Music magazine second draft

With feedback from first draft

Feedback from first draftThis should be changed from Christmas special to a date.

The barcode should not have the issue number and price on it.

The text should not cross so far over the model.

The font/ colour should differ between the kickers and the explanatory text.

The kickers must be visibly bigger in size that the explanatory text, whilst still not crossing over the model too much.

The magazine name should be changed from ‘THE New Era’ to simply ‘New Era’, as it sounds better.

Use of feedback

Taking all of the feedback into account, I had decided to correct all of the things which I was told, and have also decided to completely change the layout of the cover.

I have decided to change the layout because my explanatory text had crossed over to far, and it made me see that this way of laying out the magazine did not work very well, and due to this I have been able to change many of the kickers and explanatory texts, and add more features to the cover, to make it look more like music magazine, which the first draft did not look like.