Teaching With Flair.Abdullah Sujee

Deputy PrincipalRoshnee Islamic SchoolP.O.Box 21313, Roshnee, 1936. 15 Babas Salaam St. Dadaville.Tel. No. (016) 556-1146. Fax. No.: (016) 556-1177. Email: abdullahsuje@telkomsa.net. OR abdullahsujee@hotmail.com

NEW TECHNOLOGIES WILL NOT INVALIDATE EXISTING REASONS FOR LEARNING TO READ AND WRITE.

Reading gives access to knowledge, literary heritage, culture, individual expression and argument.

Writing enables groups and individuals to articulate and reform knowledge express themselves and develop arguments.

Literacy is necessary for effective functioning at work and in society.

Both reading and writing give pleasure and personal fulfilment.

Reading is informed by understanding where texts come from and who has written them, how they are made and why they are made. Writing their own texts helps learners to develop that understanding.NEW TECHNOLOGIES FOR READING AND WRITING HAVE EXTENDED THE CURRICULUM FOR ENGLISH.Students now need opportunities to understand: how the use of word processors, spell checkers and

thesauruses affects the processes involved in the different stages of composition and presentation of text;

how the research opportunities offered by CD-ROM and Internet-based services can be used to support the literature and language;

how the use of electronic sources of information can enhance the processes of comparison and synthesis of information drawn from different texts;

how the use of the Internet extends and changes possibilities for communication with, and publishing for, real audiences across the world.

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ENGLISH FOR TOMORROW, SALLY TWEEDLE ET AL.

Preamble:Given that Education on a global scale is moving to support the move of ‘fast capitalism’ i.e. where minority groups control the means of production in varying degrees of monopoly control thus, creating a mass employment market for skilled professionals and unskilled apprentices, it becomes necessary that we train people to become independent such that they themselves become the ‘movers’ of fast capitalism. In effect, the monopoly of control is then spread across a more broader band of people educated enough to invent new opportunities to satisfy the physiological needs of the masses such that more and more reach self-actualisation thus, prospering their own life through a culture of self-reliance.

– Abdullah Sujee.

MACRO PLANS FOR THE YEAR 2007 AND BEYOND

The year 2007 will see to the broad development of the communicative competence ability that is

manifested in the global economic market. This means that the entire curriculum as suggested in the

interim core-syllabus i.e. NATED 550 (GRADE 9 -12) and with OBE must be used to establish an identity

in the learner with the world outside the classroom that manifests itself broadly on economic strength. In

effect, the learners will be exposed to all facets of the socio-economic development that establishes itself

out of the prevailing economic climate. To this, every Educator of the English subject must see to the

holistic development of the learner by enhancing innate potentials to the betterment of the of the entire

community the learner is part of and the wider world in which he/she will become part of as a result of

socio-economic interaction.

The above will be maintained through a review of the current English Subject Policy and the teaching of the interim core syllabus. To this effect, the current implementation of the Out-Comes Based Education (OBE) will be administered as per department regulation/s and it will be progressed to higher grades. In effect, the FET phase will serve to enhance the aforesaid aspects detailed in the OBE system characterized by the GETC at the end of grade 9. The English Educator will and must use the OBE ideas to effect a change in teaching styles and therefore, change the ethos of the entire idea of schooling for the learner. Teachers will therefore, pursue all types of extra-mural activities that will enhance this idea, examples of which relate to Youth Forums – consult with local newspaper companies, Youth Leadership Courses, Debating, Speeches etc that are managed on professional bases.

When the learner is to be assessed, the Educator will follow the guidelines the Education Department sets out for example, continuous assessment, cluster marking, peer evaluation and the likes. This will enable the Educator and Learner to explore the dimensions of

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self-esteem and esteem of other more holistically. In effect the self-actualization process of the both the Educator and Learner is probed if not reached in varying degrees. In this fashion of interaction we agree with Robert Jeffcoate in his book STARTING ENGLISH TEACHING when he cites John Dixon as correct when he said. ‘ It was an elementary mistake to demand a list of skills, proficiencies and knowledge as the basis of and English curriculum’1. Thus we move to the view of Jeffcoate when he says, ‘ An English Department needs to begin, in my view, by trying to establish which kinds of writing are already catered for already in the curriculum’2. In effect the Educator and Leaner will not necessarily develop a new curriculum in grades 9 -12 to meet the demands of the newly implemented OBE curriculum but will use the current NATED 550 in an innovative way to realise the objects of OBE and the establishment of the FET (Further Education and training Bill) and its objects.

