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© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 1

Completing Business Messages

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 2

Planning Writing Completing

Analyze Situation

Gather Information

Select Medium

Get Organized

Revise

Produce

Proofread

Distribute

Adapt to

the Audience

Compose

the Message

Three-Step Writing Process

Completing Business Messages

1. Revising your Message

2. Writing Techniques to Improve

Readability

3. Editing for Clarity and Conciseness

4. Tips to Concise your Message

5. Designing for Readability

6. Proofreading your Message

7. Distributing your Message

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 4

Moving Beyond the First Draft

Final Draft

Content, Organization,

Style, and Tone

Overall

Readability

Clarity and

Conciseness

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 5

Revising the Message

Content

Style and Tone

Organization

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Increasing “Skim” Value

Sentences

Headings

Listed Items

Paragraphs

Editing for Clarity1. Break up overly long sentences.

2. Rewrite hedging sentences.

3. Impose parallelism.

4. Correct dangling modifiers.

5. Reword long noun sequences.

6. Replace camouflaged verbs.

7. Clarify sentence structure.

8. Clarify awkward references.

9. Moderate your enthusiasm.

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 9

Editing for Clarity T 6.2

Sentence Style

Faulty Parallelism

T 6.1

Dangling Modifiers

Long Noun Sequences

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 10

Editing for Clarity T 6.2

Camouflaged Verbs

Sentence Structure

Awkward References

Excess Enthusiasm

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 11

Editing for Conciseness T 6.3

Wordy Constructions

Long Words or Phrases

Redundant Wording

“It is/There are” Starters

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 12

Revising with Technology

Grammar

Checker Thesaurus

Style

Checker

Revision

Tools

Spell

Checker

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 13

Producing the Message

Multimedia

Elements

Design

Elements

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 14

Multimedia Elements

Presentation

Software

Video Clips

and Sound Bites

Graphics

Software

Hypertext Markup

Language

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 15

Designing for Readability

Message

Effectiveness

Audience

Perceptions

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 16

Design Elements

Consistency

Balance

Detail

Restraint

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 17

Design Techniques

White Space

Margins

Justification

Typefaces

Type Styles

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 18

Using Technology

Paragraph

Formatting

Numbered and

Bulleted Lists

Tables and

Textboxes

Pictures

and Objects

Templates and

Style Sheets

Page

Setup

Column

Formatting

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Format for Business-LettersLetterhead

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DateInside

AddressSalutation

The

Message

Complimentary

CloseSignature

Block

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Format for Memos

Memo

Title

Headings

The

Message

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Proofreading Your Message

Edited Copy Final Report

Grammar and

Usage

Punctuation Design Errors

Missing Material Overall Format

Spelling Errors

and Typos

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 23

Proofreading Advice

• Make multiple passes – one aspect at a time.

• Use perceptual tricks

– Reading backward

– Placing finger under text

– Making slit to reveal one line at a time

– Reading aloud

– Temporary reformatting

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 24

Proofreading Advice

• Double-check high-priority items – figures etc.

• Give some distance

• Be vigilant

• Stay focused

• Review hardcopy documents

• Take your time

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 6 - 25

Distributing the Message

Cost Concerns

Convenience

Time Constraints

Security and Privacy

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Evaluating Content

• Is the information accurate?

• Is the information relevant?

• Is the information adequate?

• Balance between general and specific

information.

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Evaluating Organisation

• All points covered in logical order.

• Prioritization

• Alternative sequencing

• Repetition

• Logical grouping of details

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