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Destiny

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Fahrenheit 451

• Level 2 and Level 3 Questions

BW

• How can you manipulate transitional phrases to be more creative with them?– To begin, Facebook is a

hindrance to social relationships.

– For example, people create false identities and lie to portray an ideal image.

– Furthermore, people troll other people just because it is the internet and they can.

– Lastly, in real life, people are completely different than how they are on the internet .

Objective & Purpose

• Answer the following prompt in two expository body paragraphs: how did the Cold War affect Americans during the 1950’s?

– Gain an understanding for the different ways we can support and elaborate a topic

– FOCUS: Cohesion through transitional expressions

• What is the structure for a paragraph?

Expository Paragraph

Writing to Inform

Prompt: Explain the best, or most important, sport in the world today.

Writing to Inform (Model)

Prompt: What is one show that should be cancelled from television?

PAC


• Topic Sentence – Tyr

• Topic Sentence (Model)– The Bachelor should be

cancelled from television because it promotes negative behavior.


• Topic Sentence

• Explanation



• Explanation– (By this I mean) people

don’t learn positive behaviors from it.


• Topic Sentence

• Explanation

• Support/Elaboration



• Explanation– (By this I mean) people

don’t learn positive behaviors from it.

• Support/Elaboration

Expository ParagraphSupport/Elaboration

TS: The Bachelor should be cancelled from television because it promotes negative behavior.

• Example– For example, the bachelor offers feelings to multiple women.

• Description (Literal)– He will go on a date with one girl, and less than an hour later, he will go on a date with another girl.

• Description (Figurative)– It’s as if the contestants on the show are nothing more than a pair of shoes at the shoe store: try one on,

and if you don’t like it, move on to the next one.

• Personal Experience– In my own experience, I have seen men form relationships with one person, while simultaneously

intriguing others with no care for the emotional damage.

• Cause and Effect– If a young person sees adults acting so carelessly for other’s emotions, it will only lead to this young

person doing the same thing.

• Comparison/Contrast– Like the show, social media acts as a similar platform for a lack of morality because it allows people to

engage in relationships with multiple people.

• Another’s experience– Recently, my friend was in a 6 month relationship with his girlfriend until he found out that she had been

seeing someone else via Facebook; if not for the acceptance of infidelity in our society, would something like this have happened?


Support/Elaboration • Example• Description (Literal)• Description (Figurative)• Personal Experience• Cause and Effect• Comparison/Contrast• Another’s experience

Expository ParagraphRed Bow Conclusion

• Generalize/Hypothesize/Predict– Connect the purpose to the world

at large.– Say something profound on behalf

of the topic. – Make a connection to society.– Make a prediction on behalf of the

sport.– Make a hypothesis as to the sports

future impact. on the world/society.

The Bachelor, therefore, should be immediately taken off the air because for future generations it can destroy any sense of morality that is ultimately fading in the vain world of today.

Objective

• Answer the following prompt in two expository body paragraphs: how did the Cold War affect Americans during the 1950’s?– Must incorporate example from an online article +

two additional pieces of support/elaboration per paragraph

– Paragraph #2 must have a red bow conclusion – Must have two examples of the Em Dash

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