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Composition II
Process Analysis Paragraph
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lWhat Is a Process Analysis?
lWhen a writer lists the steps involved in how to accomplishsomething, he is outlining a process.
l A process can be a series of actions, changes, steps, operations,or functions that achieve a particular end or result. A process essayfocuses on the “how” rather than the “what.” If the audience is not
well informed about the subject, the process will have to bedetailed. If the audience is well informed, then the process willhave more technical vocabulary and less detail.
lSome process essays provide information while others providesteps on how to do something.
l Whether the essay provides information or tells someone how todo something, the essay must follow a logical procedure. All itemsmust follow an order, such as what you do first, second, and third.
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Example
•Things to do if you have flu (How to recover the
flu)
•Braimstorming
•What do you do when you have the flu? •Drink lots of fluids (water hot tea etc.)
•Take medicine
•Get plenty of sleep •See the doctor
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•Topic Sentence: Recovering from the flu may
not be easy but there are several things that you
can do to help relieve the symptoms.
•Process •1 Drink lots of fluids
•-Water, hot tea etc. to relieve sore throat
•2 Take medicine •Carefully choose type: are you allergic to any
ingredients
•Daytime nighttime?: can make you drowsy:
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Unit 8, Page 99
lTopic: Preparing an interview (what you do)
lControlling Idea: Getting the job you want (Why you do it)
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lHow to Write a Process Analysis
Paper Step one: Choose an interesting and informative topic. Thereare a wide variety of topics dealing with an invention, a scientificprocess, a mechanical process, or a natural process.
lExamples: lHow was the universe formed?lHow did the American Civil War begin?lHow was penicillin invented?lHow is liquor made?lHow does one fix a carburetor?lHow can one make an enchilada?
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lStep two:2. Divide the process into a few main steps and describe
each step clearly, making sure that all essential technical
terminology is defined.The pattern of a Process Analysis paragraph looks like this,
with all steps arranged in proper order:
lTopic Sentence
l1. Step 1
l2. Step 2
l3. Step 3
lConcluding Sentence
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lStep three:
l Show the end result of the process.
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Topic sentence
lPresent the process your attitude towards the process.
lTell why you tell the process: What will the reader do at the end?
lNumber of the steps may be included.
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l A process paragraph or essay is
organized chronologically.
Chronological order addscoherence to the essay. You must
present the steps in the correct
order.
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lI should be able to recreate the
process that you describe.
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Transitions
lFirst, second, next, now, then, finally,
before, after, once, as soon as,while, during, over, between + noun
phrase
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How to succeed in the ESL program
How to stay in a relationship
How to speak English quicklyHow to begin taking classes at BCC
Getting good tips while you work as
a waiter or waitress
lHow to make friends in the U.S.A
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What is Process Analysis Paragraph
•You divide a process into separate steps
•Explain the steps in chronological, or time order
•Ends with a specific result- something that
happens at the end of the process
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A process analysis paragraph
•Explains a sequence or process
•Presents facts and details in chronological order
•Uses time words or phrases
•Ends with a specified result
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A process paper either tells the
reader how to do something or
describes how something is
done.
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So, thinkabout your
topic . . . .
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#1.What process
are you trying
to explain?
Why is it
important?
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#2 Whoor what
does theprocess
affect?
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#3 Are there different ways
of doing the process? If so,
what are they?
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#4
Who are thereaders? What
knowledge dothey need to
understand thisprocess?
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#5What skills/equipment are
needed for this?
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#6 How long
does thisprocess take?
Is the
outcome
always the
same?
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# 7
How many
steps arethere in the
process?
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#8 Why is
each stepimportant?
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#9
Whatdifficulties are
involved ineach step?
How can theybe overcome?
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#10 Do any cautionsneed to be given?
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#11 Doesthe process
havedefinitions
that need tobe clarified?
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#12 Are there other processes
that are similar and could help
illustrate the process that you
are writing about?
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Process papers are often
written in the second person(you), but some teachers
prefer that you avoid this.
Yes, for me you
may use 2nd
person!
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Unit 8, Page 100-101
lOutline of a (how-to) process paragraph
lTS:Careful preparation before an interview is the key to get the job.
l1. Employer
l2. Talents
l3. List of the questions
l4. Rehearsal
l5. Outfit
lConcluding Sentence
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Appropriate level of
technicality Write for general readersunless you know readers havethe relevant background and
skills; do three things:
1. Give enough background soreaders understand why they
should follow your instructions.People who know why they aredoing something usually do a
better job than those whodon't.
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Appropriate level of
technicality 2. Give appropriately detailedexplanations so that readercan understand what the
instructions say to do.
3. Give examples that willshow readers how to follow
the procedure correctly.
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Chapter 8; Page 101
T.S: Many experts believe that recovery from addiction, whether alcohol or drugs, has1. Admission of the problem
1.1 desire to quit
1.2 seek help
1.2.1 AA
1.2.2. Treatment groups
2. Withdrawal
2.1 stops using substance
2.2 a physical emotional painful experience
3. Positive changes
3.1 ways of spending time
3.2 finding pleasures3.3 care for body
3.4 family & friends
4. Staying off drugs (open-ended)
Concluding Sentence: rewards of self-esteem …...
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Chapter 8, Page 105: Outline of a process paragraphlT.S: If you want to overcome shyness and feel comfortable at any party,
lyou can do it by following several steps.
l1. Personal development
1.1 Consult a psychologist1.2 Attend communication classes
1.3 Read self-development books
2. Practical exercises
2.1 Attend dancing courses/classes
2.2 House parties with close friends or family
2.2.1 Attend house parties
2.2.2 Organize house parties2.3 Rehearse in front of the mirror
2.3.1 Smile while speaking
2.3.2 Breath regularly
2.3.3 Watch your body language (Beden dilini dikkatli kullan)
3. Outlook
3.1 Hair
3.2 Make-up3.3 Attractive outfit
3.3.1 Elegant dressing
3.3.2 attractive accessories
C.S.: By following these steps you will make sure that you become the most
popular person in any party.
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Assignment Due 15 March 2012
lWrite a topic sentence by filling in the blanks and make an outline of a process paragr lThen write the paragraph.
lThe assignments should be written in the form published on the link. If the link does n
lhttp://www.mersindilbilim.info/courses/1st-year/spring/composition-ii/