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NDERELLA STORY GONE BAD WAS WRITTEN BY;

CRISSIDA HART AND EDITED BY; NATIFA SCOTT ANDDANA MELVILLE

hapter 1

y life sucks! Hi, my name is Chloe Danvers and I am about to tell you the sto

f my life. It all started back when I was born. My mother died after giving bi

me. This left my father and I. I knew the cause of my mothers death and th

as my fault there to blame. My father kept telling me that it wasnt my fauut I knew better .Eventually, my father got remarried to his blond bimbo wh

fter his money. Nevertheless, my father never listened to me when I told h

bout her. He just assumed that I did not like anyone taking the place of m

other, of course THAT was true! I mean who would ever like someone to ta

s or her mothers place! Anyway, she eventually moved into our house w

er two spoilt, stuck-up bitchy and annoying daughters. When my father told m

at she was to move in, he never said anything about her two bratty daughte

ow could someone forget something like that is beyond me? From the mome

ey arrived at our - meaning my father still my mother and I - house the tw

itches decided that they liked my room instead so they wanted it guess wh


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anks to my father they got it. Moreover, from right there, from that very da

y life was a living hell .Two years later my father died in a car crash, therefo

ft me no choice than to live with my step-mother. She afterward came

ecision that I shall attend a boarding school in London. Obviously, she want get rid of me. Little did she know that I was happy at the fact that I wou

ever have her ordering me around or hassling me all the time. I was ecstatic!

.. Until she informed me that her daughters if they could

assified as human terms - were coming along too. I knew my life would still

own hill. We were shipped off, not long after, to London.

The first day of school was the worse day of my life. My step-sisters, Ka

nd Carrie, quickly became friends with the meanest and most popular girl

chool, Mallory. I hated her because she thought she owned the entire schoo

nyway that very day I was walking to class, not watching where I was goi

nd unintentionally bumped into someone. I looked to see who it was and to m

urprise, it was Eric Kress; the hottest guy at school also the star quarter bac

e helped me up and said he was sorry. Then out of the blue, Mallory camith my two boobs of a step sisters flagging behind her. She walked up to m

ushed me, and stated that I must never to speak to her boyfriend ever aga


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ric tried to pull her away from me. Then she told me to stay away from her th

roceeded to give him a long passionate kiss and smile at me. She pulled h

own to the halls and my stepsisters were laughing at me. From that day o

ade any friends or even made an attempt to make any friends and as fveryone else; they acted as if I were invisible .RIGHT!!!! Im telling you abo

y story, which brings us to where we are now.

hapter 2

As I walk to biology class, hurrying down the hallway .I woo afraid to see Mallory right now. Ever since that day, she made sure tha

would never have friends and she always threatened me. As I entered class, t

eacher told me to take a seat. There only one seat; take a wild guess who it w

situated by. Eric Kress, of course, I was reluctant to sit down next to h

because Mallory always threatened me. Against my better judgment, I went

sit down next to him. I was waiting patiently for class to end. When it ende

hurried to lunch. I got in line, got my lunch and paid for it, As I was looking an empty table where I could sit down. Therefore, I surveyed the room. Th

my eyes wandered across Mallorys path. As always a bunch of friend

surrounded her. All of her friends were fake. Half of them just suck up to h

and followed her around all day, just because she was rich and may be has

he money in the world. As I walked past her table one of her stupid coho

ripped me and all my lunch fell on top of me .I looked up and everyone beg

aughing, everyone except Eric. He had an annoyed look on his face. I need

get out of here. I got up and ran to the girls bathroom. I cried for about fi

minutes. Suddenly, the door opened and a girl with brown hair and brown ey

entered. She was of average height and pale skinned. She looked at me w


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sadden eyes. She helped me up and began washing spaghetti out of my ha

Then she said,

Hi my name is Ashley. Sorry, about what happed in ther

Mallory is a real bitch. I said, Yup, thats for sure. Then we both begaughing. Do you have a next uniform right now? This one is really dirty a

he meatloaf will be very hard to come off., she said. I sighed, No, this is m

only one. She replied, Come with me. She took me to her dorm room. Th

gave me one of her uniforms to wear. She sent me into the bathroom to cle

myself off. Why was this girl being so kind to me? When I washed all t

meatloaf out of my hair, and put on the uniform she gave me. It was a bla

blazer with the schools monogram on the pocket right above the breast andblack pleated skirt; it was checkered with colors of black, yellow and whi

After putting it on, I exit the bathroom. Ashley was waiting patiently for m

outside in her dorm room, when she acknowledged me she said, Whats yo

name? I said, Chloe Danvers

What dorm room do you stay in?