The above will mean that the English Educator will undergo the IQMS i.e. ‘Integrated Quality Management System’ set out by the Education Department and will follow it through in all respects for the purpose of self-development. In effect, the Educator will make use of the INSET (In-service Training) that will be established and provided by the Education Department through the local district offices or, the NGOs the Government allows. This will lead therefore, to the implementation and progress of Quality Assurance that the School will do to improve the School to become a credible service provider of Education rated with a band of criteria set by the Education Department. Thus, Educator development will be an ongoing process. In the private/independent schools these aspects can be tailor-made for the same desired effect.

Therefore, the context of English will mean ‘Our Challenge…will be to exploit the rapidly evolving hardware to present new and improved types of software… to provide with the information they want and need, at the proper time, in the proper form, wherever they need it. The creation and dissemination of the printed word will continue to be part art, part engineering. If we pursue it diligently and intelligently, we will improve the engineering and extend it into areas as yet barely touched on, and we will do so without losing the art. We may even advance it’3

Points to Ponder

“Electronic communications create new opportunities for the readers and writers; multimedia brings together word, moving image and sound. Together they provide new means for the representation and communication of meaning. It seems improbable that electronic texts will ever threaten the primacy of the printed word but it is already evident that the balance between the two is changing. How the English curriculum can reflect this changing situation will be a key question for the next century.” The English classroom therefore, must be dynamic and not static, ‘always on the move’, it should be progressive and in touch with the technological advances that is and will be eventually part of Education. To illustrate the point, ponder on the vignette below keeping in mind the following question: “Is my classroom a springboard to the world outside the world of the classroom?”

1 R.Jeffcoate, ‘Starting English Teaching, pg. 622 Ibid, pg. 1343 Sally Tweedle, etal, English for Tomorrow, pg.5

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Our Aim: Prepare children for the future… ‘Back to the future’ is your classroom, so consider the scenario below… CONSIDER THIS SCENARIO BELOW KEEPING IN MIND THAT ‘BACK TO THE FUTURE’ Is YOUR CLASSROOM.

Time: The Future

Place: A Classroom

Clare handed over the slip of paper reluctantly. It consisted of one line only and read: “http//high.csv.city.ac.uk/WWW/Eng/Hamlet/sjt.html”.

“Its not quite finished, Miss. Can’t I give it in tomorrow?”

“No,” her English teacher replied, glancing at it as she added to her pile.

“You know as well as I do that it’ll never be finished. Today is the deadline and you’ll have to be satisfied with it as it is.” She turned her attention to the rest of the class. “Any more course work pieces?”

Some handed in paper – two to three thousand word essays by the look of them – others disks – multi-media presentations. They had been working on the Hamlet assignment for three weeks now. “Is Shakespeare multi-cultural?” was the broad question they had started with. But each learner refined it to generate his or her own particular focus.

The difference between Clare’s piece and the disk – and paper – base presentations of her classmates was that she could not guarantee that the teacher would be reading the same text she had been working on at home the previous night. Hers was presented on the World-wide Web and, within it; Clare had created links with other texts from around the world. She had incorporated images of costume designs, critiques of productions, brief clips from the movie Hamlet from Russia and Japan and online discussion. And she knew that these were liable to be changed at anytime by their originators. What difference, she wondered, might those changes make to her final grade?4

FOCUS: USING Technology.

In the PowerPoint Presentation the word “Media” was used extensively to reinforce the concept of technology therefore, in the paper presentation below, the comprehensive word “Technology” is used only that it seems the more apt jargon.

“New technologies will not invalidate existing reasons for learning to read and write…New technologies do extend what there is to learn…New technologies for reading and writing have extended the curriculum for English.”5 (If not all languages)

44. Sally Tweedle, etal, English for Tomorrow, pg.80

5 English for Tomorrow. pg. 1. Extension of thought in brackets is my own and not the authors.

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The aim of this paper is to establish within each teacher the spirit of innovation, creativity and quality of presenting lessons using the availability of technology. Therefore, it is felt that no suggestions offered are prescriptive. Let us now delve into this notion of: TEACHING WITH FLAIR.

