CM 220 Unit 4 Seminar

Thesis statements, the writing process, Thesis statements, the writing process, and APA Citationsand APA Citations

Unit 4 discussion Create and analyze a reference using the APA style. Refer to the readings and Writing Center library

(Research, APA, & Plagiarism) for assistance OR Consult an APA manual (if you have one) or go to

APA.org

STEP 1: Choose one of the references you have found on your topic and describe what type of source it is (for example, a book, an article in a magazine or newspaper, a journal article etc.).  Knowing what type of source you have is an important part of properly citing that source!

Unit 4 discussion Step 2: Create a proper, full citation for your References

page.  Be sure to pay close attention to spacing and punctuation. While you cannot indent in the discussion board posts, you can now italicize!

Step 3: Write a sentence (or more) using that same reference with an in-text citation.  You may paraphrase or use a direct quote, but again, be sure to pay close attention to spacing and punctuation and do not plagiarize the source!

Step 4: Discuss why you used this particular format and why you believe it is correct. Mention any resources that were helpful to you in constructing the citation.

Unit 4 Discussion Response Step 5: Review your classmates' posts.  Do they

appear correct?  Are there any problems with the format they used?  What about punctuation?  Provide a thoughtful response for ONE classmate that will help him or her more clearly understand the APA Style of citation (100-250 words).

You may want to consult a citation tool like bibme.org to see if your classmate’s citation is similar to the format provided by the generator. Also, for articles available in the Kaplan library, compare the citation to the one provided in the database.

Unit 4 discussion post example1: I found an article from a newspaper in the Newspaper source database of the Kaplan

library.

2. Doe, J. (2008, May 17). What are those ingredients? New York Times. Retrieved from http://libsys.uah.edu.kaplan.uah.edu/kaplan/.

3. While preservatives increase the shelf life of food and allow consumers to eat out-of-season fruits and vegetables, experts like Dr. Smith worry that these chemicals are contributing to the rising obesity rate (Doe, 2008).

 4. I looked up how to cite a newspaper article in the Writing Center library; the reading was titled “Basic Guidelines for APA, 6th Edition.” Since we were still using the 5th edition when I took CM 107, I did notice few changes. The first part of the citation is the same: start with the author's last name (followed by a comma), first initial (with a period), then the year, month, and date published (followed by a period). APA 6th edition uses 2 spaces after each period instead of one. Next comes the article title with only the first word capitalized (followed by a period), then the newspaper name, italicized. The retrieval information is a bit different in 6th edition; no date is given, and the library URL is used if no DOI (digital object identifier) is available.

Unit 4 projectUnit 4 projectDue on Tuesday (last day of unit 4)100 points Include your revised persuasive thesis statementDescribe at least 3 main points that you plan to

include in your draftDiscuss at least one potential objection to your

argument and how you will address itProvide APA reference page citations for two

sources and a short description/discussion of those two sources

See the samples posted in unit 4 and Doc Sharing

Persuasive thesis statements—what should they do?Take on a subject upon which reasonable

people could disagree Deal with a subject that can be adequately

treated given the nature of the assignment Express one main idea Assert your conclusion(s) about a subject—

take a position!Use words like “because,” “since,”

“therefore,” etc. to show relationships between ideas.

Example Weak: Adoption is a very serious issue, so

people who decide to give up a child or adopt a child need to think about it carefully.

Better: The United States needs to create national adoption laws because this will ensure that biological and adoptive parents as well as adopted children are clear about their rights.

Three possible pointsSince states currently have different laws,

parents may be confused about what their rights are and whether the law holds for the state where the adoptive or biological parents live.

National laws concerning the rights of adopted children to find biological parents would also be helpful.

International adoptions would have to abide by specific, national American laws as well.

Opposition points and issues to considerShouldn’t states have the right to set up their

own adoption laws, as they currently do? Who would decide what the national laws

should be?Would the laws favor biological or adoptive

parents? For example, states like Florida have very short periods for biological parents to change their minds about the adoption, while other states have a period of several months.

What about issues like single-parent adoption or same-sex couple adoption?

Source Arkansas adopts ban on adoption, foster care by unmarried

couples. (2008, November 12). Education Week, 5, 6-10. Retrieved November 4, 2009, from Academic Search Premier.

This article demonstrates how different states have developed specific laws concerning who can (and cannot) adopt. National guidelines outlining who could adopt would help to reduce confusion. What if an unmarried couple from California wanted to adopt a child from Arkansas? Would the Arkansas law apply, or the California law? National laws would make cross-state adoptions less complicated, and it would also ensure that more conservative states did not adopt such stringent guidelines that orphans could not get adopted.

What is APA?• American Psychological Association: Standard

for writing that is widely used by writers in the social sciences, education, business and psychology.