I dont have one as yet, I have to go pick up the key today.

Then she said, So what did you do to Mallory to make her hate your guts?

I told her everything about my lifes story. When I was finished she looked

me and said,

Im so sorry, its terrible that you had to go through that especially w

Kate and Carrie, they are both a pain in the ass, thats for sure Then I laugh

aloud. I didnt know what it was about Ashley, she just was just a good pers

o talk to. She is the friendliest girl I ever met so far in this god-forsak

school.

Ohhh, I know exactly why Mallory hates you. she saidWhy? I said

Because shes afraid of losing her boyfriend. And that means you are


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hreat to her

What are you talking about??!!

Dont you see how cute you are? No wander shes so threaded. She thin

hat youre more beautiful than her. The only reason she makes fun of youbecause she wants to lower your self esteem, make you belittle your self a

ruin your reputation. And I cant believe that youre letting her do it!

I signed; it doesnt make sense to do it she stopped abruptly. She took m

by the shoulders and began to shake me back and forth saying,

What the hell is wrong with you! Why are you letting them ruin your lif

Youre not even putting up a fight. Get a hold of your self! when she stopp

shaking me I just stood there trying to make sense of her words. Finally, twords got through to me and I just said okay.

Then she completely changed the topic by saying,

What classes do you have? I dug into my bag, took out my cl

schedule, and gave it to her when she was finished she shouted OMG! W

have all the same classes!

I laughed at her. What was wrong with this girl? She doesnt even kno

me that well but shes psyched that Im in her classes. The school bell rang a

t was time to get back to class.

As Ashley and I were walking to class when I pass

Mallory and she gave me glare that could kill, but I just ignored her and wemy way. We entered class and took our seats. Right throughout the class, a

could think about was what Ashley told me and I was fed up of being treat


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ike that. It was time for me to stand up for my self. Soon the bell rang and w

had to go to our next class. I was silent the whole way. Ashley suspected thsomething was up with me but she gave me my space. The rest of the day p

n a blur. Soon I was headed to the main office to get my keys. When I enter

he door, I was frozen in place, because right behind the secretarys desk, the

stood Eric. I gathered all the courage I had left and went to the secretarys de

When he saw me, he smiled and said, Hi, Im Eric Kress, and ummm

Youre Chloe, right?

I nodded. Then he said, What can I do for you?

Im here for my dorm key.Oh yea, Mrs. Whitman told me that you would be passing for it. Ok, ho

on one sec

I nodded because I was completely speechless at this point. He came ba

with a key in his hand. As I was about to take the key, he placed the key in m

palm then held on to my hand tenderly saying;

Sorry about what happened today. Mallory can be bitch sometimes. Ju

dont study her, okay?Okay. Thanks. Then he let go of my hand and said bye. When I exited

door, I immediately went to the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror, m

face was deep red; I was blushing. All I could of thought of at that moment w

Erics sweet British voice. I love people with accents! I adore accents

general! When I had myself under control, I checked the number on the do

key; dorm number 109.

As I headed to the dorm, I wondered who would be my n

roommate. Surprisingly, when the dorm room, there stood Ashley I could

believe that my new roommate is Ashley. When she saw me, she screamed a

gave me a quick hug. She shouted,


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I cant believe that were roommates! OMG!

Yea, me too!Wait. Where are your stuff?

Its in room 27. I had to stay there for a while

Ok, well lets go get your stuff

Ummm, we are going to need way more help because I have a lot of thing

No prob, Ill just call my brother and my boyfriend to help us

Thanks. She proceeded to call her brother and her boyfriend, when s

was finished, I asked,

Whos your boyfriend?Vince Blake. He plays for the football team and hes my brothers b

friend

Wait, isnt there a rule against dating your brothers best friend?

Yea, but we surpassed the rule because we were in love

So what did when he found out?

He went ballistic and told Vince he was to never see me again. B

eventually he came to his senses and told Vince it was ok. Then he threatenhat if Vince ever broke my heart he would make him swallow a knife.

