10.13 eng101fa15 peerreview comparativeanalyses apostrophes whowhom
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Eng101_FA15APOSTROPHES
WHO/WHOM
PEER REVIEW COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS
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Apostrophe
Only 2 uses1. ownership
2. omission
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Apostrophe Ownership
Use possessive nouns to show that someone ownsomething
◦That is the nose of Mary.
◦That is Mary’s nose.
◦Those are the toes of Gary.◦Those are Gary’s toes.
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Apostrophe Ownership
Use posessive nouns to show that someone owns◦Moses’ tablets
◦ Achilles’ heel
◦ Jesus’ parables or Jesus’s parables
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Apostrophe Ownership
If 2 people own the same thing, use an apostrophthe second person
◦The marriage of Jim and Mimi
◦ Jim and Mimi’s marriage
◦The father of Kate and Meg◦Kate and Meg’s father
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Apostrophe Ownership
If the noun is already plural (boys) just add an apo◦One boy and one car
◦The boy’s car
◦Two boys and two cars
◦The boys’ cars
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Apostrophe Omission
Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦10 o’clock
◦‘93
◦Let’s
◦It’s
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Apostrophe Omission
Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦Both boy’s and girl’s are invited to try out for the
team.
◦Tomato’s are for sale.
◦I grew up in the 1990’s.◦There are three 9’s on this page.
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Apostrophe Omission
The rule about letters and apostrophes...◦Mississippi is spelled with four s’s, four I’s, and tw
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Who VS Whom
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Who vs. Whom
I love you.
Subject is the person doing somethingI am performing the love; therefore I am the subject
Object is having something done to them
You are the object of my affection
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Who vs. Whom
Use who when referring to the subject of a clause
Who loves you?
I think it was Thomas Jefferson who was the third presidentthe United States.
Use whom when referring to the object of a clause
Whom do you love?
Mrs. Dimwit consulted an astrologer whom she met in Seat(She met him in Seattle.)
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Who vs. Whom
He/Him trick
Him and whom both end with the letter m
When trying to choose between who or whom, ask if theanswer to the question would be he or him
Who (or whom) do you love?
Answer is I love him, so whom is correct
Who (or whom) broke his heart ?
Answer is She broke his heart , so who is correct
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Who vs. Whom Practice
1. Joe is the chef (who/whom) cooked that fabulous stir fry.
Who
2. (Who/Whom) is that for?
Whom
3. Joyce is the girl (who/whom) got the job.
Who
4. I decided to vote for (whoever/whomever) called me first.
Whoever5. Into the dark apartment walked David, (who/whom) we nearly killed withsurprise when everyone shouted “Happy Birthday” and jumped from behinfurniture.
Whom
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Who vs. Whom Extra Practice
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The good doctor’s newsletters...
RememberPossession
Omission
Who if next word is a verb
Whom if next word is not a verb
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Comparative Analyses
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Discuss sample essay
Decide the criteria for a good comparative an
Rate essays from best to worst
Write order on board
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ach body paragraph should…
* Identify element (topic sentence)
* summarize part of essay illustrating that element
* give direct text from essay (quote)
* Explain how this example shows the element’s effectiven
* summarize part of essay illustrating that element
* give direct text from essay (quote)
* Explain how this example shows the element’s effectiven
* Revisit identification of element (concluding sentence)
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Works Cited page
A Work in an Anthology, Reference, or Collection
Works may include an essay in an edited collection or anthology, or a chapterbasic form is for this sort of citation is as follows:
Lastname, First name. "Title of Essay." Title of Collection. Ed. Editor's Name(s
Publication: Publisher, Year. Page range of entry. Medium of Publicatio
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Peer Review Comparative Analysi
On peer review sheet, write
Reviewed by: (insert your name)
Summary author: (peer’s name)
Exchange essays.
Read the essay and complete the peer review sheet.Give both to author (your peer).
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For Thursday…
Read Chapter 14 (causal [pgs 232-246])
DUE DATE CHANGE!!!
Comparative Analysis essay due Tuesday, October 20
Order of materials for submission –
rubric, final copy, prewrite (freewrite done in class, notes owritten for homework and class discussions), plan (outline)peer review