empowering parents to support literacy instruction compiled by dr. zackory kirk, ela coordinator...
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Empowering Parents to Support Literacy Instruction
Compiled by Dr. Zackory
Kirk, ELA
CoordinatorSpring 2015
Literacy Starts at home and spreads
abroad!The single most significant factor influencing a child’s early educational success is an introduction to books and being read to at home prior to beginning school. National Commission on Reading, 1985
Two-thirds of students who cannot read proficiently by the end of the 4th grade will end up in jail or on welfare. BegintoRead.com
In middle-income neighborhoods the ratio of books per child is 13 to 1, in low-income neighborhoods, the ratio is 1 age-appropriate book for every 300 children. Neuman, Susan B. and David K. Dickinson, ed. Handbook of Early Literacy Research, Volume 2. New York, NY: 2006, p. 31.
Henry County Literacy Data
Our New Georgia Milestones!
Content Area/Course
Test Section(s)
Minimum Time Per
Section(s)
Maximum Time Per
Section(s)
English Language Arts
1 and 2 60 70
English Language Arts
3 70 90
Mathematics 1 and 2 60 80
Science 1 and 2 50 70
Social Studies 1 and 2 50 70A section may not be stopped until the minimum allotment of time has expired. If students are still productively engaged with the test content, the maximum amount of time, per section, may be given in 10 minute increments.
Note: These time limits do not apply to those students who have the accommodation of extended time.
Georgia MilestonesWriting at Every Grade
– All students will encounter a constructed-response item allowing for narrative prose, in response to text, within first or second section of the test.
– Within the writing section of the test, students will read a pair of passages and complete a series of “warm-up” items:o 3 selected-response items asking about the salient
features of each passage and comparing/contrasting between the two passages
o 1 constructed-response item requiring linking the two passages
o 1 writing prompt in which students must cite evidence to support their conclusions, claims, etc.
GenresWriting prompts will be informative/explanatory or opinion/argumentative depending on the grade level. Students could encounter either genre.
Warning: Students who simply rewrite excerpts from the passage(s) to illustrate their point(s) will not receive favorable scores.
Let’s Look at a Released Item
Standards to be Assessed
ELACC9RL.1: Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.ELACC9RI.1: Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. ELACC9RL.2: Determine theme or central idea of text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.ELACC9L.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.ELACC9L.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
Passage
Paired Passage #1: An informational essay about a science teacher’s exploration of The Great Barrier Reef off the coast of Australia. A detailed description of the characteristics of coral reefs is given.
Paired Passage #2: A poem entitled “The Aquarium” which gives a detailed, colorful description of the tank’s inhabitants.
Constructed Response TaskELACC9RL.1; ELACC9RI.1; ELACC9RL.2;
ELACC9L.1; ELACC9L.1
This task has more than one (1) part. Read each part carefully and respond.
Part A Identify and list colors mentioned in the article and poem. In your list, include the phrases in which these colors are described.
Part BUsing the above list, analyze how the authors’ use of color helps the reader imagine marine life.
Be sure to complete ALL parts of the task.Use details from the text to support your answer.Answer with complete sentences, and use correct punctuation and grammar.
Score Designation Description4 Thoroughly
DemonstratedThe student demonstrates a thorough understanding of the article and poem by correctly identifying and listing colors mentioned in the texts. The student lists the phrases in which the colors are described. The student also explains how the authors’ use of color helps the reader to imagine marine life. The response includes many specific details from the texts and correct sentence, punctuation and grammar.
3 Clearly Demonstrated
The student demonstrates a clear understanding of the article and poem by correctly identifying and listing colors mentioned in the texts. The student lists most of the phrases in which the colors are described. The student states how the authors’ use of color helps the reader to imagine marine life. The response includes a few relevant details from the texts; some details may be general. The student uses mostly correct sentences, punctuation and grammar.
2 Basically Demonstrated
The student demonstrates a basic understanding of the article and poem by identifying a few of the colors mentioned in the texts. The student includes a few of the phrases in which the colors are described. The student states how the authors’ use of color helps the reader to imagine marine life. The response includes minimal support; some support may be incorrect or irrelevant. The student uses some correct sentences, punctuation and grammar.
1 Minimally Demonstrated
The student demonstrates little understanding of the article and poem by correctly identifying one color, phrase mentioned in the texts, but does not state how the authors’ use of color helps the reader to imagine marine life. The response includes no support from the texts and has significant errors in sentence construction and/or in using correct punctuation and grammar.
0 Incorrect or Irrelevant
The response is incorrect or irrelevant.
Exemplar Response
Part A
scarlet reds
amethyst purples
emerald greens
sapphire blues
yellow iridescence
silver shiftings
white bubbles
grey shadows
straw-coloured
shimmer
smear of rose, black
gold lawn
Part B
The authors’ use of details that describe bright, radiant colors helps the reader to imagine marine life by illustrating its vividness and beauty. For example, the poet helps the reader imagine a specific type of fish by describing them as “Blue brilliance cut by black bars/An oblong pane of straw-coloured shimmer….”
In the article, the author helps the reader to imagine the coral reef’s “scarlet reds, amethyst purples, emerald greens, and sapphire blues….”
Just like a painter uses colors to bring her canvass to life, the authors describe different colors to bring their texts to life.
The response completes Part A by listing many colors from the text and gives the detail from Part B.
Remember:There can be more than one correct answer for constructed response items.
Student ResponseScore 1
part A- the colors mentioned are streaks of green and yellow,silver-gold,grey-green opaqueness,sharp white bubbles,.
part2- the author uses the colors to help the reader visualize what the author is talking about.
The student demonstrates a little understanding of the article and poem by correctly identifying a few colors and most of the phrases in which these colors were described.
Although the response includes an attempt to analyze how the authors’ use of color helps the reader to imagine marine life, it is not supported with details from the texts.
The response is too brief to demonstrate more than an inconsistent command of the conventions of standard English.