Hes very over protective just like my father used to be. When I said tho

words, it brought tears to my eyes. I couldnt stop myself from crying. Ashl

comforted me and told me everything is going to be alright. About five minu

ater, I stopped crying, there was a knock on the door. Ashley told them

come in. When the door flew open, I was stricken. Eric Kress stood in t

doorway with Vince behind him. Eric is tall, medium built, blue eyes and bla

hair all of which he had with fair-skinned on his god like body. No wond

every girl at school wanted him. Too bad he has to settle for Mallory. Im su

hes suffering on the inside. Vince is tall and muscular built; he is very buff.


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has golden-brown hair and green eyes to go along with his tanned skin. It w

oo good to be true. I was snapped out of thought when Ashley said,Chloe this is my brother Eric Kress. Eric this is Chloe. He said,

know, weve met already. I just nodded as Ashley looked at me and sa

Why didnt you tell me you met my brother?

shrugged and said, Because I didnt know. Eric said, So what

you all need help with

she said, We just need you guys to go and help us move Chloes thin

from room 27 to here.

Eric said, Ok, no problem. Then Vince came from behind Eric and huggAshley. They shared a long and passionate kiss, but the kiss was broken wh

Eric said, Dude, can you get your filthy hands off of my sister before I sho

my fits down your throat!

Vince said, Oh, put a sock in it. Then continued to kiss her. I could s

hat Eric was losing his patience so I mustered up all the courage I had at th

moment to say, Eric, do you wanna go move some of the boxes now?

shifted his attention from them, nodded and headed out the door. When he wout the door, Ashley gave me a thumbs-up. I then headed out the door a

caught up with Eric. We walked side by side in silence; he broke the silen

when he said, So are you coming to Vinces party tonight?

Ummm. I dont know. I given if Ashleys going Ill go too

Hmm, ok, I couldnt stop myself from getting excited anytime I heard

voice. He spoke with a British English accent. Its so sexy! My heart ra

ncreased and I was wondering if he could have heard it, we were silent for t

rest of the way. As we approach room 27,as I was unlocking the door I was o

of Mallory's cohorts was pass by. Seeing Eric and I, her eyes popped wide op

and she smirked, paid no mind. We entered the room; it was really dark. T


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room didnt have any lights in it, so we had to feel around. Suddenly the do

slammed.Eric did you do that?

Nope, it wasnt me

Could you open it please?

Sure, I waited patiently for the door to open. Then Eric said,

Umm, I think we have a problem.

What?

The door wont open.

You have got to be kidding me! I felt around for the door; I turned tknob, which was useless because we were locked in. Eric said, Wellll, I gue

well just have to wait until Ashley and Vince comes.

Uhhh, well never get out of here.

Stop thinking so negatively

Fine! But were still going to be stuck in here. I signed and sat on the b

so I could not have seen Eric. A half an hour past and still the door we

ocked. Suddenly Eric shouted, What is taking them so long?!!!Maybe they are having some fun, whispered to myself. Eric said in a sha

one, What did you just say!

Nothing then he just sighed and said, Sorry about that

Its alright

Where are you?

On the bed

Okay, Im sure theyll be down any minute now.

Sure, you just keep thinking that, I thought in my head. Inside w

unbearably cold. My teeth started to chatter and I started trembling. Eric hea

and he asked, Are you alright?


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YYea. Im jjjust a little cccold

Okay, hold on Im comin


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hapter 3

He eventually reached the bed. He took off his shirt and p

bit around he. It made no difference. I was still freezing. Then he asked, Iworking?

Nnnno, not really. Two strong hands, then, were wrapped arou

me. He pulled me closer to him, up against him and began rubbing his hands

and down my shoulder to cause friction. I was speechless; the cutest boy

school was hugging me to keep me warm. OMG! Then Eric said, Is t

better?

Yea, much better and thanks, by the waydont mention it.

About ten minutes passed and I began to fell drowsy. I leaned into him a

he willfully supported my weight. Then he laid me down on the bed and put

arms around me. I couldnt believe this was actually happening! My he

started to race.

Is something wrong? I ca hear your heart beat OH! MY! GOD! He c

hear it; this is so embarrassing. Heat rose in my face; I said, No, Im fine; I

just ah.. frightened that we might never get out of this place. Whew! I did

know I could lie that good. Eric said, Dont worry, well be out of here soon

just sighed. Eventually my heart stared to beat at its normal pace and I fad

into darkness.