Teaching with flair essentially would mean a way of making lessons memorable, exciting, worthy and contextual. In order for this to become a reality, the teacher needs to conduct the following introspection: Just how well prepared am I to change my (conventional) teaching

style/s by introducing media/using media/involving media? How do I use Active Boards or Smart Boards in my teaching. Can I work to prepare a PowerPoint Presentation (PPP) a worksheet

for every lesson or, can I prepare to plan a worksheet/PPP for when ever the situation demands and see the work outlined on the worksheet done/followed up/developed?

In the situation of a multilingual/cultural classroom do I still teach literature for example as I did in a monolingual/cultural classroom?

DO I JUST WANT A CHANGE OF FOCUS! ?

The above are all possible questions that have or is going through your mind as you are caught in this web of trying to CHANGE your teaching with OUTCOMES BASED EDUCATION & with the FET phase.The following ideas will hopefully change your FOCUS.

OUR FOCUS: LITERATURE

How many times you feel that your teaching of literature novels, plays and drama (Shakespearean as well) is/ just gone stale?

The examples I am going to use will illustrate a point of teaching literature using a whole language approach. The whole language approach essentially means welding all aspects of language into the teaching of the novel, play etc. It is to approach the teaching from a holistic perspective such that the potential of textual meaning is brought alive.

The workbook approach:Current trends in OBE and the FET shows that learning must phase in all learning areas and the ACs and SOs are all interlinked. Therefore, in the teaching of a language we extend the same thinking. This means in a the workbook approach, all learning areas in English for example – language, poetry, writing etc are all combined in extracting the best lessons for a literature study. That is to say in the teaching of Macbeth for example, all lessons must extend from the text such that all the

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work is then filed in one file under the various areas i.e. language, literature study, writing etc. Literature study remains classically what it is. The issue of PORTFOLIOS – I’ll just say this – the work you do with the workbook extends the portfolio work to even better levels of good work.

In the study of Alan Paton’s Cry, The Beloved Country, pupils did the workbook and then went one step further. They produced a 5-10 minute audio production i.e. a main news bulletin that is preceded with a sound clip, an advertisement, a letter to the editor and a secondary newsflash article. They were given four weeks to complete the task. They were made to call in to radio stations requesting assistance and the likes. All in all they were made to listen radio broadcasts and watch with more keen interest the news on various TV channels.

Their transcripts formed part of their workbook i.e. writing aspect whilst their own enhanced learning made them rewrite part of their literature notes on the study.

The results were amazing. Pupils did the most remarkable audio presentations on audio cassettes, cds and MP3 players and when they had to assess it – the learning was a life long lesson because they began to be more critical of the news they read, heard and what they surfed on the net.

Below is an example of the task sheet and the assessment rubric – study it and try to implement it.

Furthermore, I made pupils act out Macbeth in way that it must be recorded on video. The results were amazing. Pupils did act out their plays and learnt about the cinema industry in ways that formal lessons could not teach. What became more exposed is the hidden curriculum. Pupils became more aware of what the world of Hollywood and the likes have to offer i.e. as far as those Muslims were concerned, that it is a world where too many if not all your morals are defiled. The above showed how the world of the classroom made pupils understand the world outside it. Therefore, the view that one experiences the real world outside the classroom is a fallacy. The classroom is in fact the reality of the world and the pupils must see it- the problem is: we keep on telling them that the REAL WORLD is outside!

The lessons you present then must match with many of their experiences. Lets illustrate the point in this way. Pupils are all computer junkies if not Game Boy junkies or TV junkies therefore, if your teaching is devoid of these experiences you are considered out of touch. If you use PowerPoint Presentations and media in the classroom

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what messages are you sending out to learners? You are showing them responsible use of technology and you are showing them that you are just as compatible with the world of their experiences.

WHAT ARE YOU SPENDING TIME AND MONEY ON?Assessment and marking take far too much time and it eats away at family time. Therefore, look at the time and money you spend on the educational needs of others and ask yourself this question: “How has my life improved?” Just like how the microwave made cooking faster, if you invest in a projector and a laptop all your teaching aids become packed in just one parcel ready for use. The problem is – do you want to? Remember, you can use the projector to screen movies at home. The point made here is the time and money we spend trying to relax on a holiday after a school’s term is lost immediately when the term begins because we have to weigh the paper chase. The paper chase is not going to end therefore, work smart.

