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Pitch Feedback

+Does the concept work for you and why?

Yes definitely, works well, links to indie.

The concept sounds good, would be interested to see the end result.

Yes, and it’s a unique idea.

The concept works really well, the road trip idea is really good and well thought out.

Yes, I think it’s a great idea and its do-able.

The concept works well as it goes with the genre and song.

I think it is a good concept because it fits well with the feel of the song.

Yes, because the beach is something every teenager can relate to.

No, because the concept doesn’t sound very interesting.

+Does our target audience match our music video concept and how?

The target audience does match the music video concept because it looks like you have a lot of detailed explanation about basic information, likes and fashions.

Yes, because that target audience would probably take road trips and go to the beach with friends.

Yes as they are the typical indie audience.

I think it does sounds like something I would watch.

Yes I think the age and occupation etc are correct.

It fits well as the target audience are relaxed and like to have a good time, like going to the beach.

The target audience matches well because it’s the type of thing that they listen to.

+Do you feel our idea is achievable and why?

Im not sure how you will get it filmed, it will have to be out of lesson time.

The idea might be difficult to achieve due to the location being far away.

Definitely because its cheap.

Yes, as long as you have a car and know where your going.

It’s achievable as it’s quite straight forward however there maybe issues with the weather at the location.

Yes and no – it is achievable but the only thing that isn’t achievable is obviously the weather being nice for filming and getting the car to drive.

I’m not sure about the location.

Yes, it will be easy to find a shopping centre and a beach somewhere.

+Is the genre clear within the pitch and how?

No, the lyrics are hard to understand.

The genre is indie and it’s quite clear because you followed a lot of conventions.

Yes-shows a typical indie genre.

Yes as the pitch was very detailed.

Pitch has detailed and well explained.

Yes, because it shines through.

Yes because of the moodboard.

The genre is clear as its similar to other music videos.

+Do you think the concept will be achievable within the deadline?

As long as you find time when you are all free to film it then it should be fine, you will also have to consider the weather.

If you organise it right you should, but would have to think about when is the best time going to the beach and make time if you need to go again.

Yeah go travelling in half term.

Should be, plan your time, get it done sooner rather than later. If the weather is bad you can always fit it in the video.

Yes as you are clear with the idea and are sure of what you’re doing.

Not sure – you’ll just need to find a time to go and make sure you get all filming done on the day.

Maybe, I don’t really know.