptif sederhana sesuai dengan gambar
berseri yang diperlihatkan oleh guru secara individu
b. Guru mengawasi siswa.
Penutup(10 menit)
c. Guru dan siswa membuat rangkuman/simpulan pelajaran.
d. Melakukan penilaian dan/atau refleksi terhadap kegiatan yang
sudah dilaksanakan secara konsisten dan terprogram.
e. Memberikan tugas, baik tugas individual maupun kelompok
sesuai dengan hasil belajar peserta didik.
f. Menyampaikan rencana pembelajaran pada pertemuan
berikutnya.
H. PENILAIAN HASIL BELAJAR
1. Teknik Penilaian : Tertulis
2. Bentuk : Teks Deskriptif sederhana melalui picture series
3. Instrumen : Write a short descriptive text about activities!
Buatlah suatu karangan deskripsi dari gambar
berikut
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Rubrik Penilaian Aspek Keterampilan:
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Content
30-27 Excellent to
Very Good
Knowledge – substantive – thorough
development of thesis – relevant to
assigned topic.
26-22 Good to
Average
Some knowledge of subject –
adequate range – limited
development of thesis –mostly
relevant to topic, but lack detail.
21-17 Fair to Poor
Limited knowledge of subject – little
substance – inadequate development
of topic.
16-13 Very Poor
Does not show knowledge of subject
– non substantive – not pertinent –
OR not enough to evaluate.
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Organization
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Fluent expression – ideas clearl
stated/supported – succinct – well
organized – logical sequencing –
cohesive
17-14 Good to
Average
Somewhat choppy – loosely
organized but main ideas stand out –
limited support – logical but
incomplete sequencing.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Non fluent – ideas confused or
disconnected – lacks logical
sequencing and development.
09-07 Very Poor
Does not communicates – no
organization-OR not enough to
evaluate
Vocabulary
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Sophisticated range – effective
word/idiom choice and usage – word
form mastery – appropriate register.
17-14 Good to
Average
Adequate range – occasional errors
of word/idiom form, choice, usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Limited range – frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
09-07 Very Poor
Essentially translation – little
knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form – OR not enough
to evaluate.
Language
Use
25-22 Excellent to
Very Good
Effective complex constructions –
few errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions.
21-18 Good to
Average
Effective but simple constructions –
minor problems in complex
constructions – several errors of
agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
prepositions but meaning seldom
obscured.
75
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
17-11 Fair to Poor
Major problems in simple/ complex
constructions – frequent errors of
negation, agreement, tense, number,
word order/function, articles,
pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions –
meaning confused or obscured.
10-5 Very Poor
Virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules – dominated by
errors –does not communicate – OR
not enough to evaluate.
Mechanics
5 Excellent to
Very Good
Demonstrates mastery of
conventions – few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
4 Good to
Average
Occasional errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing but meaning not
obscured.
3 Fair to Poor
Frequent errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – poor handwriting –
meaning confused or obscured.
2 Very Poor
No mastery of conventions –
dominated by errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – handwriting illegible
– OR not enough to evaluate.
Rubrik Penilaian Aspek Sikap
No Aspek yang
No Aspek yang
Dinilai
Kriteria Score
1 Santun
(Respect)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
santun
Sering menunjukan sikap santun
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
santun
Pernah menunjukan sikap santun
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
santun
5
4
3
2
1
2 bertanggungjawab
(responsible)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
bertangungjawab
5
4
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Sering menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Pernah menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
bertanggung
3
2
1
3 Jujur
(honest)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Sering menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Pernah menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
5
4
3
2
1
4 Disiplin
(discipline)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
disiplin
Sering menunjukan sikap disiplin
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
disiplin
Pernah menunjukan sikap disiplin
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
disiplin
5
4
3
2
1
5 Percaya diri
(confidence)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
Sering menunjukan sikap percaya
diri
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
Pernah menunjukan sikap percaya
diri
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
5
4
3
2
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Jakarta, September 2017
Guru Mata Pelajaran,
Eka Rosdiana Putri
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RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
IV
Satuan Pendidikan : MTSN 33 Jakarta
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Kelas/Semester : VII/1
Materi Pokok : Teks Deskriptif (Writing)
Alokasi Waktu : 2 x 40 Menit
A. KOMPETENSI INTI
1. Menanggapi dan mengamalkan ajaran agama yang dianutnya.
2. Menghargai perilaku jujur, disiplin, tanggungjawab, peduli (toleransi,
gotong royong), santun, percaya diri, dalam berinteraksi secara efektif
dengan lingkungan social dan alam dalam jangkauan pergaulan dan
keberadaannya.