Consider the all of the above in light of the following:At this point it becomes necessary to illustrate the pedagogy behind such an approach. Fraida Dubin and Elite Olshtain in their book,COURSE DESIGN: Developing Programs and Materials for Language learning (p48-48) mention

“In the cognitive-code practices, learners are expected to internalize linguistic rules which in turn help them use the language on their own. Learners are given choices regarding types of activities, amount of practice, and the language skill or the medium in which the activity is carried out.

Drawing on humanistic-affective educational philosophies, communicative goals have further increased the learners’ role by encouraging them to share responsibility for various outcomes. Since communicative aspects of interaction in the target language are emphasized, students must learn to function effectively in pairs and small groups, sometimes teaching each other, at other times discovering answers to problems together.

The type of activities or tasks students carry out is a natural outcome of the degree of control maintained by both the teacher and the textbook, as well as the level of student involvement. Approaches which favor considerable control on the part of the teacher and the textbook result in an abundance of mechanical and predictable tasks which leave very little error for the learners’ initiative. Approaches which favor a communicative-humanistic view usually present learners with ample opportunities for unpredictable and negotiable outcomes to activities.”

Get the big picture…

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Using technology in the classroom is imperative and necessary because it reflects positive change. What did the above achieve: currently two learners from Roshnee Islamic School and two from Mohloli Secondary School in Sharpeville are being trained every Saturday to search and script a news bulletin and they would in the near future be presenting the 1pm, 2pm and 3pm news LIVE. One student hosted her won youth programme on ITV (Islamic TV) and learners from the School have begun their own independent newspaper that would be part of local community newspaper.

The highlight is the establishment of our School’s own internal radio station under the guide of Cii – preparations are in the advanced stages. Learners managed to write their own story books for grade 1 and 2’s on themes and issues based on Nadine Gordimar’s July’s People. It was a fascinating experience to see learners’ resources used in classrooms that actually assisted in teaching them crucial issues about our history and our own perceotions of it. Now that’s teaching with flair – are you ready?

Afterthought…“New technologies will not invalidate existing reasons for learning to read and write…New technologies do extend what there is to learn…New technologies for reading and writing have extended the curriculum for English.”6 (If not all languages)

. The rational behind the type of assessment was the following cited by Robert Jeffcoate in his book STARTING ENGLISH TEACHING :

These practical and ideological weaknesses suggest that John Dixon was right when

he argued twenty-five years ago that it was

‘An elementary mistake to demand a list a skills, proficiencies and knowledge as the basis of an English curriculum’ …Any English teacher reading the COX report or English in the National Curriculum is bound to be struck by the conflict within them between the behaviourist ideology and prose or rational curriculum planning and the child-cantered socio-linguistic and liberal humanist ideologies which prevail among English teachers.7

What Jeffcoate talks about here is the way the National Curriculum aligns our ideas on assessment. The ideologies he refers to above relate to the empirical paradigm and the Hermeneutic paradigm generally whilst the English in the National Curriculum is the 6 English for Tomorrow. pg. 1. Extension of thought in brackets is my own and not the authors.7 R.Jeffcoate, ‘Starting English Teaching, pg. 62

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British one but, the striking thing is that it fits hand in glove with the arguments we face today in South Africa with the New National Education Curriculum. However, in my view it is argued from the above is that assessment is not what it used to be i.e. demanding list of observable proficiencies etc but a combination of that and, the ability to use those skills effectively and immediately in tasks within the learning and teaching environment. That is to say, the work in the way it has been organised and assessed in the workbooks illustrate a kind of challenge for the learner. The challenge is socio-linguistic – given the nature of discussion with peers informally on the planning and organising of detail. It is also behaviourist in that learners operate within controlled settings thus, making subjective and objective assessments possible. Furthermore, it allows for the liberal humanist ideology to permeate in that there are no strict codes of mark rubrics etc. In effect, the assessment is based on the holistic performance of the learner.

I do acknowledge that the above is much to digest but, it needs one to understand that OBE and the FET in South Africa has not been sufficiently challenged at a professional teacher centered level thus, what we present at all these conferences develops that challenge and broadens the horizon for change/amendment and restructuring. Therefore, the academic slot above illustrates the way for us to learn our curriculum read reports on it and be able to establish some new innovative ideas.

