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John Bradshaw
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Jessie Cohen
The House on Tipsico Trail
The second I stepped foot onto the 18 foot Boston Whaler docked outside 179 Tipsico
trail, the shiny little propeller at the back of the boat grabbed my attention as it moved the
mammoth vessel softly across the lake. The strange machine filled me with awe as it ripped
through the water at such speeds. As it was propelled through the chilled Michigan water on the
cozy lake south of Detroit, I could feel the misted air rushing past my face. My eyes became
filled with tears and the wind made it impossible to hear. Looking out from the boat I was staring
at the tiny two bedroom, one-bath cottage 50 of my extended family members called home every
Fourth of July week. To us it was more than just a home, it was a sanctuary, beneath the chaos
of feeding everyone for the week, everyone is relaxed, happy, and stress-free. No longer do the
pressures of making a quota for the quarter or working two jobs matter. Somehow everyone
always has a smile on their face no matter what their situation is, especially me. Unexpectedly I
fell in love with boats at an early age and this vacation was the one I dreamed about when history
class bored me.
The Keppel Family occupied the house on Tipsico Trail since the early fifties. The house
started out more modest than it is today, as a tiny hand built house overlooking the water-grass
area of an inlet. Since the fifties, my family has lived the house every year, even during the
seventies when construction on the new, more outlandish two-bedroom house began. My uncle
built the house by using his extensive knowledge of engineering, which is also my filled of
study. He was the project leader for the designs and construction of the Hummer H2 and loved to
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show off his creation. There was a giant oak tree that a storm blew into the swamp down their
driveway and conquering the root system of this fallen monster was no easy task, but not hard
enough for his creation. He switched his beast into off road and the car became alive, ready for
anything. As he drove over the stump, sensors read and reacted to the changing terrain, making
the car drive over the stump as seamlessly as driving over a pebble on the road. Riding shotgun
as just a 10-year-old boy I was filled with amazement at how this machine could accomplish
such a thing. Sitting next to my uncle as he controlled the beast into doing his every command
showed me that man, combined with machine, could defeat such a wickedness nature created. As
I gazed over at my uncle smiling, admiring his creation, like a cowboy would admire his horse
after a days work, I appreciated the companionship forged from the collaboration required of
both beings in order for the task to be accomplished. Each individual knew its role and
performed it as routinely as always, the practiced hands of my uncle communicating to the brute
what exactly he wants done and the machine communicating back just as equally.
I was not only interested in this machine; my family had a 1997 Sea Doo GTX that
became the source of my happiness. Every morning I would wake up before anyone and out of
my tent I would gaze upon the green jet ski, sitting in the perfectly still water, hoping that the
first person up would drive me around. Unfortunately, most mornings would result in an
unsuccessful attempt to get an able body to take me. The seldom mornings I could find someone,
I would experience a new kind of pleasure. Sitting, holding onto the steering wheel gliding on
water like a mirror, reflecting the trees and sky, smiling nonstop my heart would race from
excitement. My body becoming alive as adrenaline was pumped into my veins, coursing through
my body I felt my arms and legs tingling with exhilaration. Yet as I sat in front of my father,
holding onto the controls of such a reckless machine I was composed, from the illusion of having
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control of a situation I didn’t. I was composed because of where I was, on a calm lake encircled
by wilderness that only my family members were able to go. Also having my father right behind
me, guiding me through the water safely, gave me an extra sense of security. The simple
machine captured such opposite emotions creating a feeling that somehow I find myself craving,
like an addiction yet not quite as strong.
At the age of twelve I was able to take my Michigan boaters safety course and when I
passed I was allowed to drive the Sea Doo alone. I was now in control, and no longer had the
security of my father behind me. The adrenaline rush I developed wasn’t suppressed by my
father’s controlling presence. No longer was I being securely guided across the water but now I
was carving my own uncontrolled path with the feeling of invincibility overtaking my body.