3. Memahami pengetahuan (factual, konseptual, dan procedural) berdasarkan
rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya
terkait fenomena dan kejadian tampak mata.
4. Mencoba, mengolah dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret (menggunakan,
mengurai, merangkai, memodifikasi dan membuat) anah abstrak (menulis,
Membaca, menghitung, menggambar dan mengarang) sesuai dengan yang
dipelajari disekolah dan sumber lain yang sama dalam sudut
pandang/teori.
B. KOMPETENSI DAS AR DAN INDIKATOR
1. KOMPETENSI DASAR
3.10 Memahami fungsi sosial, struktur
teks, dan unsur kebahasaan dari teks
deskriptif dengan menyatakan dan
menanyakan tentang deskripsi orang,
binatang, dan benda, sangat pendek dan
sederhana, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya
3.10.1 Mengidentifikasi fungsi social
dari teks deskriptif.
3.10.2 Mengidentifikasi unsur
kebahasaan dari teks deskriptif
3.10.3 Mengidentifikasi struktur teks
dari teks deskritif
4.13 Menyusun teks deskriptif lisan
dan tulis, sangat pendek dan sederhana,
tentang orang, binatang, dan benda,
4.13.1 Menulis teks deskriptif tulis
sederhana
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dengan memperhatikan fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan,
secara benar dan sesuai konteks.
2.3 Menunjukkan perilaku tanggung
jawab, peduli,kerjasama dan cinta
damai, dalam melaksanakan
komunikasi fungsiona
2.3.1 Menunjukkan sikap santun,
bekerja sama , tanggung jawab,
C. TUJUAN PEMBELAJARAN
1. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi fungsi
social dengan benar
2. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi struktur
teks dengan benar
3. Diberikan teks deskriptif sederhana siswa dapat mengidentifikasi ciri
kebahasaan dengan benar.
4. Siswa dapat menulis teks deskriptif sederhana dengan unsur kebahasaan
dan struktur teks yang benar
D. MATERI PEMBELAJARAN
Teks deskriptif adalah teks yang menggambarkan orang, binatang, dan
benda, dan lain-lain
Fungsi sosial
Menggambarkan, Membanggakan, mengenalkan, mengidentifikasi, memuji,
mengkritik, dsb.
Struktur text
Generic Structure Sentence
Identification My favorite teacher is Miss Putri.
Description She teaches science.
She is beautiful and slim.
Her skin is white.
She has long and straight hair.
She is a friendly teacher.
She likes reading novels.
Her favorite writer is Andre Hirata.
79
Unsur kebahasaan
1. Penyebutan kata benda singular dengan a dan the, dan plural (-s).
2. Kata ganti it, they, she, we, dst.; our, my, your, their, dst.
3. Kata sifat yang sangat lazim, old, fat, tall, short, beautiful, patient, nice,
wise, smart, fat dll.
4. Kata kerja untuk menyatakan keadaan dan tindakan rutin dalam simple
present tense: be, have ,has, like , love, dll.
5. Penggunaan nominal singular dan plural secara tepat, dengan atau tanpa a,
the, this, those, my, their, dsb secara tepat dalam frasa nominal
Topik
Menggambarkan guru untuk memberikan keteladanan tentang perilaku disiplin,
percaya diri, bertanggung jawab, cinta dan kerjasama
E. METODE PEMBELAJARAN
Metode Scientific
Strategi Collaborative writing
F. MEDIA DAN ALAT PEMBELAJARAN
Media : gambar objek orang, hewan atau benda
Alat : Poster
Sumber belajar : Buku Bahasa Inggris, When English Rings a bell Kelas 7
Edisi Revisi 2014,hal: 191 - Sumber dari internet : www.esllibrary.com ,
www.googleimages, www.123rf
G. LANGKAH-LANGKAH PEMBELAJARAN
Pendahuluan
- Mengucapkan salam dan berdoa
- Memberikan motivasi dan apersepsi
- Menginformasi tujuan pembelajaran
- Menyampaikan skenario pembelajaran
Kegiatan inti
Mengamati
- Siswa membaca /mendengarkan/ menonton berbagai macam teks
deskriptif dengan menyatakan dan menanyakan tentang deskripsi orang,
binatang, dan benda, sangat pendek dan sederhana.
