DOLMr. Hilding

English 8

8/26/14

1. we have drank all of the fruit punch eric but mother will buy some more for we kids (8+ errors)

2. they arrived late they missed the beginning of the

movie raiders of the lost ark (8+ errors)

8/27/14

3. will you read the novel time warp or will you read the magazine article scientific mysteries over the weekend (9+ errors)

4. i will lay down for a while go watch the movie gandhi (5+ errors)

8/29/14

5. marti and me have ate our lunches

therefore well carry the boxes to the

room (7+ corrections)

6. unless you lay down for a while youll

collaspe from overwork (6+ corrections)

9/2/14

7. inside of the room you could see how good he had sat the dineing room table (6+corrections)

8. vicky is the better of the four athletes but she cant be at all the games (6+corrections)

9/3/14

9. i and my brother seen the movie young

frankenstein at the majestic theater (10+)

10. their are two girls who are reading the

short story called the indian swing theyll share it in class (10+)

9/10/14

11. betty exclaimed donot touch That hot pan (8+)

12. i should of wore them gloves but i

returned them back to my Sister?

(8+)

9/11/14

13. to be specific the chicago tribune is

different from the chicago sun-times

because the former contains more

sections (10+)

14. he telled we students to re take

the test as a result of hour bad grades (6+)

9/12/14

15. to enjoy a shakespearean play like

hamlet a person should read it before

seeing it i believe (8+)

16. Since donnas poem entitled springtime won first prize. mr harris our teacher read it to us (12+)

9/15/14

21. the japanese company has began to

develop to new computers and they

plan to market there producks next year (7+)

22. roy read carls popular mechanics magazine since carl has already wrote his report (10+)

9/16/14

23. cindy she don’t borrow her bicycle to

many people however she will leave a

friend use it (8+)

24. holy cross church must of purchased the

twenty nine trees for it’s landscaping project (7+)

9/17/14

5. if you had shook the malt good you could of drank it easy (7+)

6. please do the following things mail that package type the lists straightening the books and phoning mrs smith (10+)

9/18/14

25. this here quote appeared on the poster be not the first by whom the new is tried

(7+)

26. the sun will of rose over the catskill mountains by 610 AM tomorrow (7+)

9/19/14

7. ive never had no desire to have him learn me how to drive because hes to critical (7+)

8. i would of froze that corn but I couldnt get it off of the cob (7+)

9/22/14

27. that woman who is buying a ticket must like to travel alot because she has went to europe every summer for the past ten years (7+)

28. i ran further then the other forty nine people i believe (7+)

9/23/14

29. has sarah took my book again asked george angrily (8+)

30. this rose colored dish was gave to my

my mother and i by my Aunt who lives in savannah (9+)