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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    Tcddof q~bq oj ~mf qbhf plbaf, cj ~mf qonfwble, eoaeojg ~mfibll lfbyfq cj ~mf gtcvjn wmolf mf loq~fjq ~c PF^F_qtbj~ojg*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    B qmbtp, hviilfn ^WBJG* B ~tbjqlvafj~, qclon qrvbtf qo~qqvqpfjnfn oj ~mf bot oj itcj~ ci moh, lfyo~b~ojg, pvlqojg,~mf aclcvt jc~ f~ ~mftf, dv~ ~bjgodlf, q~bdlf*

    Tcddof ojmblfq nffpl bgboj*

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    NOQQCLYF ^C;

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    F]^* DVFJCQ BOTFQ, 400 IFF^ BDCYF GTCVJN ( NVQE

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    Bq qmf lcceq btcvjn, bthq bjn ibafq q~oae cv~ itch dtcefjwojncw bll btcvjn mft, qchf wbyojg ilbgq, c~mftq mclnojg cv~~mfot amolntfj* Loef qpfa~b~ctq hbtyflojg b~ mft*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    Qmf ptfqqfq ~mf fbtpofaf ci mft mflhf~ wo~m mft c~mft mbjn*

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    F]^* CPFJ QE_ ( ACJ^OJVCVQ

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    BLLOQCJCj ~mf gtcvjn*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    Qmf ilofq pbq~ ~mf ~bllfq~ dvolnojgq q~oll q~bjnojg* ^mflbjnqabpfq ambjgfn qojaf qmf iotq~ ilfw bdcyf ~mf alcvnq*Q~tff~q ojnoqaftjodlf itch TVDDLF cj ~mf gtcvjn* Cpfj gbqmfqoj dvolnojgq, ~ctj bjn dtcefj, AOYOLOBJQ qab~~ftfn loef bj~qbhonq~ ~mf ao~qabpf*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    Hctf lvtamojg, hctf GTCBJOJG itch ojqonf ~mf dvolnojg*BLLOQCJ abj MFBT ~mf wfbefjojg q~tva~vtf gf~~ojg ~c o~qDTFBEOJG PCOJ^*

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    ^mf dvolnojgq qvppct~q goyf wb, acjatf~f f}plcnfqcv~wbtnq* ^mf WCHBJ qatfbhq, gtbdq mft DC_ bjn qmcyfq mohcv~ ~mf wojncw* ^mf DC_ qbq jc~mojg, qatfbhojg wo~m moq

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    BLLOQCJCvam* Abj~ df ~mb~ dbn*

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    ^FBAMFT !4Mf, Blloqcj" Gtfb~ qpffam* _cvq~oll mbyfj~ hfj~ocjfn wmoamqamccl dcbtn cv ~tbjqifttfn ~c*

    BLLOQCJCm, o~q cv~qonf ~mf ptcyojaf* O~qeojn ci loef***b tfqfbtam pcqo~ocj*O***gf~ ~c ~tbyfl b lc~3

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    BLLOQCJ^mbjeq, dv~ tfbll, o~q ptf~~ncwj(~c(Fbt~m***

    ^mf jc~oaf b itbj~oa hc~mft, ntbggojg mft qcj oj~c b abt*Qmf fllq oj~c mft pmcjf*

    QAMCCL HCHCm h Gcn, mcjf, Oh achojg, Ollabll qchfcjf* Kvq~, q~b togm~~mftf"

    Qmf qlbhq ~mf pbqqfjgft ncct, mft qcj dvq wo~m qabjjojgcyft moq noplchb oj ~mf dbaeqfb~*

    ^mf ~mtff ~fbamftq bpptcbam mft*

    BLLOQCJHq***Tfhdtbjn~3 Mfjtq hc~mft3

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    ^FBAMFT !4Cm, jc, jc* Oq qchf~mojg wtcjg3 Oqo~ cvt mvqdbjn3

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    ^FBAMFT !2Wmb~3"

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    Qmf gf~q alcqft ~c ~mf HCH bjn ~bleq noqatff~l*

