pa core writing standards: get it write! iu8 piic coaching workshop diane hubona iu8 piic mentor...
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PA CORE WRITING STANDARDS:
GET IT WRITE!
IU8 PIIC COACHING WORKSHOP
DIANE HUBONA
IU8 PIIC MENTOR
APRIL 2, 2014
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One writes to make a home for oneself,
on paper, in time, in others’ minds.
-- Alfred Kazin
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PLEASE DO NOW!
• Type 1 Writing….Publishable works!
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NOTES ON RANGE AND CONTENT OF STUDENT WRITING
• Text Render—Close Read• One Sentence, One Phrase, One Word!
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DIFFERENCE BETWEEN PROMPTS AND QUICK WRITES?
•Donald Graves research
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WHERE ARE WE?
• College and Career Readiness Anchor Standards for Writing
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We must create a writing environment where students know the purpose for writing and get support with authentic writing forms. Students also need frequent opportunities to share their voice with an attentive and responsive audience. These conditions enhance student motivation. Motivated writers value
writing and are more focused on both learning tasks and skill expectations.
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WHERE ARE WE GOING?
• Argumentative• Informative/Explanatory• Narrative
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HOW DO WE GET THERE?• Build Writing Stamina through quick writes—
Collins Types 1&2 Writings—daily practice in all content areas
• Then scaffold carefully crafted Type 3 Writing exercises once the students are used to writing daily—Collins 7 Elements of a Great Writing Assignment
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COLLINS TYPES 1-5 WRITING REWIND!
• Quotation Mingle…
• Hand Up, Pair Up, Share Up!
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TYPE ONE WRITINGOPEN-ENDED QUICK-WRITE—NO “CORRECT” ANSWER
• Fluency and getting ideas on paper• Quick and flexible• Sentences, questions, stream of
consciousness• Consistent format—label and skip lines• Easily assessed
www.collinsed.com
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TYPE TWO WRITINGQUICK-WRITE WITH A “RIGHT ANSWER”—A QUIZ
• Fluency and formative assessment• Flexible, use any time• Consistent format—label and skip
lines• Usually has a number in the prompt• Simple, informal assessment
www.collinsed.com
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TYPE TWO WRITINGQUICK-WRITE WITH A “RIGHT ANSWER”—A QUIZ
• Fluency and formative assessment• Flexible, use any time• Consistent format—label and skip
lines• Usually has a number in the prompt• Simple, informal assessment
www.collinsed.com
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TYPE THREE WRITINGA COMPOSITION WITH SPECIFIC CRITERIA
• Substantive content and meets up to three specific standards called focus correction areas (FCAs).
• Create a draft, read it out loud, and review for criteria
• One, self-edited draft• Assessed on focus correction areas
www.collinsed.com
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STUDENT WORK
Type Three Writing looks at content and writing craft. This first grader knew that his dragonfly piece needed three picture details with one label, a sentence with a capital & period, and spaces between words.
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STUDENT WORK
This grade one sample shows differentiation at work. Since this student is more advanced, she wrote more than one sentence about her topic. The FCAs were adjusted for her.
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TYPE FOUR WRITINGA REVISED COMPOSITION THAT HAS MULTIPLE CRITERIA
• Read aloud by the author (self-edited)
• Read aloud by another (peer-edited)• Usually two drafts• Assessed on focus correction areas• Most effective and efficient of all of
the types at improving writing skills.www.collinsed.com
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TYPE FIVE WRITINGWRITING OF PUBLISHABLE QUALITY
• Self- and peer-edit• Teacher conference and edit• Usually requires multiple drafts• No FCAs—everything counts• Considered a major project because
of the amount of time and effort required
www.collinsed.com
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SEVEN ELEMENT LESSON
“”She is really good at signing important papers. She cares about me and my classmates. She makes you work.”
Second Grade
1. Assignment Summary: Write a letter explaining why your teacher would be a good president.
2. Purpose: to persuade.3. Writer’s role: Candidate
supporter4. Audience: peers/
community5. Form: Letter6. FCAs: Include… (1) 1
Detail from book (2) 3 Sentences (3) Picture of teacher
7. Procedure: After listening to the Kay Winters’ story, think of your own teacher and write a letter in support of his/her presidency!
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SEVEN ELEMENT ASSIGNMENT1. Summary and Rationale
2. Writer's Purpose(s): Give a reason for writing
3. Writer's Role: Writer’s
stance or point of view
4. Audience: Who will be
reading the writing
5. Form: Letter, report, poster, essay, poem, etc.
6. Three Focus Correction Areas *
7. Procedure—sequence of
lesson
(*Include Optional FCAs: to accommodate or challenge)
When you finish…
* Read your report out loud in a one-foot voice. Check for any confusing parts.
* Edit your FCAs following your teacher's directions.
* Option if going on to Type Four: Have a partner read your paper out loud to you. Get feedback on your FCAs. Write a second draft with all your improvements.
From Improving Student Performance Through Writing and Thinking Across the Curriculum, John Collins, 2008, p. 59.
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ART AND SCIENCE OF TEACHING ARGUMENT…
• Close Reading/Text Rendering
• Identify 2 VIP’s—Very Important Points
• Group Consensus—1 MVP—Most Valuable Point
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FOUR ESSENTIAL ASSIGNMENTS
• The Ten Percent SummaryTelling the main points of a non-fiction article
• Vocabulary CardsUsing cards to master technical vocabulary
• Similar but DifferentComparing and contrasting when differences are subtle
• Short Persuasive EssayTaking a stand on an issue
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SEVEN HIGHLY RECOMMENDED ASSIGNMENTS
• “Who Am I?”An autobiographical sketch about a classmate
• Class LogCreating a description of class for an
absent student
• Create A TestCreating a test for the unit your class has just
studied
www.collinsed.com
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SEVEN HIGHLY RECOMMENDED ASSIGNMENTS• Study Guide
Predicting, explaining, and answering essay questions
• End of Unit Reflection
Writing a letter to future student describing how to do well in class
• It’s a Must!
Thoughtful recommendations about the important aspects of this class
• Letter to Next Year’s Teacher
Reflecting on what you have learned
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MURDER IN THE LUNCHROOM—CRIME AND PUNISHMENT, LAWRENCE TREAT
•Crime Solving Argumentation…
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TYPE 3 WRITING… THE BEST WRITING TEACHERS ARE WRITERS THEMSELVES!
•Coaching Script for PA Core Writing…•FCA’s•Peer Revision