LOOKING BACK: When one looks back on all that was done it figures that learners were seen, heard and understood. In effect, their ideas were concretised by a measure of experience i.e. what they were told to and this enhanced them to use the technologies they know with what they learn. Learners in grade 12 after the teaching of MACBETH was complete were given the task to produce a workbook on MACBETH that would be a guide and resource for Educators. The results were astounding. Learners showed how they wish to be taught given that their experience of the world formulated the worksheets and tasks. However, they lacked certain abilities for example, spelling errors, tasks not clearly defined worksheets untidy or too highly pitched. These aspects did not deter me but made me reflect on my own worksheets etc and it dawned upon me that many educators do not really take pride in the presentation of their worksheets.

COULD I BE WRONG?

ORGANISING YOURSELF & YOUR LEARNERS:

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Models the Old South Africa (left) and the New South Africa (Right) – built with the help of people by grade 10 students. Done as part of a play based on Cry, The Beloved Country. (Girls group)

The first aspect to develop is to teach your learners something about filing and keeping notes together. This is vital as higher education relies on the organising of notes and the ability to retrieve notes at any given time. However, it is understood that this is not the fundamental. Now then, it would take some getting use to for learners to file their notes and you as the Educator getting to grips assessing the work in the files etc but, the way you approach the matter must suit your CONTEXT.

Below is an example of an INDEX TABLE my learners use. The index table is displayed on the left hand inside cover of an A4 LEVER ARCH FILE. The learners use a 10 INDEX TAB ORGANISER to facilitate the index table. Given that lessons are done in the broad aspects indicated on the index table the learner begins to understand the constant need for planning, updating and recording work in appropriate places - A skill that Educators lack at times given our multi – faceted tasks we accomplish or attempt.

When assessing the files it becomes a task of innovation and good time management. You would keep in mind that the work done in class went through a process of peer assessment, group check, sample marking and the likes therefore, the workbook is assessed globally and the issuing of MERIT CERTIFICATES forms the assessment. An example (only 1 of 6 is given here) of such a certificate follows the INDEX TABLE. The symbol on the certificate can be given as specific as possible e.g. 65% etc. This certificate is what will inspire a learner to have a positive realisation of the TYPE of work he/she produced therefore, the assessment is more global and introspective then what you would think on the surface value of it. The rational behind the type of assessment was the following cited by Robert Jeffcoate in his book STARTING ENGLISH TEACHING :

These practical and ideological weaknesses suggest that John Dixon was right when

he argued more then twenty-five years ago that it was

‘An elementary mistake to demand a list a skills, proficiencies and knowledge as the basis of an English curriculum’ …Any English teacher reading the COX report or English in the National Curriculum is bound to be struck by the conflict within them between the behaviourist ideology and prose or rational curriculum planning and the child-cantered socio-linguistic and liberal humanist ideologies which prevail among English teachers.8

What Jeffcoate talks about here is the way the National Curriculum aligns our ideas on assessment. The ideologies he refers to above relate to the empirical paradigm and the Hermeneutic paradigm generally whilst the English in the National Curriculum is the British one but, the striking thing is that it fits hand in glove with the arguments we face 8 R.Jeffcoate, ‘Starting English Teaching, pg. 62

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today in South Africa with the New National Education Curriculum. However, in my view it is argued from the above is that assessment is not what it used to be i.e. demanding list of observable proficiencies etc but a combination of that and, the ability to use those skills effectively and immediately in tasks within the learning and teaching environment. That is to say, the work in the way it has been organised and assessed in the workbooks illustrate a kind of challenge for the learner. The challenge is socio-linguistic – given the nature of discussion with peers informally on the planning and organising of detail. It is also behaviourist in that learners operate within controlled settings thus, making subjective and objective assessments possible. Furthermore, it allows for the liberal humanist ideology to permeate in that there are no strict codes of mark rubrics etc. In effect, the assessment is based on the holistic performance of the learner.

I do acknowledge that the above is much to digest but, it needs one to understand that OBE in South Africa has not been challenged thus, what we present at all these conferences develops that challenge. Therefore, the academic slot above illustrates the way for us to learn our curriculum read reports on it and be able to establish some new innovative ideas.