- Siswa memperhatikan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, unsur kebahasaan,
maupun format penyampaian/penulisan teks deskriptif
- Siswa belajar membaca cepat untuk mendapatkan gambaran umum dari
teks (skimming) dan menentukan jeda pada tempatnya untuk membaca
dengan bermakna
Mempertanyakan
- Dengan bimbingan dan arahan guru, siswa mempertanyakan antara lain
perbedaan antar berbagai teks deskriptif, dalam bahasa Inggris,
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perbedaannya dengan yang ada dalam bahasa Indonesia, kemungkinan
menggunakan ungkapan lain, dsb.
- Siswa mempertanyakan cara menemukan gagasan pokok, informasi
tertentu, informasi rinci dan kesimpulan dalam teks deskriptif.
Mengeksplorasi
- Siswa membaca/mendengarkan beberapa teks deskriptif dari berbagai
sumber.
- Siswa membacakan teks deskriptif kepada teman dengan menggunakan
unsur kebahasaan yang tepat
- Siswa berlatih menemukan gagasan utama, informasi tertentu dan makna
kata dalam teks deskriptif.
- Siswa secara berkelompok menuliskan teks deskriptif tentang orang,
binatang, dan benda, terkait dengan mata pelajaran lain di Kelas VII
dengan memperhatikan fungsi sosial, struktur, dan unsur kebahasaan
Mengasosiasi
- Secara berpasangan siswa saling menganalisis teks deskriptif yang tulis
dengan fokus pada fungsi sosial, struktur, dan unsur kebahasaan.
- Siswa memperoleh balikan (feedback) dari guru dan teman tentang hasil
analisis yang disampaikan dalam kerja kelompok.
Mengomunikasikan
- Siswa menuliskan deskripsi teman teman sebangkunya dan
mempresentasikan di depan kelas.
- Siswa membuat jurnal belajar (learning journal)Penutup(10 menit)
- Guru dan siswa membuat rangkuman/simpulan pelajaran.
- Melakukan penilaian dan/atau refleksi terhadap kegiatan yang sudah
dilaksanakan secara konsisten dan terprogram.
- Memberikan tugas, baik tugas individual maupun kelompok sesuai dengan
hasil belajar peserta didik.
- Menyampaikan rencana pembelajaran pada pertemuan berikutnya.
Penutup:
- Guru dan siswa membuat rangkuman/simpulan pelajaran.
- Melakukan penilaian dan/atau refleksi terhadap kegiatan yang sudah
dilaksanakan secara konsisten dan terprogram.
- Memberikan tugas, baik tugas individual maupun kelompok sesuai dengan
hasil belajar peserta didik.
- Menyampaikan rencana pembelajaran pada pertemuan berikutnya.
H. PENILAIAN HASIL BELAJAR
1. Teknik Penilaian : Tertulis
2. Bentuk : Teks Deskriptif sederhana
3. Instrumen : Write a short descriptive text about activities!
Buatlah suatu karangan deskripsi dari gambar
berikut
81
Rubrik Penilaian Aspek Keterampilan:
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Content
30-27 Excellent to
Very Good
Knowledge – substantive – thorough
development of thesis – relevant to
assigned topic.
26-22 Good to
Average
Some knowledge of subject –
adequate range – limited
development of thesis –mostly
relevant to topic, but lack detail.
21-17 Fair to Poor
Limited knowledge of subject – little
substance – inadequate development
of topic.
16-13 Very Poor
Does not show knowledge of subject
– non substantive – not pertinent –
OR not enough to evaluate.
Organization
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Fluent expression – ideas clearl
stated/supported – succinct – well
organized – logical sequencing –
cohesive
17-14 Good to
Average
Somewhat choppy – loosely
organized but main ideas stand out –
limited support – logical but
incomplete sequencing.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Non fluent – ideas confused or
disconnected – lacks logical
sequencing and development.
09-07 Very Poor
Does not communicates – no
organization-OR not enough to
evaluate
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Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
Vocabulary
20-18 Excellent to
Very Good
Sophisticated range – effective
word/idiom choice and usage – word
form mastery – appropriate register.
17-14 Good to
Average
Adequate range – occasional errors
of word/idiom form, choice, usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
13-10 Fair to Poor
Limited range – frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice usage –
meaning confused or obscured.
