communication disorders (271.150) writing workshop 1
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271.150 WRITING WORKSHOP
Professional writing style
Assignment requirements and structure
Part A suggestions for sections
APA References
APA Referencing quiz
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PROFESSIONAL WRITING STYLE
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Sadly, the impact of xx is not limited to sufferers’ communicative abilities. It can have a devastating impact on their social lives, and personal relationships can fall apart (Brown, 2002).
What’s wrong with example 1?
The effects of Syndrome A are not limited to communicative abilities, but impact significantly on every area of an individual’s social life, and in particular, their ability to maintain personal relationships (Brown, 2002).
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An embolism happens when a detached fragment of plaque blocks an artery, this prohibits blood from flowing, this is one of the most common causes of strokes (Twyford, 2006).
What’s wrong with example 2?
An embolism occurs when a detached fragment of plaque blocks an artery, preventing blood flow. Embolisms are one of the most common causes of strokes (Twyford, 2006).
Improved version
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Key features of professional writing
Concise
Objective
Precise
Evidence-based
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ASSIGNMENTS
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ASSIGNMENT REQUIREMENTS AND STRUCTURE
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ASSIGNMENT – RESEARCH TIPS
• Identify key points from the video and find out more about these (as well as other basic information about the disorder) by reading your textbook and other library books.
• Use keywords from your overview to search databases – e.g. Discover, MedLine, EBSCO Host Health Database search etc.
• Use the titles and abstracts of articles to decide if the article is worth reading.
• If you find a good recent article, look in the reference list and search within the same journal for others.
• Select articles which are easier to understand and more relevant to parts of this assignment and aim for a balance between review articles and research reports.
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PART A: SUGGESTIONS FOR SECTIONS
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INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Aim to start as you mean to go on – clear, concise and evidence-based writing.
The reader will want to know:
• Basic facts about the communication disorder.• The purpose, focus and structure of the report.
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INTRODUCTION: EXAMPLE
Madeupia is one of the most common acquired communication disorders, affecting up to 20% of people who have had a traumatic brain injury. The disorder occurs as a result of injury to xxx, affecting the individual’s ability to xx (Smith & Jones, 2008; Singh, 2009). Physical manifestations range from xx to xx. Nearly half of the people who develop madeupia recover most of their communication skills within six months, but for others, the effects are persistent (Briggs & Florey, 2014). This report summarises the key features of the disorder, its impact on individuals and major approaches to speech-language therapy interventions.
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BODY PARAGRAPHS
• As with the introduction, focus strongly on clarity and conciseness.
• Explain the key point or points, supporting this where possible with references to research evidence.
• No need to keep referring to the videos or the people in them.
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BODY PARAGRAPHS: EXAMPLE 1
SLTs can also provide individuals with madeupia with physical cues to help them to shape the oral articulators during speech (Blade & Runner, 2013). These TKP (tactilekinesthetic-proprioceptive) cues physically guide the speech movements of the individual during speech. They also provide the individual with ongoing feedback on their control of the oral articulators. The frequency of prompting is gradually reduced to allow the individual to develop confidence in their ability to sense and control the articulators independently (Lock, Stock, & Barrel, 2013). It is recommended that individuals practise at home in order to stabilise and generalise their skills (Blade & Runner, 2013).
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BODY PARAGRAPHS: EXAMPLE 2
Madeupia is a complex condition which requires individualised programmes of intervention. As it is prevalent among Maori and Pasifika populations, I will need to develop my cultural understanding and practice, particularly as several interventions involve touching the articulators, which is not traditionally regarded as culturally safe within Maori culture (Bright, 2016). I will need to communicate clearly with clients and ensure they are comfortable before beginning any assessment or treatment. This practice is essential in order to uphold the first ethical principle which guides SLT practice in New Zealand/Aotearoa (NZSTA, 2015). Individualised interventions are based on accurate assessment and interpretation of evidence, which are especially challenging in relation to madeupia (Taylor, 2011), so these are key competencies (NZSTA, 2015), which I will need to develop in order to plan and deliver effective treatment for these clients.
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CONCLUSION
As with the introduction, focus strongly on clarity and conciseness.
Aim to summarise the key facts about the condition, its impacts and the effectiveness of SLT in about five sentences.
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CONCLUSION: EXAMPLE
Madeupia is one of the most prevalent communication disorders in young adults. The disorder affects the individual’s …. and therefore impairs their participation in …. While there is no cure, a number of treatments and therapies are available which can alleviate the symptoms and allow an individual to xx. Speech-language interventions focus on bb and have been shown to be effective in cc.
