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Jalisa Brown Nija Daniels
ECED 4300-ADr. Tonja RootSpring 2010
Grade Level: 4th
Specific form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Jalisa Brown
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
PLO: The student will develop
a cinquain poem using a graphic organizer.
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry
5 line poemDescribes topic, object, or picture
Tells a storyTotal of 22 syllables2, 4, 6, 8, 2 pattern
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: 978-0-13-195576-4)
Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry
Line 1: One-Word subject: 2 syllables
Line 2: Description: 4 syllables
Line 3: Action: 6 syllables
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: 978-0-13-195576-4)
Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry
Line 4: Feeling or observation: 8 syllables
Line 5: Describing/renaming subject: 2 syllables
Do a brief review of syllables.Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Stage of Writing:Prewriting
Beginning stageFoundation; organize thoughts on paper
No sentences (words/phrases)
Spelling unimportant (this stage)Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta
State University, Valdosta, GA.
Stage of Writing:Prewriting
Form: Cinquain PoetryTopic: Puppies (For practice), Turtles (For assessment)
Purpose: Describe a subject or picture; tell a storyBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta
State University, Valdosta, GA.
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Cinquain PoetryGraphic Organizer
Line 1: 1 Word Subject (2 syllables)
Line 2: Description (4 syllables)
Line 3: Action (6 syllables)
Line 4: Expressing Feeling/Observation (8
syllables)
Line 5: Describing or Renaming (2
syllables)
APA Citation for Example
Project learning tree: Pre K-8 environmental education activity guide. (2009). Washington D.C.: American Forest Foundation.
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Example
Earth WormsSquiggly squirmersAerating our topsoilHappily helping our
gardenCrawlers
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Practice Activity4th graders shown a picture of a puppy (next slide)
Develop a cinquain poem (about puppies) Use a graphic organizer. Work in groups of threeTwo groups share
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Practice Activity Picture
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Maltese puppies for sale in Australia. (2005-2008). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au: http://www.pups4sale.com.au/maltese_pups.htm
Assessment Activity4th graders shown a picture of turtles (next slide)
Work individually to create a
cinquain poem (about turtles)
Use graphic organizerBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Assessment Activity Picture
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Nija Daniels
Cinquain poetry: drafting, editing, revising, and publishing
ELA4W4. The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.
GPS
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
b. Revises selected drafts to improve coherence and progression by adding, deleting, consolidating, and rearranging text. c. Edits to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, etc.
GPS
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
•Students will transfer information constructed on the graphic organizer into cinquain poetry form. •Students will change, add, delete, rearrange content on their draft and look for mechanical errors.
PLOs
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
•Students will finalize their cinquain poem for publication.
PLO
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Stage of Writing: Drafting, Editing, Revising, Publishing
•Copy the information from your graphic organizer to a sheet of paper•Be sure to put each lines on separate lines on your paper
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
•Check for cinquain poetry format•Correct number of syllables•Correct form for each line•Mechanical errors•Capitalization, spelling and punctuation.
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
•Copy the revised and edited poem on a new sheet of paper•Include drawing or picture appropriate to the title
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
APA Citation for Example
(2010). Retrieved from http:// www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/lesson_images/lesson43/RWT016-1.PDF
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Example
Penguin black white waddling, swimming, leaping a tuxedo in the cold wateremperorBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta
State University, Valdosta, GA.
Practice ActivityGet into groupsLook at the picture on the next slide
Practice writing a cinquain poem
APA citationMaltese puppies for sale in Australia. (2005-2008). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au: http://www.pups4sale.com.au/maltese_pups.htm
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Practice Activity Picture
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Assessment
Look at picture on the next page
Individually (as fourth graders) write a cinquain poem
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.
Assessment Activity Picture
Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.