• Most Kaplan courses require it.• Guides the layout of the document• Requires parenthetical citations in the body of

the essay• Uses a reference page with full citations for

each source cited in-text • Exception: interviews or other personal

communications that cannot be retrieved are only cited in-text

Changes in 6th edition

• New edition—number 6--has some slight differences from the 5th edition

• The Writing Center has posted new documents that reflect these changes

• Main changes1.DOI2.Spacing after periods (2 instead of 1)3.Title page

Why do I need to cite my sources? Enhance credibility Provide proper credit to your sources Give reader necessary information to

find sources and do further research

Remember, citing is only one piece of the “avoiding plagiarism” puzzle. More on how to paraphrase and quote, the other elements of avoiding plagiarism, next week!

Document formatting and title page• Title page: include title of project, author,

institution, course, instructor, and due date• Double-space and center information on title

page• Include header and page number in upper

right-hand corner• Document should be in 12 pt. font, double-

spaced, header/page number on each page, first line of each paragraph indented one tab space. Use left justification. Put title on first line of page 2.

6th edition: Title page/header• Running head will go in the header section.

The newly formatted title page would look like this:

Running head: LEGALIZING MARIJUANA 4

Legalizing Marijuana

Kate Smith

Kaplan University

CM 220-01

Professor Thompson

April 14, 2010

In-text (parenthetical) citationsRequires two or three pieces of information:Author’s last nameYearPage or paragraph number (required for direct

quotes only)

(Thompson, 2007)(Thompson, 2007, p. 345) OR (Thompson, 2007, ¶ 4)A survey by the Census Bureau indicates that half of American

households have a computer (Thompson, 2007).According to Thompson (2007), “50 percent of the population

have computers” (p. 345).

6th edition: In-text citations for web sites

Provide more information about location of quotes in in-text citations

For example: (Smith, 2009, Discussion Section, para. 5)—get reader to relevant area of source more quickly

Reference page formatting Start on a new page, titled Reference(s),

centered in upper- and lowercase letters. Include a page header and page number in

the upper right-hand corner. Alphabetize by author’s last name. Double-space throughout. Use a hanging indent (1st line of each entry

flush left, indent subsequent lines 5-7 spaces). Match with in-text citations. Italicize titles of books and periodicals.

APA reference page formatting

•Start on new page.

•Use hanging indents.

•Double-space throughout.

•Alphabetize by author’s last name (use corporation name or article title if no author is available).

•End with DOI or library URL for library sources and URL for web sites.

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References

About APA style. (2006). Retrieved from

http://www.apastyle.org/aboutstyle.html.

Landau, J., Druen, P., & Arcuri, J. (2002). Methods for helping

students avoid plagiarism. Teaching of Psychology, 29(2),

112-115. Retrieved from

http://libsys.uah.edu.kaplan.uah.edu/kaplan/.

Segal, C. (2006). Copy this. Chronicle of Higher Education, 53(4),

54-54. Retrieved from

http://libsys.uah.edu.kaplan.uah.edu/kaplan/.

What you need to know about plagiarism. (2006). Retrieved from

http://kucampus.kaplan.edu/DocumentStore/kupdocs/pdf/Docs

Forms/ku_plagiarism.pdf

.

Villano, M. (2006). Taking the work out of homework. T H E

Journal, 33(15), 24-30. doi: 346431.

6th edition: DOI• Use DOI (Digital Object Identifier) instead of

retrieval date and database for information obtained electronically (library database, for example) or online

• DOI – “a unique alphanumeric string assigned to identify content and provide a persistent link to its location on the internet. The DOI is typically located on the first page of the electronic journal article near the copyright notice. When a DOI is used in your citation, no other retrieval information is needed” (Trexler Library, 2010, p. 3).

Common source typesBooksJournal articlesMagazine articlesNewspaper articlesWeb sitesInterviewsSpeeches

Remember, each source has a specific formatting style!

Book with one author

Maslow, A.H. (1974). Toward a psychology of

being. Princeton: Van Nostrand.

Author. (Publication year). Title. City of

publication: publishing company.

Journal article

Miller, W. (1969). Violent crimes in city gangs.

Journal of Social Issues, 21(10), 1-28.

Author. (year of publication). Title of article.

Journal name, volume #(issue #), page

number(s).

DOI example for journal article

Old formatPaivio, A. (1975). Perceptual comparisons

through the mind's eye. Memory & Cognition, 3(7), 635-647. Retrieved April 13, 2010, from Academic Search Premier.

New formatPaivio, A. (1975). Perceptual comparisons

through the mind's eye. Memory & Cognition, 3(7), 635-647. doi:10.1037/0278-6133.24.2.225

Magazine article

McCurdy, H.G. (1983, June). Brain mechanisms

and intelligence. Psychology Today, 46, 61-

63.

Author’s name. (year/month of publication).

Article title. Magazine Name, volume #, page

number(s).

Newspaper article

James, W.R. (1993, November 16). The

uninsured and health care. Wall Street

Journal, pp. A1, A14.

Author’s name. (Publication date). Article title.

Newspaper name, page # and section.

Internet source

Smith, K. & Jones, M. (2003). Building a better rifle. Retrieved from http://www.buildingrifles.com

Author, A.A., & Author, B.B. (year of publication). Title of page. Retrieved from http://webaddress

No author known:Raising roofs. (2004). Retrieved from

http://www.raisingroofs.comMove the title in place of the author.