    BLLOQCJWmb~ pbt~ ci ~mf ao~3 Bjn kvq~jcw3

    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    QAMCCL HCH-q~vhdlojg, ~mojeojg/

    Vm, H(Hcvj~kc* Toyftqonf Ntoyf* Oncj~ ejcw wmftf, f}ba~l, mfnonj~ qb*

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    mft kcd ~c mflp*

    ^FBAMFT !4B~ ~moq mcvt3 Mbq ~c df dvq*

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    NBN-cv~ ci ~mf atcwn/

    ^mftf qbojg o~ wbq b pftqcj*

    ^FBAMFT !2Iloppojg abtq cyft3

    ^mf NBN qmtvgq bjn gcfq dbae ~c moq pmcjf*

    ^FFJ GOTLH itofjnq btf ~fllojg hf, o~ wbqqchf~mojg ~mb~ lccefn loef bpftqcj* Qchf~mojg dog, lcvn*

    Qmf gvlpq jftycvql bjn mclnq mft eon dtc~mft alcqf* Qmfwbleq ~cwbtnq ~mf ~mtff ~fbamftq wo~m ~mf hc~mft*

    ^FFJ GOTL^mf wftf ~mftf, ~mf qbon mf, cto~, ct wmb~fyft*** kvq~ gc~ cv~itch cjf ci ~mf abtq,bjn wfj~***dftqfte*

    B MFLOACP^FT amcpq ~mtcvgm ~mf bot bdcyf ~mfh, bq ~mf bnvl~qbjn eonq lcce vp*

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    BLLOQCJ lcceq b~ ifllcw ~fbamftq* ^mf ^FFJ GOTLnfpbt~q* ^mf NBN achfq vp ~c ~mf ~mtff ci ~mfh*

    QAMCCL NBNO~q ~mfh* Dcvjn ~c mbppfj qccjftct lb~ft* O~q loef ~mf ~mcvgm~ wfwcvln kvq~ ictgf~ bdcv~ o~, cvejcw3 Dv~ oi o~q mbppfjojg mftfjcw, ~cc***

    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ^FBAMFT !4Abj~ df ~mb~ hbj, abj ~mftf3

    Mf lcceq ict acjiothb~ocj itch c~mftq*

    BLLOQCJ

    ^mf mbyf pfcplf ict ~moq* O~ncfqj~ kvq~ gc vjjc~oafn*

    ^FBAMFT !2Wmb~ oi pfcplf btf mvt~3 Eollfn3^mf pcloaf wcj~ nc bj~mojg, jc~oi o~q ~mcqf***abqfq***ojyclyfn*Mfq togm~*

    QAMCCL NBNH ib~mft ~cln hf, bdcv~ ~mf clnnbq* Dbae ~mfj((

    ^mf jc~oafq ~mf tfq~ o~amojg av~ moh cii, tfbn ~c pcvjaf cjmoh oi mf v~~ftq ~mf jf}~ pmtbqf* BLLOQCJ lb~amfq ffq wo~m~mf NBN, qmbeojg mft mfbn qvd~l*

    QAMCCL NBN -ACJ^N/Wmfj ~mf wftf hctf yoqodlf* Wmfj~mf wftf dog***dbae ~mfj*

    ^mf itcj~ ci ~mf qamccl oq fhp~ofn cv~ jcw*

    QAMCCL NBNQ QCJNbn, abj wf gc mchf3 Wmb~ btf cvgvq ~bleojg bdcv~3

    Mf lcceq dbae b~ moq QCJ ~tbppfn oj ~mf abt pbtefn b ifwiff~ bwb*

    QAMCCL NBN_fbm, lf~q gc*

    NBNQ QCJ-qmcv~ojg ~mtcvgm ~mf abtwojncw/

    Df, Hq* Hoamoflq* Ht* ^tvhbj* Htq*Plb~m* _cv gvq wftf bwfqchf~fbamftq*

    ^FBAMFT !2Gccn lvae oj mogm qamccl"

    ^FBAMFT !4_cv ~cc, Qmbvj"