09-07 Very Poor
Essentially translation – little
knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form – OR not enough
to evaluate.
Language
Use
25-22 Excellent to
Very Good
Effective complex constructions –
few errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions.
21-18 Good to
Average
Effective but simple constructions –
minor problems in complex
constructions – several errors of
agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
prepositions but meaning seldom
obscured.
17-11 Fair to Poor
Major problems in simple/ complex
constructions – frequent errors of
negation, agreement, tense, number,
word order/function, articles,
pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions –
meaning confused or obscured.
10-5 Very Poor
Virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules – dominated by
errors –does not communicate – OR
not enough to evaluate.
Mechanics
5 Excellent to
Very Good
Demonstrates mastery of
conventions – few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
4 Good to
Average
Occasional errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing but meaning not
83
Scoring
Element Scale Quality Description
obscured.
3 Fair to Poor
Frequent errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – poor handwriting –
meaning confused or obscured.
2 Very Poor
No mastery of conventions –
dominated by errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing – handwriting illegible
– OR not enough to evaluate.
Rubrik Penilaian Aspek Sikap
No Aspek yang
No Aspek yang
Dinilai
Kriteria Score
1 Santun
(Respect)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
santun
Sering menunjukan sikap santun
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
santun
Pernah menunjukan sikap santun
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
santun
5
4
3
2
1
2 bertanggungjawab
(responsible)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
bertangungjawab
Sering menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Pernah menunjukan sikap
bertanggungjawab
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
bertanggung
5
4
3
2
1
3 Jujur
(honest)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Sering menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
Pernah menunjukan sikap
5
4
3
2
1
84
kerjasama
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
kerjasama
4 Disiplin
(discipline)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
disiplin
Sering menunjukan sikap disiplin
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
disiplin
Pernah menunjukan sikap disiplin
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
disiplin
5
4
3
2
1
5 Percaya diri
(confidence)
Sangat sering menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
Sering menunjukan sikap percaya
diri
Beberapa kali menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
Pernah menunjukan sikap percaya
diri
Tidak pernah menunjukan sikap
percaya diri
5
4
3
2
1
Jakarta, Oktober 2017
Guru Mata Pelajaran,
Eka Rosdiana Putri
85
APPENDIX 3
The Students’ Scores of Experimental Class (X)
Pre-Test Post-Test Gained
Student Score Score Score
1 69 80 11
2 60 72 12
3 55 65 10
4 62 70 8
5 60 74 14
6 61 72 11
7 60 73 13
8 55 66 11
9 61 72 11
10 56 66 10
11 56 70 14
12 55 69 14
13 62 70 8
14 56 70 14
15 60 71 11
16 67 77 10
17 64 74 10
18 52 72 20
19 67 77 10
20 50 65 15
21 54 69 15
22 52 68 16
23 58 68 10
24 63 73 10
25 56 69 13
26 64 71 7
27 57 67 10
28 55 65 10
29 60 72 12
30 60 73 13
31 68 85 17
32 68 75 7
33 65 75 10
34 70 78 8
35 62 72 10
36 62 72 10
37 66 75 9
F=37 60.22 71.68
424
86
The Students’ Scores of Controlled Class (Y)
Pre-Test
Post-
Test Gained
Student Score Score Score
1 67 77 10
2 64 74 10
3 62 67 5
4 59 69 10
5 65 75 10
6 60 69 9
7 63 73 10
8 69 70 1
9 59 69 10
10 57 61 4
11 57 67 10
12 56 64 8
13 57 67 10
14 55 66 11
15 57 67 10
16 67 77 10
17 62 72 10
18 61 70 9
19 64 74 10
20 60 70 10
21 61 68 7
22 55 65 10
23 60 63 3
24 60 68 8
25 61 68 7
26 55 66 11
27 54 64 10
28 58 66 8
29 69 72 3
30 59 69 10
31 56 59 3
32 56 61 5
33 58 62 4
34 60 70 10
35 62 72 10
36 74 78 4
37 63 73 10
F=37 60.59 68.70 300
87
APPENDIX 4
The Result of Test Normality and Test of Homogeneity
Normality of Pretest Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Tests of Normality
Class
Kolmogorov-Smirnova Shapiro-Wilk
Statistic df Sig. Statistic df Sig.
