English Final

PresentationBy: Andrew Sedano

Introduction Goals

Beginning Attitutde

Literacy Memoir

Discourse Community Project

• Engineering Lab Report

Over All Growth

Interactive Assignment

Goals Broaden my vocabulary

Improve the flow of my papers

Learn new formats

Able to create well defined papers

Literacy Memoir

Who are you as writer?

Who/what has influenced your writing?

What in your writing needs improvement?

Reflect on your past writing experiences

Liter

acy

Mem

oir

Part

I

Anticipations Steps

• Brainstorming• Journal entries• Proposal/Teacher Conference• 30 min. writing session

Peer Workshop• Multiple viewpoints• HOC (Higher Order Concerns)• LOC (Lower Order Concerns)

Improvements• Grammatical• Organization• Flow• Content

Example of Peer

Review

Example of

Peer Review

Literacy Memoir Part II

Anticipations• Confident

• Less grammatical mistakes

Steps• Eliminate all HOC

• Look over peer review and comments

• Accept/Not Accept changes Ms. Camargo’s Revisions

• More specific• Include better details

Literacy Memoir

Part III Anticipations

• Better organized

• Flows a lot smother

• More detailed Steps

• Eliminate all LOC• Consider Ms. Camargo’s revisions• Add more detailed and be more specific• Proper Format (MLA)

Improvements• Better flowing• Easily understandable• Well organized• No grammar mistakes

Literacy Memoir

ReflectionOverall

Improvement

Proper steps needed

in order to consider

something as your

final draft.

Learn how to peer

review

Better

organizational skills

Better flowing paper

Well developed

details

Continue to

have

problems…

Putting ideas to paper

Introductions/Conclusions

Better vocabulary

What Was

LearnedType of writer

Steps taken when

approaching a new

paper

Discourse

Community Project

What type of writing will you take part in in your future career?• Research

• Reports

• Design Packages

• Project Proposals

What writing conventions are preeminent in your Discourse Community?

• Chicago Manual Format

• Detailed

• Labeled

Engineering

Conventions

Engineering

Conventions

Disc

ours

e Co

mm

unity

Pro

ject

Anticipations Steps

• Research• Individual Report• Reflection

Camargo’s Revisions• Proper Format Correcting• Better Detail• Better Word Choice

DCP Revisions

DCP Reflection Learned

Type of writing styles and conventions

Jargon ENGR 1201

Other Discourse Communities

Improvements Well developed research Proper Formatting (MLA)

Overall Growth Revisions

Peer Editing

Organization

Better flowing paper

Formatting Skills

Journal Write

Questions

How has your attitude changed regarding peer review since that of your high school years? Why do you think this is? maturity, peer

workshop guidelines, etc.

THANK YOU

QUESTIONS?