tuesdayeng100bc peerreview arguments anbibs commonlyabusedwordsandphrases
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In groupsWhat are the criteria for a good cause &
Effect essay?What are the criteria for a good processanalysis essay?
Analyze the sample essaysRank in order from best to worst
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Exchange essay with a peerComplete peer review sheet
Return both to author
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What is the difference between arguing andpersuading?Both thesis, statement of purpose/position,seek to move audience to particular course ofaction
Argument seeks to win over audience byappealing to reasonPersuasion seeks to win over audience byappealing to emotions, feelings, prejudices,and beliefsRare to find one strategy without use of otherWhich is more beneficial in a research-basedessay?
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How do you analyze your audience?Answer the following questions:
Who are my readers? What do they already know about this subject? How interested are they likely to be? How impartial or prejudiced are they going to be? Is my subject one that strongly challenges their lifestyle
or their ethical or moral beliefs and values? What values do my readers share with me? What types of evidence are most likely to be effective
with them? Is my plan for requested agreement or action
reasonable?
Anticipate and prepare for audiences objections
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What does it take to convince a reader?In some cases, nothing will persuade yourreader; It is a win if opponents can see yourpoint even if they cant agree
Present a fair, logical argumentSupply factual evidenceAppeal to readers emotions and values
Be fair, reasonable, and credibleDo not use unfair or inflammatory language, faultylogic, and biased or distorted evidence
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How do you connect your thesis and yourevidence in an argument?The claim (thesis)The data (evidence or support for thesis)The warrant (the assumptions that connectthe thesis and evidence
Also referred to as Toulmins model
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How do you make sure that your argument islogical?Avoid logical fallacies:
Ad hominem
Ad populum Appeal to unqualified authority Begging the question Either-or Faulty analogy Hasty generalization Non sequitur oversimplification
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How do you structure an argument?Inductive
Moves from specific evidence to generalizedconclusion
Can arouse readers interest
Deductive Starts with a general truth or assumption and movesto provide evidence or support
Immediately announces thesis so it can quicklyalienate reader
Syllogism Three-step argument involving a major premise, a
minor premise, and a conclusion Nothing is ever this simple
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How do you revise an A or P essay?Understanding or respecting youropposition
Decide which points to concede and which to
refuteBeing honest and fair Is the information fair and accurate? Is your language free from inflammatory words
and phrases?Ending forcefully
Conclusion completes the stand/position andremains in readers minds
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Choose one of the topicsList all the prosList all the consAnalyze your audienceList the evidence you will use in your
argument. What are you going to look for?
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You are not writing an actual essayYou are writing an annotatedbibliography
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Forces to read each source morecarefully and criticallyHelp one gain a good perspective onwhat has and is being said about topic
Helps clarify issues, current arguments, anddevelop personal view
Helps other researchers
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Bibliographic information of sourcefollows either MLA or APA style guides
Annotations for each source are writtenin paragraph form
http:// owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614 /
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/614/ -
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create an annotated bibliographyregarding a controversial issue in whicha strong stance or position is research-
basedFive sourcesAnnotations
Quotes
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I. Thesis statement
II. Citations & AnnotationsA. Citation #11. Reason #1 (why are you using this
source?)a. explanationb. explanation
2. Reason #2a. explanationb. explanation
3. Reason #3a. explanationb. explanation
Complete for all 5 citations
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1. Literally2. its3. Supposebly
4. Cancelled5. Exceptable6. 360 degrees7. I could care less8. Irregardless9. For all intensive purposes10. Sherbert
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Affect can be used as a noun in psychology.Psychologists know that one can never really
understand what someone else is feeling;one can only know how they appear to be
feeling.She displayed a happy affect.
Effect can be used as a verb meaning tobring about or to accomplish.
Aardvark hoped to effect change within theburrow.
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The cat ___ in the mud after it rainedyesterday.
layMary forcefully ___ her ring on the table.laidDean has ___ on the floor for days.lainThe cat has ___ in the mud for hours.lain
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LoseOpposite of win, to misplace
Dont lose your mind.Loose
Not tightThe burglars pants were so loose that he
couldnt run faster than the cop.
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thenUsed for time
First I stole a panda bear, then we drankmalt liquor together.
thanUsed for comparison
Im much better at holding my liquor thana panda bear.
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It was dark, ___ there was a screamthenMoney is better ___ poverty, if only for
financial reasons (Woody Allen)thanRussia is even more spacious ___ Canada.thanShe used to holiday in Sri Lanka as it was ___
known.then
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WeatherSnow, rain, sunshine, typhoonsWithstand, endure
In Ireland, you will experience multiple
types of weather everyday.
whether
Expressing a doubt or choice betweenalternativesWhen I was in Ireland, I couldnt decide
whether to go home or stay.
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Sit/sat/sittingTo be seated or come to a restingposition
I sat in my favorite chair.
Set/set/settingTo put or place
I set my glass on the table.
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***hint replace set with putWe were surprised by the beautiful gift-
wrapped package ___ on our bed.settingThe flowers were ___ on the table and the
mens tuxes were draped over chairs.settingSuki ___ in her office and paints her nails.sits
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All readyprepared
Dinner was all ready when the guestsarrived.
alreadyBy this time
The ham was already burned when theguests arrived.
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Jillian is ___.All readyWhen they pulled the shark up in the net, it
was ___ dead.alreadyIt is ___ illegal to culture human-animal
embryos for more than fourteen days.already
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ApartTo be separated
My old car fell apart before we reachedCalifornia.
A partTo be joined with
A part of this plan involves rising at dawn.
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PullTo extract, possibly in a quick way
He pulled the data from the system.
PoolTo share
Several people possess the data and must pool it together to create a singulardocument.
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OfComing from, caused by, part of agroup, made from (preposition)
The leader of the band played bass guitar
HaveTo possess
I should have started studying earlier.
***it is NEVER should of, could of, would of
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Essay #3 due
Read Chapter 10 The Research Paper