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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
Lesson Starter
• What do you think was the main reason why women were given the right to vote? Explain your answer.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• This question will appear in one section in your final exam
• You are expected to write a structured answer for this question
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• This means it should have a beginning, middle and end:
• INTRODUCTION
• MAIN BODY
• CONCLUSION
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• For example:
• How important were improved housing conditions in increasing the life expectancy of people in Britain?
8 marks
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• How important were improved housing conditions in increasing the life expectancy of people in Britain?
• INTRO – Two short sentences which set the context
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• How important were improved housing conditions in increasing the life expectancy of people in Britain?
• Life expectancy has increased in Britain over the last several years. This is partly because of improved housing conditions but other factors were also important.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• How important were improved housing conditions in increasing the life expectancy of people in Britain?
• The main body of the answer should contain several DEVELOPED POINTS.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• How important were improved housing conditions in increasing the life expectancy of people in Britain?
• You should mention the impact of the issue mentioned in the question as well as other factors.
• Take new paragraphs between each developed point.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• Here is an example of a developed point for the same question:
• Improved housing increased life expectancy greatly. Previously many people lived in cramped slums and shared toilets which caused disease and led to people dying younger. However, the building of new council estates with gardens and open spaces meant that people lived longer and were less likely to die as a result of poor housing conditions.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• Here is an example of a developed point for the same question:
• Although housing was important, other factors had an impact on life expectancy. The introduction of the NHS meant that people could get medical help when they were sick. Previously people couldn't afford to see a doctor. This was a major reason why life expectancy increased in Britain.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• CONCLUSION
• This should summarise your argument in one or two sentences
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
• CONCLUSION
• In conclusion, improved housing conditions increased life expectancy in Britain to a great extent, however other factors especially the introduction of the NHS and improved diet also had a major impact.
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The Credit Eight Mark Essay
How are marks awarded?1 mark for clear structure, i.e. paragraphs.
1 mark for proper intro and conclusion.
1 mark for each “weak point”, two marks for each “developed” point.
So you need three developed points or 6 weak points to get full marks.
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Women Assessment – 8 Mark Essay
Lesson Starter
1. Name the two groups who tried to win the vote for women.
2. What other reason apart from the suffrage movements led to women gaining the vote?
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Women Assessment – 8 Mark Essay
Today
• We will write the first draft of your assessment in your jotter
• You will complete your final draft tomorrow on paper
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• How far was the achievement of the vote by women due to:
a. The actions of the suffrage movements.
OR
b. Women’s efforts during World War One.(8 marks)
After years of waiting women finally gained the vote in 1918.
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• How far was the achievement of the vote by women due to:
a. The actions of the suffrage movements.
OR
b. Women’s efforts during World War One.(8 marks)
How can we plan for
this essay?
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• How far was the achievement of the vote by women due to:
a. The actions of the suffrage movements.
OR
b. Women’s efforts during World War One.(8 marks)
How can we plan for
this essay?Whatever you
choose you can talk
about both the
suffrage
movements and
other factors
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Women - 8 Mark Assessment
• FINAL DRAFT TODAY
• USE DRAFT IN JOTTER TO HELP YOU
• COMPLETE ON LINED PAPER
• EXTENSION – CREATE A POSTER DEMANDING VOTES FOR WOMEN
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Women Assessment Plan
• Introduction -
• Main body
• Conclusion
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Women Assessment Plan
• Introduction – set the scene, one or two sentences
• Main body – Para 1 - Talk about suffragists Para 2 – Talk about the Suffragettes Para 3 – Talk about women in WW1
• Conclusion – Few sentences summing up why you think women achieved the vote
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Introduction
• We will write this as a class.
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Introduction
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Main Body
• Write this part on your own
• Use your plan to remember the three paragraphs
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Main Body
For each paragraph:
Make a POINTEXPLAIN itTry to give an EXAMPLELINK back to the question
PEEL
POINT
EXPLAIN
EXAMPLE
LINK
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Main Body
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Conclusion
• We will write this as a class.
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Conclusion