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(a) JRT hereby covenants that (i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that (i) during the Employment Period (except

solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and i) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that (i) during the Employment Period (except

solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that

(i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and

(ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”),

JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then

(or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that

(i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

(a) JRT hereby covenants that

(i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that (i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

JRT se obliga, en este acto, a que

durante el Periodo de Empleo y

durante el Periodo Restringido Adicional

no llevará a cabo ninguna Actividad Reservada en ninguno de los países en los que Omega esté

llevándolas a cabo o planee hacerlo en un futuro inmediato

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(a) JRT hereby covenants that

(i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”),

JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

JRT se obliga, en este acto, a que

durante el Periodo de Empleo y

durante el Periodo Restringido Adicional que se define más adelante (periodos denominados en conjunto Periodo Restringido), y a condición de cumplir con las obligaciones contraídas en este Contrato,

no llevará a cabo ninguna Actividad Reservada en ninguno de los países en los que Omega esté

llevándolas a cabo* o planee hacerlo en un futuro inmediato

JRT conviene en que además de no llevar a cabo dichas actividades por cuenta propia, no lo hará a nombre o en representación de tercero o Persona alguna, ni lo hará directa o indirectamente a través de las Filiales que se definen más adelante.

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Original 137 palabras, 15 comas, 12 paréntesis

(a) JRT hereby covenants that (i) during the Employment Period (except solely by virtue of performance of JRT’s obligations under this Agreement) and (ii) during the Additional Restricted Period (as defined below) ((i) and (ii), collectively, the “Restricted Period”), JRT will not (whether for his own account, as an employee or otherwise on behalf of any other Person, or in any other capacity), and will cause his Affiliates (as defined below) not to, directly or indirectly, (x) engage in any of the Restricted Activities, in any country of the world in which Omega is then (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, was as of the end of the Employment Period) engaged, or proposes (or, during the Additional Restricted Period, proposed as of the end of the Employment Period) imminently to be engaged, in such Restricted Activities

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(a) JRT se obliga, en este acto, a que durante el Periodo de Empleo y durante el Periodo Restringido Adicional que se define más adelante (periodos denominados en conjunto Periodo Restringido), y a condición de cumplir con las obligaciones contraídas en este Contrato, no llevará a cabo ninguna Actividad Reservada en ninguno de los países en los que Omega esté llevándolas a cabo o planee hacerlo en un futuro inmediato. JRT conviene en que además de no llevar a cabo dichas actividades por cuenta propia, tampoco lo hará a nombre o en representación de tercero o Persona alguna, ni lo hará directa o indirectamente a través de las Filiales que se definen más adelante