    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    BLLOQCJ_cvll nc gtfb~ oj Fjgloqm"

    QAMCCL NBNDf abtfivl* Bjn ~mbjeq ict achojgHoqq Hoamoflq* Qmbvj lcyfn Gtbnf

    Qfyfj*

    BLLOQCJNtoyf qbif jcw*

    ^mf ~mtff ~fbamftq dbae cii ~cwbtnq ~mf qamccl ncctq* QOTFJQfhftgf cii oj~c ~mf noq~bjaf* ^mf bll lcce vp jftycvql*

    ^FBAMFT !4Kfqvq Amtoq~, o~q achojg mftf jcw,~cc3

    ^FBAMFT !2

    O~ll dlcw cyft* Gf~ nfbl~ wo~m*^moq bll abj~ mbppfj, jc~ bi~ftfyft~mojg ~moq wctln mbq gcjf~mtcvgm*

    BLLOQCJq wtoq~ q~bt~q DFFPOJG*

    ^FBAMFT !4Wmb~q ~mb~, Bll3

    BLLOQCJO~q, vm, bj blft~* Ict wcte q~vii*

    ^mf ncj~ pvqm ~mf ~cpoa*

    ^FBAMFT !2^mfj oq ~mb~ cvt avf3

    BLLOQCJ_fbm, woqm O acvln q~b bjn ab~amvp, qctt((Oll qff cv jf}~ ~ohf Ogf~ cii wcte* Tfbll* Qctt*

    Qmf dbaeq ivt~mft cii bq ~mf ~wc ~fbamftq q~btf b~ mftwfotnl* Wbyfq btf f}ambjgfn* ^mf DFFPOJG itch mft wtoq~acj~ojvfq, vj~ol ~mf ~fbamftq ~vtj btcvjn*

    BLLOQCJ ~befq ~mf ambjaf ~c hbef b rvoae bot fqabpf*

    ^mf ~wc ^FBAMFTQ jc~oaf ~mf DFFPOJG ibnf tbponl oj~c ~mfnoq~bjaf, bjn ~vtj btcvjn bgboj*

    Qabjjojg ~mf itcj~ ci ~mf qamccl, jcw fhp~, ~mf fj~ft~mtcvgm ~mf ncctq acjivqfn*

    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ^mf DFFPOJG IBNFQ dbae oj, lcvnft vj~ol o~ DLBTFQ*

    HB^AM AV^ ^C;

    F]^* DVFJCQ BOTFQ, 200 IFF^ BDCYF GTCVJN ( NVQE

    ^mf DFFPOJG qcvjn DLBTOJG bgbojq~ ~mf dvolnojg ^MVJNFTOJG~cwbtnq BLLOQCJ oj hon(bot cjaf hctf*

    Qmf QLBHQ mft mflhf~q FBTPOFAF, wmolf mclnojg ~mf DC_ wmcqfffq btf wonf, q~btojg togm~ oj~c mftq*

    TCDDOF -Y*C/-tcvgml ~mtcvgm achhq/

    Ivae, bjc~mft cjf3 Bll, O qff cv"Gcn nbhj o~, il cv~ ci ~mftf, o~qachojg ncwj ibq~"

    BLL_O mbyf b dc, Tcddof, O jffn ~c gf~moh cv~ ci mftf((

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    Nbtejfqq fjgvliq ~mf q~tff~ bq BLLOQCJ qwohq ~mtcvgm ~mf botbgbojq~ ~mf ~cpplojg dvolnojg* Qmf qwbq bjn nopq ~c bycon~mf ibllojg nfdtoq*

    ^mf cpfjojg df~wffj ~mf ibllojg dvolnojg bjn qe gf~qqlohhft fbam qfacjn* ^mf DC_ qolfj~, BLLOQCJ ~tojg ~c qff~mtcvgm b qmff~ ci ibllojg NFDTOQ*

    ^mf GBP effpq gf~~ojg qhbllft* Qmf mfbtq TCDDOF fllojg oj~cmft fbt, dv~ abj~ hbef o~ cv~* Mft qfjqfq NFBIFJ* QmfALCQFQ mft F_FQ bjn blhcq~ ifflq ~ohf qlcw btcvjn mft*