Hearing the engine scream to seven thousand RPM’s immediately after I squeezed the throttle,
then being thrown back in my seat as water was sucked up, becoming the exhaust of a jet
impeller, made everything in perfect chaos. The jet ski raced from zero to sixty miles an hour in
less than 5 seconds and as I was racing down the lake faster than a cheetah I found my mind in
perfect solitude, a place where I have nothing but a smile on my face and untouched nature all
around me. Chaos surrounds me and still I feel at peace, with adrenaline flowing into my body
and a responsive machine beneath me I am at home. The morning drives turned into an all day
event; that machine and I were inseparable. The rest of the family wasn’t thrilled with my
extended time on the lake however I loved it. I rode the small green Sea Doo until it broke,
which happened a lot. We were, however, lucky enough to have an engineer and a Napa
salesman in the family. Even though the machine stopped often, they fixed the Sea Doo almost
as fast as it died.
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When it was broke I felt as if my own kid had been hurt. I became worried about it’s
health and started to do anything I could to ensure the full recovery. Looking at the broken
machine, sorrow would overcome my body, like a wave of depression from not being able to ride
and enjoy it. The Sea Doo was always on the back of my mind and because my lack of
knowledge there was nothing significant I could do to help. That feeling ate at me, I just wanted
to contribute, I wanted to help fix what I had broken so many times and because I couldn’t help,
I felt even worse. Anytime I could help, even if it was as simple as handing my uncles the right
tools I was there doing it. Eventually I became familiar with the most basic workings and quick
fixes, which helped ease my mind of the feeling of helplessness and made me a contributor to the
cause. I started out handing tools to the same uncle who built the house, and as I would do so he
became very good at teaching me what he was doing and why he was doing it. He taught me how
to change spark plugs, flush an engine, tighten an exhaust manifold and much more. Learning
from my uncle, a person who loved and cared about me, how to fix something I love and care
about, became a connecting experience that I was able to share with family and began to develop
an interest beyond the pleasure of driving it on the lake. My interest was created by a machine I
love but developed further by my family that I love even more.
The whole reason we gathered at the lake was to be with family, my cousins and I were
always together. Our favorite thing to do together was to be slung at high speeds into waves
while laying down on a tube holding on with every fiber in our being. I was the smaller of my
two older cousins so accordingly I was put in the middle of the tube to reduce leg swings and
change handles swiftly. I had a very important job to do even though I didn’t always want to do
it. Tubing at the beginning of each week is fun but as the week went on it became more of a
chore to get on with my warrior cousins than a pleasure. We would come out, elbows and knee’s
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worn raw, covered with “tube burn,” chafing our bodies to the point where a simple task became
a major irritation. We were forced to buy shooters sleeves in attempt to reduce the pain and
continue being whipped and rattled behind the “Sunbird,” a classic boat from the 80s.
This Great blue vessel became an instant icon the year it was introduced. It was the
perfect boat that balanced speed, maneuverability, and wake setting ability. My cousins and I
loved that thing and everything it was capable of, obviously it hadn’t superseded my love of the
Sea Doo but it was close. I always sat up front when I was on the boat, looking back seeing it
and trying to take it all in. Same as the sea doo, I was able to drive it one day when I was 15
years old. Driving this great blue machine around the lake gave me an incredible power rush. Not
only was I in control of myself but I controlled the other people who were on the boat as well.
They got to experience whatever I wanted them to. Eventually, after years of practice, I was
christened the driver for pulling tubers, which thrilled me beyond belief. I would get to drive a
boat as hard as I could in order to make the people fall, being as reckless as possible and geting
away with it. Eventually that boat was retired after a tragic inner engine accident, possibly
caused by years of reckless driving, and now is in a junkyard. The new home of the great blue
Sunbird is more tragic that I first realized, one of my greatest memories growing up is now gone
forever, never to be seen by my cousins or me again. A part of my child and young adulthood
died along with that boat. No longer will I be able to pull up the driveway and see the blue vessel
docked at the end, teasing me to drive it. Although where there is loss there is room for growth,
and next year a spot on the dock is open to be filled with a newer better boat.
To be replaced new technology needs to be engineered and that open spot in the dock has
made me think if I can change a design for the better. The adrenaline so many kids experience
from machines, just as I did, could be heightened. After coming to this place year after year the
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machine became more complex and I developed a relationship with the wonders they can do.
They have helped me grow and accompanied me in my journey to adulthood. As I gained more
control in life I was also able to control machine more also. I’ve always been intrigued with them
and recently I’ve been able to work with them but now I’m able to study mechanical
engineering, making me able to comprehend the full ingenuity behind what makes these amazing
designs work so well.