Nanjing Xuanwu Foreign Language School

Ann

Teenage lifeIntroduce ourselvesRecommend our friendsShare our favourite food, pets, and festivalsIntroduce our school life Discuss teenage problemsPlan a day outShow our abilities

Julia and Ann

London

A letter from Julia Dear children, I’m Julia, a twenty-six-year-old girl full of

dreams. Now I’m teaching English in a school in

London.  In my free time, I like playing the game called “growing” and “stealing”. And I am crazy about it.

I have never been to Nanjing and I am interested in this beautiful city with such a long history. I want to know more about your city, and I hope to visit you some day. I hope to make friends with you.

Best wishes Julia

name age

hobby

future plan

How to introduce yourself?

Name/Age …/

Living place

Appearance

Hobby

Personality

Ability

Future plan

Nanjingfifteen years old

slim, pretty, round face, strong, neat…

collect stamps, play ball games, play chess…

friendly, honest, easy-going, humorous, polite …

smart, musical, hard-working…to do …

A reply to Julia’s letter请你给 Julia 回封信，表示愿意成为她的朋友。 内容包括：1 、介绍自己。 [ appearance, hobby, personality, ability,

future plan] （不少于三项） 2 、为什么想和她成为朋友。 要求：1 、写作中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。2 、语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。3 、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。 4 、词数： 80 词左右。 Dear Julia,

I’m Liu Lin. __________________________________ 　　 _______________________________________________ 　　 Best wishes! 　　 Liu Lin

Sharing TimeSharing Time

Who did best !Who did best !

语句通顺 ? 意思连贯 ? 语法正确 ? 书写规范 ?

Ann’s advice

一人

两态

三单

一复

两写

person

tense and voice

handwriting and capital letters

the third person singular

Plural forms of nouns

Useful sentences• I have many hobbies, such as playing baske

tball and football, travelling with my family. • I spend much time doing exercise in order t

o keep fit. • I wish I could be allowed to play computer g

ames for a while, which will make me relaxed.

• It’s nice and generous of me to share interesting experiences with my classmates.

How to introduce your school life?

KEY WORDS ARTICLE

school day start time

school day finish time

lunchtime

subjects

Facilities( 设施 )

after-school activities

starts at…

finishes at…

for an hour and a half

My favourite …

library, laboratory

school trips, clubs

My school starts at _______and finishes at ________. So I have ______ time for after-school activities. I have half an hour for lunch. There is a big dining hall. And I often have __________ for lunch . I can ________ and __________ my friends there. I can also __________on the playground after lunch.

? a.m.? p.m.

My school day

? food

My favourite subject is ________ because _____________________. My school has a big library, I can _______________.

There are some clubs and after-school activities, such as ___________. I have _________ homework every day.

I wish I could have more time for my hobbies.

“Growing” and “Stealing” games

•can grow… on the farm•enjoy the life in the countryside

• earn some e-money and buy “pets”

• feel excited

• feel relaxed

outlineAdvantages Disadvantages

Conclu-sion

•can grow… on the farm

•be _____ ( 疯狂 )about the game

•earn some e-money and buy the “pets”

•a ______( 浪费 ) of time; don’t have enough time to study

•To be a “thief” makes me feel _____( 有罪的）

Your advice

•enjoy the life in the countryside

• feel excited • feel relaxed

crazy

waste

guilty

Game TimeGame Time

Which group played best !Which group played best !

outlineAdvantages Disadvantages

Conclu-sion

•can grow… on the farm

•be _____ ( 疯狂 )about the game

•earn some e-money and buy the “pets”

•a ______( 浪费 ) of time; don’t have enough time to study

•To be a “thief” makes me feel _____( 有罪的）

Your advice

•enjoy the life in the countryside

• feel excited • feel relaxed

crazy

waste

guilty

At present some students are fond of playing “Growing” and “stealing” games.

They think that they can plant trees, grow vegetables and flowers on the farm. They enjoy the life in the countryside. At the same time they can earn some e-money and keep “pets” . They feel excited when “stealing”. Sometimes , they play the game with their friends and they think this can help them relax.

However, some students don’t think so. They think they are crazy about the game. It is a waste of time . They don’t have enough time to study. Being a “thief” also makes them feel guilty.

In my opinion, playing the game can make us feel relaxed, but we must plan our time carefully and try to achieve a balance between study and play.

因果：

转折 :

条件 :

目的 :

总结 :

as a result, because/so….

while, but, however

if , unless

so that, in order to do.

in a word, in short, in all

Ann’s advice

I’ve joined the Buddy Club in order to make more friends.

I practise volleyball a lot. As a result, I’m good at it.

I like staying out to play basketball. However, my parents don’t support me.

I won’t make great progress unless I devote myself to English study.

In a word, to do more exercise is good for our health.

英语写作

英语写作

明要点

草稿草稿围绕要点扩充

避开不会的词汇句式

恰当使用连接词

定时态

语序问题

固定短语

时态是否正确

检查

是否符合语言习惯

主谓是否一致主谓是否一致

审题 抄写

大小写标点

字迹工整 大小适中注意间隔

学会分段卷面整洁

人称是否正确

主谓是否一致要点是否全面

Writing steps

Teenage life• Introduce ourselves• Recommend our friends• Share our favourite food, pets, and

festivals• Introduce our school life • Discuss teenage problems• Plan a day out• Show our abilities

Homework: Never give up

在我们的生活中，总会遇到许多困难或不如意的事情，如生活上的、学习上的、情感上的……我们要有信心去克服它，不要轻言放弃！请你以“ Never Give Up” 为题写一篇短文，让我们分享你的经历、感受或想法。字数： 80 左右。温馨提示：

1 、短文中请勿使用真实姓名。地点或所在学校名称。

2 、 这些单词也许对你有帮助： difficulty, unhappy, deal with, confident 　　　　 ____________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!