Score_PreTest Experimental .116 37 .200* .971 37 .448
Controlled .120 37 .200* .937 37 .036
*. This is a lower bound of the true significance.
a. Lilliefors Significance Correction
Normality of Post-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Tests of Normality
Class
Kolmogorov-Smirnova Shapiro-Wilk
Statistic df Sig. Statistic df Sig.
Score_PostTest Experimental .119 37 .200* .952 37 .111
Controlled .093 37 .200* .984 37 .868
*. This is a lower bound of the true significance.
a. Lilliefors Significance Correction
Homogeneity of Pretest Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Test of Homogeneity of Variances
Score_PreTest
Levene Statistic df1 df2 Sig.
1.053 1 72 .308
Homogeneity of Post-Test Result between Experimental and Controlled Class
Test of Homogeneity of Variances
Score_PostTest
Levene Statistic df1 df2 Sig.
.450 1 72 .505
88
APPENDIX 5
The Result of T-Test Calculation
Group Statistics
Class N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error Mean
Score Experimental 37 71.6757 4.32727 .71140
Controlled 37 68.7027 4.65394 .76510
Independent Sample Test of Gained Score
Independent Samples Test
Levene's Test for
Equality of
Variances t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t df
Sig. (2-
tailed)
Mean
Differe
nce
Std. Error
Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of
the
Difference
Lowe
r
Uppe
r
Score Equal
variances
assumed
.450 .505 2.846 72 .006 2.9729
7 1.04473
.8903
3
5.055
61
Equal
variances
not
assumed
2.846 71.622 .006 2.9729
7 1.04473
.8901
5
5.055
80
The procedure for completing the formula were as follow:
1. Determining mean of variable X
∑
= 11,459
89
2. Determining mean of variable Y
∑
= 8,108
3. Determining standard of deviation score of variable X
√
=7,87
4. Determining standard of deviation score of variable Y
√
=7,77
5. Determining standard error of mean of variable X
√
√
= 1,312
6. Determining standard error of mean of variable Y
√
√
√
= 1,295
90
7. Determining standard error of different of mean of variable X and Y
√
√
√
√
√
8. Determining to
9. Determining t-table in significance level 5% with df (degree of
freedom)
df = (37+37) – 2
= 74 -2
= 72
The result of the calculation above showed hat to was 1,818 and the degree of
freedom (df) was 72. In addition the value of t-table in the degree of freedom 72
and in significant level 5% was 1,672.
91
APPENDIX 6
Comparison of Students’ Gained Score between Students in
Experimental Class and Controlled Class
Students'
Number
Score x = X- ̅ x
2 y=Y- ̅ x
2
Exp (X) Con (Y)
1 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
2 12 10 0.54 0.292 1.89 3.579
3 10 5 -1.46 2.130 -3.11 9.660
4 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
5 14 10 2.54 6.454 1.89 3.579
6 11 9 -0.46 0.211 0.89 0.795
7 13 10 1.54 2.373 1.89 3.579
8 11 1 -0.46 0.211 -7.11 50.525
9 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
10 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
11 14 10 2.54 6.454 1.89 3.579
12 14 8 2.54 6.454 -0.11 0.012
13 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
14 14 11 2.54 6.454 2.89 8.363
15 11 10 -0.46 0.211 1.89 3.579
16 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
17 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
18 20 9 8.54 72.941 0.89 0.795
19 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
20 15 10 3.54 12.535 1.89 3.579
21 15 7 3.54 12.535 -1.11 1.228
22 16 10 4.54 20.617 1.89 3.579
23 10 3 -1.46 2.130 -5.11 26.093
24 10 8 -1.46 2.130 -0.11 0.012
25 13 7 1.54 2.373 -1.11 1.228
26 7 11 -4.46 19.887 2.89 8.363
27 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
28 10 8 -1.46 2.130 -0.11 0.012
29 12 3 0.54 0.292 -5.11 26.093
30 13 10 1.54 2.373 1.89 3.579
31 17 3 5.54 30.698 -5.11 26.093
32 7 5 -4.46 19.887 -3.11 9.660
33 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
34 8 10 -3.46 11.968 1.89 3.579
35 10 10 -1.46 2.130 1.89 3.579
36 10 4 -1.46 2.130 -4.11 16.877
37 9 10 -2.46 6.049 1.89 3.579
∑ 424 300 0.00 291.189 0.00 287.568