When I open my eyes all I could see was darkness, I noticed that my he

was resting on a chest; Erics chest, his arms were wrapped around my wa

and his head was resting on mine. He was asleep. I was sure we were going

miss the party! Eric started to move then I heard him say, Chlo are yawake?

YeahHow long we been in here?


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About two hours. Hmm since Im pretty sure that well be in here a whi

so lets talk?

About what?

Anything you want to talk about. There was one question I wanted to areally badly, but it will be too rude to ask. So I said,

Nahhh, I cant ask you that.

Sure, go ahead. I wont be offended.

Ok. Here goes. How can you put up with Mallory? If I were you

wouldve committed suicide already, No offence.

None taken. Well, Mallory is really a sweet girl on the inside. Its just t

she feels that she will gain everyones respect by being bitchy; but she wolisten to me: shes usually shy on the inside.

Thats hard to believe

I know but she He was cut off from talking because someone push

open the door, and there stood Mallory. When she saw how we w

intertwined on the bed, she shouted, What the hell do you think your doin

Get your grimy hands of off my boyfriend before I rip it off of your body! E

jumped off the bed and said, Mallory, its not what it looks like. The door w

jammed and we could not get outTo hell it was! You guys were having sex werent you! Dont lie to me

No, we werent. Just let me explain. Then Mallory came up to me a

slapped me hard on the face; my face began to sting. She slapped me so ha

my eyes sprang with tears. I was too shocked to do anything. When I looked

her, she was coming at me again to give me another one. Her hand almost ca

into contact with my face gut it failed because Eric blocked it. She looked

him in surprise and said, So youre defending her now?!?!?Why are you behaving like this?

Why?!?!?! Did you just ask that question? She looked at him with a fie

expression on her face and said, Because every girl at this school wants yo


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Even her! And youre protecting her!

He said in a clam voice, Listen, nothing is going on between us and if y

dont trust me go right ahead he took me by my hand and we walked p

Mallory with a dumbfounded expression on her face. I didnt not even noticwas still crying until Eric looked at me and wiped away my tears. He said A

you okay I nodded and we continued to walk up to the dorm. When

entered my dorm, Ashley was putting make up on her face. When she saw m

expression she said, Oh My God! What happen to your face?! I w

mummified at the moment. Eric said, Mallory slapped her

Why? Eric told her the entire story. When he was finished, she had a bla

expression on her face. She said, Chloe, I thought you told me room 37 nroom 27. Vince and I were looking all over the place for you all. Then s

came and hugged me and said, Im so sorry

I whispered, its okay

Eric said, Im going to get ready for the party. So Ill see you guys late

He walked out the door. Ashley turned to me and asked, You still wanna go

I figured that I should go because it was better than sulking home here. Rig

about now all I wanted to do was take a couple of drinks just to get over t

pain. I hope that I would drink enough that I wont remember anything, thIm going to do. For once in my life, I want to have some real fun; let loose a

just be irresponsible. So I said, Ok.

What are you going to wear?

Umm, I dont know. Could you help me?

Of course! When Im done with you every guy that sees you will th

tongues. And with that, she threw me in the shower to take a bathe. Whe

was finished, she sat me down on a chair and began putting all different sortsmake up no me. I did not even know there were so many cosmetics. Af

finishing, she gave me one of her dresses to wear. A turquoise blue deep

neck; would show a lot of my cleavage. The dress was short, tight and had a


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from the hip to the end of the dress. I took one look at it and shook my he

then said, No way! There is no way in hell Im wearing this!

Why, whats wrong with it? I looked at her with a dumb found

expression and said, Besides the fact that it looks like what a stripper wouwear, I hate blue!

But your eyes are blue

I hate my eyes also!

Listen to me! You ARE going to put on this dress! If I have to strap you t

chair until you give in, then Ill do it I did not just spend an hour your ma

up to have it wasted. Therefore, you WILL put on this dress even if I have

have to force it on you. GOT IT! I couldnt do anything more than just noShe had much rage on her face, just because I didnt want to put on a dre

What was wrong with this girl! I couldnt of help myself; I started laughin

Then Ashley turned to me with a furious expression no her face; I immediat

stopped. I took the dress and put it on. Then she gave me a pair of black hig

heeled shoes. I was too afraid to look at myself in the mirror. Ashley put on h

dress. It was black with a deep v-neck also. It was skin tight and even shor

than my dress. She looked beautiful in it. Then she said, you look hot!

