midterm comments
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Strengths Weaknesses HowtoImplement Check:
Wellresearched Mustusehistoricalevidenceinsupportoftheargument
Statemyideaandthengointotheevidence/support,ratherthandrawingmyconclusionafterlayingoutfactsforegroundmyideas
Laidouttheessaysstructureinthebeginning,thenfollowedthatstructureprecisely
Mainideasgotlost Striveforoneclearanswertothequestionbeingasked
Toodescriptive Pushtheanalysisbeyonddescriptiongointothewhy
Didntgointodetailaboutnavigatingthefuture
ExpandmoreuponhowwecannavigatethisfutureIvecreated