breach: script 2
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Screenplay
SCENE 1
EXT. PAVEMENT DAY
ERIN is seen walking home from school
CLOSE UP shows ERIN looking depressed. A VOICE fills her
head
VOICE (V.O.)
I dunno why she even comes to this
school
VOICE 2 (V.O.)
Yh, nobody even knows who she is.
Remember when she ACTUALLY used to
act like a SANE person
VOICE 3 (V.O.)
I remember she used to be my best
friend. Since her dad was deployed,
shes’ never been the same again
ERIN begins to quicken her walk.
INT. ERINS HOUSE DAY
ERIN opens the front door to her house and picks up a
handful of bills addressed to her mother before throwing
them to the ground
ERIN
(as she is walking upstairs)
Hi mum
INT. ERINS BEDROOM DAY
CARIS
I need you to look after them today
ERIN
You know I have so much to do, this
is the THIRD time this week.
You’re..
CLOSE UP OF ERINS FACE
ERIN
(quietly, looking down towards
floor)
You’re never home
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
CARIS
You know the situation we are
currently at.
CARIS walks out of the room avoiding any continued
conversation.
ERIN sighs and leans in onto her desk.
VOICE fills her head as she appears to close her eyes
VOICE 3 (V.O.)
(echoes, intensifies)
I remember she used to be my best
friend.
INT. LIVING ROOM DAWN
ERIN is sitting on her coach. The voices all of a sudden
stop at this point
ERIN
(shouts)
I asked have you done your homework
ERIN tuts then gets up to check on her brother
SCENE 2
INT. FLOYDS BEDROOM NIGHT
FLOYD is sitting at his computer desk attempting to finish
his coursework which is due in the following day
FLOYD checks. It is 11.00pm and the paper is due in a couple
of hours. With this he becomes frustrated as he throws the
paper onto the floor. He picks up his phone. We see
exchanged text with him and his ex-girlfriend. He looks to
the side, puts his phone onto the table
FLASHBACK
FLOYD and his mother STEPH are sitting at the dinner table
having lunch
STEPH
(emotionless, no facial
contact)
We’ll be moving to Stockholm
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
FLOYD
(very sensitive)
Wait? Since when did you make this
decision
STEPH
(continuing eating, hasn’t
lifter her head)
Me and your father have known about
this for some time, don’t you want
to be closer to him
FLOYD doesn’t allow her to finish before he rushes upstairs
EXT. STREET DAY
FLOYD is walking with his friends as they have a normal
conversation
*PHONE RINGS*
FLOYD answers the phonecall
Mumble sound represented as the individual on the other line
FLOYD
(looks concerned)
Is everything ok TAYLOUR?
FLOYD looks worryingly towards his friend before he walks
away
FLOYD
You don’t have to do this after
everything we’ve been through
FLOYD pauses as he listens to the response
FLOYD
Taylour, Taylour.. are are you
there? Taylour!
PHONE DIAL TONE
FLOYD looks towards his friend, he then walks away quickly
not wanting to say no more
INT. FLOYDS BEDROOM NIGHT
FLOYDS puts his hands to his face
FLOYD picks up his PHONE texting WE NEED TO TALK, I MISS YOU
before erasing the text message
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
FADE IN:
INT. LIVING ROOM DAWN
ERIN is sitting on the coach watching TV, her younger
siblings are also watching TV
ERIN continues to watch TV as she looks up and slowly closes
her eyes
FLASHBACK
FADE AWAY
SCENE 3
INT, DANIEL’S BEDROOM NIGHT PRESENT
CLOSE UP SHOT of DANIEL’s face as he ruffles on bed
Camera pans of his room, establishing items (cannabis bag,
cigarettes, alcohol, R.I.P picture of his deceased friend)
FLASHBACK
EXT, THE PARK MID-DAY PAST
WIDE SHOT, group chatting amongst themselves, boy gets
agitated and pulls out a knife about to stab DANIEL
DANIEL
You owe me three bags.
DUSHANE
You know that’s a lie.
DANIEL
This is the second time you have
pissed me off.
DUSHANE pulls out a knife against DANIEL
INT, DANIEL’S BEDROOM NIGHT PRESENT
DANIELS POV shot of R.I.P picture
DANIEL ruffles around in his bed quite disturbed then shuts
his eyes
FADE AWAY
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