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    ScenesandSummaryFromTheSceneBookbySandraScofield

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    Scenesareaction

    Segmentofastorytoldindetail

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    Scenesaslittlestories

    Shift Beginning,middle,andend Timeandplace

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    Sequence

    Connectedbyasingleidea Eachpartservesapurposewiththewhole

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    Scenes

    Haveevent&emotion Meldingofaction,thought,andimageswithwords

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    Function

    Introduceplotelements Revealsomethingaboutthecharacter Setupasituation

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    Structure

    Situation Lineofaction Newsituation

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    Pulse

    Theenginethedrivesthescene Emotionalstateofdesireorneed

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    Summaries

    Passquicklyoveraperiodoftime Necessary Lackimmediacy

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    Forthelastfiveweeksofschool,westumbledaboutthehallslikethe

    undeadforcedtorelivetheexperiencesoftheiryouth.Wecalculatedthe

    leastamountofeffortwewouldneedtoputin,inordertoreceiveour

    desiredgrades,andwedidonlythatwork.And,notsuddenly,forwewere

    countingdownthedays,summerwasuponus.

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    Wefoughtforthenexttendays.Anditwasalwaysoversomethingso

    ridiculousthatlater,afterourten-daywar,wewouldlaughforhoursabout

    ourselfishnessandourobsessionwithcontrol.Itwasalwaysmudinthecar,

    andspidersinthebathroom,andmissingkeys.Underneaththesurface,

    therewasalwaysthetrueproblem,theonewerefusedtoaddress.Butkeys

    andmudareeasiertoargueaboutthanliesandbetrayal.

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    ChooseonescenefromTheDistanceoftheMoonandturnitintoasummary.

    Whatislostinthesummary?Whyarescenessopowerful?

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    TheDistanceoftheMoon

    Whatshapeholdsthestorytogether?Whataretheevents?Whereistheclimaxofthestory?

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    MarkonyourcopiestheplaceswhereCalvinousesSCENE.Chooseone.Whydidherenderthatasa

    sceneandnotasasummary?Whatisitsfunction?

    Whatchangesasaresultofthescene?

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    Writeascene:Childrenarestreamingfromanelementaryschool,shoutingandcrying

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    Writeascene:Awomancomeshomefromatripandfindsa(bear,gianttarantula,burglar)inherhome