wwi dbq issues miss buffalino. intro can not use any of the ap’s historical context. first...
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WWI DBQ Issues
Miss Buffalino
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Intro
Can not use any of the AP’s historical context.
First sentence should define WWI or explain it.
Thesis needs to have the date and the 3 groupings.
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CONTENT
Stop with the fluff! Stick to chronological order. Your groupings need to make sense and
there needs to be a common thread. GET TO THE POINT.
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Groupings
You can have two in a group, you can have four in a group, YOU CAN’T HAVE ONE ALONE IN A GROUP!
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Silly Things
Military is not the same as militarism BIASED, many of you had poor grammar
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Document Citations
The reader should not have to look back at the document.
– The alliance system was a major cause of WWI (Document A). The alliance map portrayed is from the perspective of a modern day cartographer. The map is biased because it does not include all of the countries that truly fought in WWI.
YOU CAN ONLY CITE ONE DOCUMENT AT A TIME.
– Some people did (Documents 1, 2, 3, 4) You can not repeat documents. YOU MUST USE ALL DOCUMENTS.
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Missing Voice
Can not be anywhere in the DBQ 3 DIFFERENT MISSING VOICES Must be relevant
– Women for their input on militarism makes no sense.
EXPLAIN WHY THE SOURCE IS NEEDED