blinger monday 9/17/12
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Blinger Monday 9/17/12. How did your first impromptu experience go? What do you feel that you did well? What do you think you still need to work on?. Thesis Statement. Body. Conclusion. What Revision Looks Like. “I’m an okay writer, but I’m a really good reviser.” - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
BlingerMonday 9/17/12
How did your first impromptu experience go? What do you feel that you did well? What do you think you still need to work on?
Thesis Statement
Body
Conclusion
What Revision Looks Like “I’m an okay writer, but I’m a really good
reviser.” –Kate Messner, author of The Brilliant Fall of Gianna Z. and other young adult books
http://www.katemessner.com/celebrating-the-national-day-on-writing-a-revision-gallery/
Revision Stations
1. Thesis Rebuilding2. Reverse Outlining3. Expanding Analysis4. Wordiness5. Conclusion and Tone
Do all activities in your Writer’s Notebook. Do not move stations until time is up. Return all materials to the folder before
switching.
On your way out…HOMEWORK: Select one paragraph to
re-write employing some of the strategies we tried today.
Write your name on the post-it. Place it in the column where you feel
you still need more help.