Finally, after all the assessment is done the mark can be used for a term mark of continuous assessment or a year mark. The work that is in the workbook can be used for selection for the PORTFOLIO.

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Two learners from Roshnee Islamic School and two learners from Mohloli Secondary School and their teacher @ the Cii Studios in Lenasia for training i.e. learning to select news clips from various websites, script news bulletins and present the 1pm, 2pm & 3pm news live on Saturdays. In the background is the Cii Deputy News editor.

Grade 10 learners – using a PowerPoint Presentation integrated into their play – Cry, The Beloved Country.

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NO. DETAILS: WORKBOOK: MACBETHA

1. LITERATURE

2. THEMATIC ISSUES: LANGUAGE

3. WRITING

4. POETRY

5.ORALSASSIGNMENTS/PROJECTS

NO. DETAILS: WORKBOOK: July’s PeopleB

1. LITERATURE

2. THEMATIC ISSUES: LANGUAGE

3. WRITING

4. POETRY

5.ORALSASSIGNMENTS/PROJECTS

CONCLUSION

The emphasis of all said is clearly summed up by Robert Jeffcoate in his book, STARTING ENGLISH TEACHING where he says:

The vital thing is to make it obvious from the outset that literature is alive…

the aim should not be knowledge or even ‘appreciation’, but creation. The

students are not to be passive recipients, but active participators; they

must be fired to do things, to write poems, and perhaps plays or at the very

least to act the plays of others.

Teaching with flair then means that Educators should enhance the worldview of the learner to such a level that he/she becomes a productive person in a holistic, global socio-economic and political environment. I leave you with the following so that you know that as an Educator life is different.

BLIOGRAPHY:

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LINES OF INSPIRATION

Then s Then said the teacher, Speak to us of teaching. And he said:No man can reveal to you aught but that which already lies half asleep in the dawning of your knowledge. The teacher who walks in the shadow of the temple among his followers, gives not of his wisdom but rather of his faith and his lovingness.If he is indeed wise he does not bid you enter the house of his wisdom, but rather leads you to the threshold of your own mind.The astronomer may speak to you of his understanding of space, but he cannot give you his understanding.The musician may sing to you of the rhythm which is in all aspace, but cannot give you the ear which arrests the rhythm, nor the voice that echoes it.And he who is versed in the science of numbers can tell of the regions of weight and measure, but he cannot conduct you thither.For the vision of one man lends not its wings to another man.And even as each one of you stands in God’s knowledge, so must each one of you be alone in his knowledge of God and in

Fraida, D. et al (1986) COUSRSE DESIGN. Developing programs and materials for language learning. United States of America; Cambridge University Press. Foot notes 1, 2 & 5: Jeffcoate, R., Starting English Teaching. London, Routledge, 1992. *****Foot note 3 & 4 : Tweedle, Adams, Clarke, Scrimshaw & Walton., English for Tomorrow ,Buckingham, Open University Press, 1997. *****

RECOMMENDED READING :1. W.R.Kilfoil & C.Van Der Walt, LEARN 2 TEACH. English Language Teaching in a Multilingual Context. Pretoria,J.L.van Schaik Publishers,1997 ***2. Fraida Dubin & Elite Olshtain, COURSE DESIGN. Developing Programs and materials for Language Learning. USA, Cambridge Umiversity Press, 1992. ****3. Andrew Hart, UNDERSTANDING THE MEDIA. A Practical Guide. London, Routledge,1991. *****4. Frank Smith, READING. Great Britain, Cambridge University Press, 1986. ****

*****A must read**** Very worthwhile*** Interesting** Will lead you on

Individual effort – to be assessed by peers in a controlled setting.Due date: 18 AUGUST 2004.

Focus: CRY, THE BELOVED COUNTRY. Alan paton

1. The second project is AN AUDIO PROJECT. DETAILS:

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LEFT: Making posters to advertise the bicentennial commemorations of the 200yrs of the unbanning of Islam.RIGHT: Model of shanty town as illustrated in the novel: Cry, The Beloved Country.

