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Writing project

Slides 1 – 5 = Class 1: Intro & Task 1 Slide 6 = Class 1: Task 2 Slide 7 – 9 = Class 2: Tasks 3 - 5 Slide 10 – 11 = Homework: Task 6 - 7

Introduction to paraphrasing & quoting

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What similarities do you notice?

What differences do you notice?

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Aspects to consider

Uniforms Individually-chosen clothing

Effects on parents

Effects on teachers

Effects on students

Task 1: Pre-writing – brainstormingOn one blog, work with your partner to brainstorm ideas for this chart. You can copy this chart from here. Publish it one with title = “Uniforms – brainstorm”; category = “prep”; tag = “uniforms”. Link to this post on the other blog in a post with the same information.

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Task 2: Short post• Choose one aspect to compose a

short (1 – 3 paragraph) post about your opinions.

• You and your partner must focus on different aspects.

• Arrange your composition in a logically organised manner.

• Publish your post:title = “Uniforms – draft 1”category = “draft”tag = “uniforms”.

• Your partner will read and use your ideas once published.

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Task 3: Class discussion on paraphrases and quotes1. Look at Zhong’s post “Uniforms – draft 2

”.2. Look at how Zhong has used Kelly’s

ideas.3. Using the Paraphrasing and Quotes

evaluation handout, decide on characteristics of good paraphrasing and quoting with your partner.

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Task 4: Second post with paraphrases and quotesYou will write an extended post on uniforms by incorporating your “draft 1” and ideas from your partner’s “draft 1”. To do this:

a. Read your partner’s “draft 1” post.b. Highlight 3 ideas (sentences or phrases) that you

would like to use in your post.c. Paraphrase 2 of your partner’s ideas and quote the

3rd in the body of your post where appropriate.d. Write your new essay in a new post:

title = “Uniforms – draft 2”category = “drafts”tag = “uniforms”

e. Reference these like in the Zhong and Kelly examples by linking to that post.

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Task 5: Evaluating your partner’s paraphrases and use of quotes.

a)Read your partner’s “Uniforms – draft 2” post. Look at the hyperlinked sections specifically. Find the sentence or phrase that your partner has attempted to use.

b)Using the Paraphrasing and Quoting evaluation we created in class, discuss your partner’s use of your ideas.

c) Leave your suggestions as a comment on the post.*

* May be completed for homework.

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Task 6: Rewrite into a final copy. (homework)

Using suggestions from your partner’s comments, rewrite your “Uniforms – draft 2” into a new post:title = “Uniforms – final”category = “finals”tag = “uniforms”

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Task 7: Reflecting (homework)After you have received feedback on your post “Uniforms – final” from the instructor, create a new post reflecting on the following questions:1. What did you learn from this project? Why

is it important?2. What was the most time-consuming part?

Why?3. How was feedback from your partner and

instructor helpful (or not)? Why?4. What do you need to improve for the next

project?

title = “Uniforms – reflection”category = “reflection”tag = “uniforms”