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APA REFERENCES
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BOOK
Hamel, G. (2000). Leading the revolution. Boston, MA: Harvard Business School Press.
surname, initial
(year) title city publisher
For more than one author, include all names with initials (followed by . and ,)
Hubbard, J., Thomas, C., & Varnham, S. (2001). Principles of law for New Zealand business students (2nd ed.). Auckland, New Zealand: Pearson Education.
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CITY OF PUBLICATION
UK, NZ etc city, countryHarmondsworth, England: Penguin.Palmerston North, New Zealand: Dunmore Press.
USAcity, state initials
Upper Saddle River, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.
Check title of book in library catalogue and/or Google if city of publication is not clear from the book itself
AustraliaEither state OR country
Milton, Qld: McGraw-Hill.Milton, Australia: McGraw-Hill.
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CHAPTER INEDITED BOOK
Biggins, G. (2009). Why I became a social worker. In P. Te Ara & T. Rogers (Eds.), Social work and social workers in New Zealand/Aotearoa (pp.102-120). Auckland, New Zealand: Insight Press.
Title of chapter – not in italics
Editors’ names – initial goes before and (Eds.), goes after!
Title of book – in italics
Page numbers of chapter – in brackets with pp. before
Author of chapter and year of publication
City & Publisher
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JOURNAL REFERENCE
Silverblatt, A. (2004). Media as a social institution. American Behavioral Scientist, 48(1), 35-42.
author’s nameyear Title (no italics)
journal name (italics)
volume & issue number
page numbers
doi:10.1080/09585190802707433
doi number (if the article has one)
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WEB PAGE REFERENCE
Statistics New Zealand. (2009). Mapping trends in the Auckland region. Retrieved from http://www.stats.govt.nz/Publications/PopulationStatistics/mapping-trends-in-the-auckland-region.aspx.
author’s name (or organisation that owns the web site)
Year (if it’s missing put (n.d.)
Retrieved from followed by full internet address
Title of page
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Write the list normally – with each reference ‘left-aligned’ like this:
Silverblatt, A. (2004). Media as a social institution. American Behavioral Scientist, 48(1), 35-42.
Select the whole list.
Click on the ‘paragraph’ tab and on ‘special’.
Select ‘hanging’.
Click on ‘OK’. The references change to this:
Silverblatt, A. (2004). Media as a social institution. American Behavioral Scientist, 48(1), 35-42.
Smile – it’s over!
How to indent a reference list (PC)
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Article Title: Rethinking aphasia therapy: A neuroscience perspectiveAuthor: Rosemary VarleyJournal: International Journal of Speech-Language Pathology (Vol. 13, Issue 1)DOI: 10.3109/17549507.2010.497561Page numbers: 11-20Year: 2011
A holistic and concrete approach to therapy for aphasia uses sensory-perceptual tasks to reconnect functional and non-functional components of processing systems ( ___________________).
__________. (2011). Rethinking aphasia therapy: A neuroscience perspective. International Journal of Speech-Language Pathology, ______________.
doi: 10.3109/17549507.2010.497561
Complete the citation and end-of-text reference for this article.
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A holistic and concrete approach to therapy for aphasia uses sensory-perceptual tasks to reconnect functional and non-functional components of processing systems (Varley, 2011).
Varley, R. (2011). Rethinking aphasia therapy: A neuroscience perspective. International Journal of Speech-Language Pathology, 13(1), 11-20.
doi: 10.3109/17549507.2010.497561
CITATION
END-OF-TEXT REFERENCE
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Which of these is the correct in-text citation for the video about Michael, which you’ll be looking at to prepare for assignment part A?
• … blah, blah, blah (RALLI, 2013).
• … blah, blah, blah (YouTube, n.d.).
• … blah, blah, blah (retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpdjP0zHeBc).
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Which of these is a correct end-of-text reference for the video about Michael?
RALLI. (2013). Speech and language therapy: Helping Michael. Retrieved from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpdjP0zHeBc
RALLI. (2013, March 27). Speech and Language Therapy: Helping Michael. Mountain View, CA: Google Inc.
Raising Awareness of Language Learning Impairments. (2013). Speech and Language Therapy: Helping Michael. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpdjP0zHeBc. Accessed March 11, 2016.
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REFERENCING QUIZ
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Use APA interactive (at http://owll.massey.ac.nz) and the Handy Guide to APA Referencing (which is included in the essential documents section of the Stream site).
Considering attending a library workshop on Endnote.
Log on to take part in the Study Up session on APA referencing on March 23rd (7.30 am / 12.00 pm or 7.00 pm). See tinyurl.com/studyup2017.
Between March 27th and April 4th , you are welcome to email me your draft reference list for part A ([email protected]).
I’ll give you feedback on the format and style (but don’t expect me to correct each mistake!).
To learn more about referencing …
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