1. You must get yourself an audiocassette – preferred – C60/CD/USB DISK/MP3. (ENSURE THAT YOU LABEL YOUR CASSETTE BEFORE IT IS HANDED IN)

2. You must then record the following on it: 2.1 A 5min. News bulletin that must be introduced by headlines

– a brief weather report is also necessary. Listen to Channel Islam International, Radio Islam, Radio SAFM (104-107) or Radio 702 (MW) or any other station to get the idea of news broadcast.

2.2 Your news bulletin must be introduced by some lead i.e. a tone or other such audio sound.

Your focus1. Choose 1 main event from the novel, which will feature as the main

story of your news broadcast.2. Two other events must then be chosen from other sections in the

story, which must feature as secondary newsflashes.3. An advert must be done – open ended. Employ the AIDA principle.4. Finally, you should have a letter to the editor from another

part of the storyCHECKLIST COMPLETED AND READY TO

HAND IN! YES ? NO

1. AUDIO – MAIN ARTICLE2. SECONDARY NEWS FLASHES/weather reports etc3. ADVERT4. LETTER TO THE EDITOR5. Book Review

PEER MARKING SHEET FOR AUDIO ASSIGNMENT.FOCUS:CRY, THE BELOVED COUNTRY by Alan Paton.

1. Use the grid below to assess the audio assignment of your peers. ADD A MARK IN THE COLUMNS. 3 persons must assess your work for it to be entered after consultation with the teacher.

2. You must assess three person’s work. The teacher will record the details of who assesses. In the event of you losing a person’s work, you will get zero.

3. You must be objective in your assessment and do not rush the exercise.4. You must put your name as the marker/assessor and the person’s name whose work you are assessing. You

must indicate the assessment number i.e. 1/3 or 2/3 or 3/3 to keep track.5. The time for assessments is one week from the 23h of August 2004. Make sure that you have three assessment

sheets when you all assessments have been done.6. The teacher is not responsible for loss of assignments – you have to learn to keep record of your work. The

teacher will take the necessary steps to ensure control.

The last person peer marking will add the three marks given for the work and give the average. Let us take an example: The first person gave 10/100, the second gave 20/100 and you as the last marker gave 20/100. You will now add 10 + 20 + 20 = 50. Divide these marks by 3 to get the average i.e. 50/3=16. This mark will be given thereafter, the learner can

Consult with the peers and teacher until a final result is reached.

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Time limit for recording = 10 minutes (MAXIMUM)

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. __/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 Main article 40*2 Secondary article 203 Advert 204 Letter to editor 20** TOTAL

* Note: mark out of 20 and multiply by 2!RUBRIC & MARKING GRID – THE AUDIO ASSIGNMENT !

MARK GLOBALLY: SEE GRID BELOWSYMB. MK IMPRESSION/LANGUAGE/STYLE CONTENT

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Outstanding: totally fluent: news like (TV/Radio)- manages to captivate all points/attention.Excellent tone,but not flawless- diction is very good – blends in with newsreader’s/news-writer’s style. Insight into the text is clear – able to extract new messages – although not self-opinionated.(14-16 –little effect of sensationalism & dramatisation brought in)The message is clear and the tone is good. Identifies with audience but impact is lost as you listen.

Coherent- evidence of some insight/good lang.usage- you don’t have to struggle to listen – not rushed – clear pronunciation of words etc.-fair intonation of voice.Very good: reads well – sounds a-bit rushed but good.

Evidence clear thought, dramatic/sensational/insight into the text /use of good language & vocab. & understanding/variety.Knows effect of opinion, identifies with sense.Good use of text – but almost narrative – some good creativity.Text used but, relies on facts given – an attempt to innovate the details is clear-newsworthy.

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Pleasing: reads reasonably well. Average/clear. Tone of voice apt to message- slightly rushed-have to pay careful attentionPedestrian. Clumsy synthesis but coherency identifiable – no variety in vocab. but appropriate. - Sounds rushed and unclear-evidence of little creativity.Weak. Just a pass. Not fluent – no coherency. One struggles to understand and hear clearly what is been said. There seems to be no clear direction achieving lesson outcomes.

Missing facts/details & fair understanding of lacks language variety. Lacks dramatisation. & sensationalism.

Poor interpretation/little understanding/facts - relation to topic = poor.