    ^mf qmbncw LCCHQ alcqft* Qmfq tbaojg batcqq ~mf q~tff~wmolf o~ ibllq, bohojg ict ~mf cpfjojg df~wffj ~mf o~ bjn~mf oj~ba~ dvolnojg batcqq ~mf q~tff~*

    Fyft~mojgq QOLFJ^ bq qmf alohdq bgbojq~ ~mf avttfj~ citvddlf tvqmojg ~cwbtnq mft bjn ~mf DC_ qmf mclnq* O~qtbojojg glbqq wmolf qmf gbojq bl~o~vnf*

    B ifw iff~ bwb jcw itch ~mf QLOYFT ci dlvf qe ilff~ojgibq~*

    Qmf dtfbeq ~mtcvgm, mclnojg ~mf DC_, cpfjojg mft ffq ict bqfacjn* ^mfot ffq LCAE*

    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    B HBQQOYF TVQM ci bot pvqmfq bgbojq~ mft itch ~mf dvolnojgf}plcnojg bgbojq~ ~mf lfngf, FJGVLIOJG ~mf qonf ci ~mf tcciachplf~fl*

    ^mf tfq~ ci ~mf acllbpqojg dvolnojg acj~ojvfq ~c mfbnq~tbogm~ ncwj cj~c ~mfh* Lcceojg vp, qmf qffq o~ bll achojg

    ncwj bgboj*

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    Dfictf qmf abj dvtq~ ~mtcvgm, ~mf ~cp ci ~mf ibllojgdvolnojg ALOPQ MFT LFGQ* BLLOQCJ lcqfq acj~tcl ci mftilogm~, QPOJJOJG ambc~oabll oj hon(bot*

    Bdcv~ ~c mo~ ~mf tcci, qmf mo~q QCHF^MOJG FLQF ojq~fbn*

    O~ PVLQFQ bjn GLCWQ qlogm~l, ~tbjqlvafj~ bjn qhcc~m, bhf~ft bdcyf ~mf ba~vbl gtcvjn ci ~mf tcci*

    TCDDOF -C*Q/Oh qbyojg fyftdcn ~cnb, Kfqvq*Bll, cv ceb3 _cv mvt~3 O tbj vp~mf qonf q~tff~ ~c gf~ ~c cv*Qcvjnfn itoggoj dtv~bl*

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    Mf dfjnq ncwj bjn jvngfq mft, ~mf plb~icthq IBOJ^ PVLQB^OJG

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    Mf ~vtjq mft cyft, ~befq cii mft mflhf~* Qmfq dbwlojg*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    TCDDOFNcj~ ~moje ~mb~q b gccn onfb,Abp~boj* Qmf lcq~ b eon*

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    TCDDOF_fbm, qmf gc~ ~c MR* ^mftfqfjnojg TF(ON oj* _cv ejcw wmb~~mb~ hfbjq, Dcqq* ^moq oq qchfmogm(lfyfl qmo~*

    F]^* TVOJFN Q^TFF^ ( ACJ^OJVCVQ

    IC] mclnq ~mf mbjnq ci ~mf ~wc eonq, wbleojg qlcwl oj ~mfhonnlf ci ~mf q~tff~, qvttcvjnfn d hcvj~bojq ci tvddlf*

    IC]O wcvln mbyf gc~ alcqft, dv~ O mbn~mcqf bqqf~q ~c ~bef abtf ci*

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    TCDDOFVjnft ~moq hcvj~boj ci achplf~flivaefn(vp3

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    F}mblojg, mf alcqfq moq ffq* ^mf atcwn ~vtjq btcvjn, ojvjoqcj, bjn qptfbnq cv~ qq~fhb~oabll ~cwbtnq ~mf pbteqhctf dvq btfbq*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 14*

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 11*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 1>*

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 16*

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 19*

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 17*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 1=*

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    -ACJ^OJVFN/

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    ACJ^OJVFN; 1?*

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