You tooDid you look in the mirror?

No. and with that she grabbed me to the mirror. The person I saw in t

mirror was a completely different person. She could be as beautiful a

goddess. She had pale skin and long jet-black hair that framed her face. H

eyes were a dazzling blue. The short dress made her look tall, slender a

graceful. I was shocked at my reflection and I gasped. Ashley laughed sof

and said, You see, youre totally hot!Wait! How are we going to reach to the party?

Vince and Eric are coming to pick us up. Just as she said that there wa

knock on the door. Ashley squealed and said, Im not ready yet. Please st


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them I need to go and put on more make up and with that she ran off to t

bathroom. I went and opened the door. I said, Hi! Eric just stood there lik

statue. His expression was unreadable. He finally snapped out of it when Vin

him on the back. Then Eric said, YYou look ummm. Very, verybeautiful I blushed and said thanks. They entered and sat on the couch. E

was wearing black T-shirt that clung to his body with a gold and white hoo

over it with a black, long, jeans pants. He looked wayyy HOT! Vince w

wearing the exact same thing it was his T-shirt was green. Vince ask

Wheres Ash?

She isnt ready ~~~~ I was cut off because as soon as I said these wor

Ashley made her appearance. Vince couldnt keep his eyes off of her. Eshouted, What the hell are you wearing! You areNOTleaving this hou

dressed like that.

She said, Your not the boss of me and IAMgoing to wear it!

Ashley for the last time! Before I lose my temper. Get that dress of or pul

down lower and put on a jacket. It is your choice. Its either you do it the ea

way or the hard way.

FYI, I find that I look She did not had time to finish because E

got up and dragged her into the bathroom. He slammed the door when he gher inside the room. Vince and I just looked at each other with surpris

expressions on our faces. Then from inside the bedroom we heard Ash

scream and say, You cant tell what to do OR what to wear

Eric shouted, Just put on the jacket!

No! then, we heard loud thumps and scuffling. The door was pushed op

Ashley ran outside with a jacket on and skirt was pulled down to her kne

While she was running out the door she said, Are you happy now! I lohideous! And I HATE you!! Vince quickly followed her out the door sayin

Ash, you look beautiful and dont listen to him. I love you.

Eric opened the front door and said, Lets get out of here, my job here


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done. We walked out the door side by si

While we were walking, Eric kept sneaking glances at me. He could not ke

his eyes off of me for too long. Then I said with a smirk on my face, You l

what you see? He blushed and watched straight ahead. I was feeling rathconfident tonight. I had no idea where that came from. Maybe it was the n

look. Then Eric said, Sorry for staring. Its just that you rather stunning.

Thanks! I said, blushing. Lot of guys

going to be swarming over you tonight, if they are bothering you to much j

call me, ok? Sure, but its not like thats going to happen

mean, Im not even as pretty as most girls E

took in a sudden intake of breathe. He said, Trust me, if you know whagood for you, you will never say that again.

What are you talking about? he looked at me in a strange way and sa

Obviously you dont see yourself clearly and with that we ended o

conversation. What did he mean by all those stuff he said. Was he saying tha

was the hottest girl he ever laid eyes on? Why do all boys have to be

difficult? Why couldnt they just say what they wanted? Oh gosh! I was brok

out of thought when we reached the parking lot and he said, See you tonigh

have to go pick up Mallory. I said, Bye he got inhis car and drove away. I had to go with Ashley and Vince. They were waiti

in the car when I got in I could see that Ashley was pretty angry. We drove

silence all the way. When we got to the house, I took in all the details of it

was huge and pearl white. There must have been at least ten rooms. There w

also a huge glistening blue pool in the backyard. We got out of the car a

headed into the house. The place was jammed packed with people. I w

separated from Ashley and Vince and I didnt know where to go. I think Igoing to faint! Just when I was starting to lose hope, I was an opening in t

crowd. I ran quickly through. When I reached, I was by the bar. I just too


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seat and watched everybody that passed by. There was no sign of Eric

Ashley.

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ope you enjoyed this little excerpt. There is more tocome. I really wanted to finish the entire story but I wasexcessively anxious to see what you all would think. Soif you could leave a comment that would be great!

Because I really want your opinion on it to know if Ishould continue or not. Ps I am sorry for all theerrors.

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