FGGH

5/63/4/21

FAIL. Lacks fluency. Off topic. Difficult to understand. Difficult to listen – not clear! Clearly a weak candidate.No indication of planning – tone is not apt -sounds garbled.Barely coherent – no relation at all to topic/poor language usage as well – vocab.= poor/no paragraphs

Simply a “created essay” – no planning / confused / garbled. No clarity. No understanding.

Note : when marking out of 40 double the mark you select from the table before you enter it in the table above.

THE ASSESSMENT SHEET BELOW MUST BE SHARED WITH YOUR PEER. EACH OF YOU SHOULD HAVE THREE ASSESSMENT PARTS.

YOU MUST CUT OUT EACH PART AND PLACE IT IN THE COVER OF THE CASSETTE/CD/MP3 YOU ASSESS.

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Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _1_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 Main article 402 Secondary article 203 Advert 204 Letter to editor 20** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _2_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 Main article 402 Secondary article 203 Advert 204 Letter to editor 20** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _3_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 Main article 402 Secondary article 203 Advert 204 Letter to editor 20** TOTAL

PEER EVALUATIONTrue knowledge is about sharing opinions and believing in the truth and striving for it in all conditions.Dear fellow student _____________________ of grade ______

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This is a letter to inform you of what I felt about your audio-assignment that was recorded on ____________ (CD/Cassette etc).

I believe that you have excelled in :

The part I really enjoyed was:

There were times I felt I could not believe that:

However, with all that I enjoyed there were moments when I was bored/uninterested/’dulled’/felt like switching you off because:

You know when I spoke to some friends about your assignment they were impressed because:

Finally, I realised you have made me realise this about you and the way you approach life’s challenges:

I hope you have been inspired for you have inspired me to love life and

Yours Faithfully

____________________.Assessing the transcripts & the audio assignment.

This is a separate mark of the assignment. The skill of scripting a news bulletin, a review, weather report etc is important to know because it assists us in decoding the media we are exposed to. Therefore you will assess the script globally. Check errors: spelling and grammar.

PLEASE CHECK THIS RUBRIC CAREFULLY. THERE ARE DIFFERENCES!

RUBRIC & MARKING GRID – THE AUDIO ASSIGNMENT !

MARK GLOBALLY: SEE GRID BELOWSYMB. MK IMPRESSION/LANGUAGE/STYLE CONTENT

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Outstanding: totally fluent: READS like (TV/Radio) bulletin- manages to captivate all points/attention. Excellent tone,but not flawless- diction is very good – blends in with newsreader’s/news-writer’s style. Insight into the text is clear – able to extract new messages – although not self-opinionated. LITTLE OR NO ERRORS (14-16 –little effect of sensationalism & dramatisation brought in)The message is clear and the tone is good. Identifies with audience but appears clumsy to read from.

Coherent- evidence of some insight/good lang.usage There are clear indications of flexibility i.e.changes in actual audio recording were catered for..

Evidence clear thought, dramatic/sensational/insight into the text /use of good language & vocab. & understanding/variety.Knows effect of opinion, identifies with sense.Good use of text – but almost narrative – some good creativity.Text used but, relies on facts given – an attempt to innovate the details is clear-newsworthy.

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Pleasing: reads reasonably well. Average/clear.

Pedestrian. Clumsy synthesis but coherency identifiable – no variety in vocab. but appropriate. –

Weak. Just a pass. Not fluent – no coherency. One struggles to understand clearly what is been written to be read. There seems to be no clear direction achieving lesson outcomes.

Missing facts/details & fair understanding of lacks language variety. Lacks dramatisation. & sensationalism.

Poor interpretation/little understanding/facts - relation to topic = poor.

FGGH

5/63/4/21

FAIL. Lacks fluency. Off topic. Difficult to understand. Difficult to read – not clear! Clearly a weak candidate.No indication of planning –there is no evidence of planning.Barely coherent – no relation at all to topic/poor language usage as well – vocab.= poor/no paragraphs

Simply a “created essay” – no planning / confused / garbled. No clarity. No understanding.

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _1_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 40** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _2_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 20** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _3_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 20

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Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _1_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 20** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _2_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 20** TOTAL

Assessor’s Name: ASSESSED WORK OF :GRADE : DATE: GRADE: ASSESS. _3_/3NO. ASPECT MARK POOR SATISFACTORY SENSIBLE GOOD EXCELLENT1 TRANSCRIPT 20** TOTAL

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