What is the Point?

Punctuation

Part 2:

Parenthesis

Parenthesis

Parenthesis: placing a part of a sentence between a pair of such punctuation marks

as commas, dashes, and brackets, to show that they are asides or interruptions in the normal flow of text.

Parenthesis

You can use a pair of commas, a pair of dashes or a pair of brackets.

Commas, Brackets, Dashes

The register of the prose is affected by the choice of the punctuation:

- Commas are most commonly used.- Brackets tend to be used in formal writing.- Dashes tend to be used in informal writing.- There is, however, no fixed rule about the

register and the punctuation marks used. You need to think and decide whether or not the register has been affected.

Commas

Commas are most commonly used.

If commas are functioning as parenthesis:

• there will be two of them

• the sentence would make sense if the reader skipped over the parenthesis.

Comma Example

“A handwritten note, scribbled in green ink, was taped firmly across the letterbox.”

Commas are used as the register is not markedly formal or informal.

The sentence would make sense without the parentheses: “A handwritten note was taped firmly across the letterbox”

Brackets

Brackets tend to be used in formal writing.

If brackets are functioning as parenthesis:

• there will be two of them

• the sentence would make sense if the reader skipped over the parenthesis.

Brackets example

“The court should know that Michael Smith (the defendant) has up until now always been thought of as one of Lightwater High School’s best students.”

Brackets are used as the sentence is formal.

The sentence would make sense if the parenthesis was skipped over.

Dashes

• Dashes tend to be used in informal writing.

If dashes are functioning as parenthesis:

• there will be two of them

• the sentence would make sense if the reader skipped over the parenthesis.

Dashes Example

“Well, it was like this : the lads who had come off the trip – some of them as young as thirteen - had just got a bit bored with waiting…”

Dashes have been used as the sentence is conversational and informal.

The sentence would make sense if the parenthesis was skipped over.

Summary so far

• There are three ways to punctuate with parenthesis.

• There will always be a pair of punctuation marks.

• The sentence would make sense without the parenthesis.

But what is the POINT?

The POINT of PARENTHESIS

• To add in additional information.

• To make an aside to the reader.

• To alter the tone of the prose.

Example

“The publishers of ‘Mad About Boys’ – a candidly-titled magazine aimed at nine-to 12-year-old girls - must have been weeping into their spreadsheets last week.”

Dashes are used as parenthesisDashes are appropriate as the tone is informal.The parenthesis includes the additional

information the reader needs. It explains what “Mad About Boys” is.

Okay, but be more specific!

What is the IMPACT of the parenthesis?“The publishers of ‘Mad About Boys’ – a candidly-titled

magazine aimed at nine-to 12-year-old girls - must have been weeping into their spreadsheets last week.”

The information included between the brackets tells the reader the specific genre and target audience of the publication. The dashes help to lighten the tone, before the image of the publishers crying in their beds. By including the additional information, the writer seems to liken the publishers to their audience. This creates an amusing, if slightly cruel image.

Example

“Some third world farmers throw their lot in with Western Corporations (farming is the modern imperialism) or else work for slave wages.”

Brackets are used as parenthesis.Brackets are appropriate as the passage is

formal.The brackets contain an

observation/opinion.

Okay, but be more specific!

“Some third world farmers throw their lot in with Western Corporations (farming is the modern imperialism) or else work for slave wages.”

The information included in the brackets tells the reader that it is through farming that the West dominates and controls other countries. The brackets, being more formal, show that a serious opinion is being given. The reader is made aware that the writer feels that the third world farmers have no real choice: they must submit to the control of the West, or lose out financially.

Example

“How about Mills and Boon? Where do you draw the line between literature and (not to put too a fine point on it) crap?”

Brackets are used as parenthesis.

Brackets are surprising as the language is informal.

The brackets contain a qualification.

Okay, but be more specific!

“How about Mills and Boon? Where do you draw the line between literature and (not to put too a fine point on it) crap?”

The brackets contain a warning that an unrefined or crude word is going to be used. This is given as an aside to the reader. The writer perhaps felt that an unqualified comparison of “literature” and “crap” would be too stark. The impact of this is to let the reader know that the writer is aware that the word is distasteful, rather than that they are uncouth.

Your turn. Analyse this:

“Why this parade of grief over George Best? What does it mean? The answer – the infernally complex answer – is also simple at heart. We weren’t doing it for him; we were doing it for us. We were treating ourselves to a “Diana” moment.”

• What is the IMPACT of the parenthesis?

Your turn. Again.

“Yet the truth is that little girls – however grossly unpalatable it might be to adult tastes – love nothing more than caking themselves in unsuitable make up, and tramping around in outsized high-heeled shoes.”

What is the IMPACT of the parenthesis?

Last one:

“In a world beset with social trends surveys which are almost invariably gloomy – mental ill-health, cancer rates, pensions, divorce, school standards; you name it, things are getting worse – this is one of the sunniest things I have read in months, Quite simply, we are getting kinder to each other.”

What is the IMPACT of the parenthesis?

SO…

The point of parenthesis (that I have tried to explain) is to help the reader – that is, you – to understand (yeah, like that’s gonna happen) many possible things. The parenthesis (like, brackets and stuff) can clarify details, alter the tone and help the reader to understand the writer’s personality (what a worry!) among other things. Remember to be specific! (Yes, I know you know…)