Assignment 47-Draft 1 Audience feedback and

TargetsGroup 9

First Draft Feedback

Positives Negatives

Mise en scene. Bad Language

Some Camera angles were good. Focusing issues

Framing

Slightly Comical

Title placement

Staged

Audience Research Summary‣Chase scenes.‣Dark atmosphere.‣Enclosed area or environment.‣Blood.‣Someone being stabbed or killed.

Targets for Final Draft‣Clear indication of what the sub-genre is. ‣Clear and good Mise en scene.‣Titles are well placed within the sequence.‣A range of Camera angles and shots.‣A well produced title sequence to help gain a good grade.‣Editing techniques used to create certain effects.