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    Elma D. Belino

    LLB 1B

    Plain English

    Before and After

    Before

    1. It is important that you read the

    notes, advice and information

    detailed opposite then complete the

    form overleaf (all sections) prior to

    its immediate return to the Council

     by way of the envelope provided.

    2. When the process of freeing a

    vehicle that has been stuck resultsin ruts or holes, the operator will

    fill the rut or hole created such

    activity before removing the

    vehicle from the immediate area.

    3. Failure of recollection is common.

    Innocent misrecollection is not

    uncommon.

    4. In our endeavour to ensure guest

    safety at all times, can visitors

     please note that fire bell testing is

    carried out every onday at !"#$

    am.

    5. If there are any points on which

    you re%uire e&planation or further 

     particulars we shall be glad to

    furnish such additional details as

    many as re%uired by telephone.

    6. If the location of the state is in a

    state other than the state in which

    the tribe's ustification of 

    anticipated benefits from the

    ac%uisition will be subect to

    greater scrutiny.

    7. nsure the potential impact of non*

    routine factors and problems and

    other services are assessed and

    details notified promptly to anappropriate person.

    After

    1. +lease read the notes apposite

     before you fill in the form. hen

    send it back as soon as possible in

    the envelope provided.

    2. If you make a hole while freeing a

    stuck vehicle, you must fill the hole before you drive away.

    3. +eople often forget things or make

    mistakes in what they remember.

    4. We test the fire bell every onday

    at !"#$ am.

    5. If you have any %uestions, please

     phone.

    6. If the land is in a different state

    than the tribe's reservation, we will

    scrutini-e the tribe's ustification of 

    anticipated benefits more

    thoroughly.

    7. Inform the depot if you are stuck in

    traffic or involved in an accident.

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    Before

    8. igh*%uality learning

    environments are a necessary

     precondition for facilitation and

    enhancement of the on*goinglearning process.

    9. nsure the machinery for issuing

    and endorsing tickets is confirmed

    as in working order and is set in

    accordance with approved

     procedure.

    1. I'm afraid that is not compromised

    within the categories currently at

    my disposal After

    8. Children need good schools if they

    are to learn properly

    9.  Check the ticket machine if it is

    showing the correct date and price.

    1. I don't know.