Screenplay

SCENE 1

EXT. PAVEMENT DAY

ERIN is seen walking home from school

CLOSE UP shows ERIN looking depressed. A VOICE fills her

head

VOICE (V.O.)

I dunno why she even comes to this

school

VOICE 2 (V.O.)

Yh, nobody even knows who she is.

Remember when she ACTUALLY used to

act like a SANE person

VOICE 3 (V.O.)

I remember she used to be my best

friend. Since her dad was deployed,

shes’ never been the same again

ERIN begins to quicken her walk.

INT. ERINS HOUSE DAY

ERIN opens the front door to her house and picks up a

handful of bills addressed to her mother before throwing

them to the ground

ERIN

(as she is walking upstairs)

Hi mum

INT. ERINS BEDROOM DAY

CARIS

I need you to look after them today

ERIN

You know I have so much to do, this

is the THIRD time this week.

You’re..

CLOSE UP OF ERINS FACE

ERIN

(quietly, looking down towards

floor)

You’re never home

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 2.

CARIS

You know the situation we are

currently at.

CARIS walks out of the room avoiding any continued

conversation.

ERIN sighs and leans in onto her desk.

VOICE fills her head as she appears to close her eyes

VOICE 3 (V.O.)

(echoes, intensifies)

I remember she used to be my best

friend.

INT. LIVING ROOM DAWN

ERIN is sitting on her coach. The voices all of a sudden

stop at this point

ERIN

(shouts)

I asked have you done your homework

ERIN tuts then gets up to check on her brother

SCENE 2

INT. FLOYDS BEDROOM NIGHT

FLOYD is sitting at his computer desk attempting to finish

his coursework which is due in the following day

FLOYD checks. It is 11.00pm and the paper is due in a couple

of hours. With this he becomes frustrated as he throws the

paper onto the floor. He picks up his phone. We see

exchanged text with him and his ex-girlfriend. He looks to

the side, puts his phone onto the table

FLASHBACK

FLOYD and his mother STEPH are sitting at the dinner table

having lunch

STEPH

(emotionless, no facial

contact)

We’ll be moving to Stockholm

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 3.

FLOYD

(very sensitive)

Wait? Since when did you make this

decision

STEPH

(continuing eating, hasn’t

lifter her head)

Me and your father have known about

this for some time, don’t you want

to be closer to him

FLOYD doesn’t allow her to finish before he rushes upstairs

EXT. STREET DAY

FLOYD is walking with his friends as they have a normal

conversation

*PHONE RINGS*

FLOYD answers the phonecall

Mumble sound represented as the individual on the other line

FLOYD

(looks concerned)

Is everything ok TAYLOUR?

FLOYD looks worryingly towards his friend before he walks

away

FLOYD

You don’t have to do this after

everything we’ve been through

FLOYD pauses as he listens to the response

FLOYD

Taylour, Taylour.. are are you

there? Taylour!

PHONE DIAL TONE

FLOYD looks towards his friend, he then walks away quickly

not wanting to say no more

INT. FLOYDS BEDROOM NIGHT

FLOYDS puts his hands to his face

FLOYD picks up his PHONE texting WE NEED TO TALK, I MISS YOU

before erasing the text message

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 4.

FADE IN:

INT. LIVING ROOM DAWN

ERIN is sitting on the coach watching TV, her younger

siblings are also watching TV

ERIN continues to watch TV as she looks up and slowly closes

her eyes

FLASHBACK

FADE AWAY

SCENE 3

INT, DANIEL’S BEDROOM NIGHT PRESENT

CLOSE UP SHOT of DANIEL’s face as he ruffles on bed

Camera pans of his room, establishing items (cannabis bag,

cigarettes, alcohol, R.I.P picture of his deceased friend)

FLASHBACK

EXT, THE PARK MID-DAY PAST

WIDE SHOT, group chatting amongst themselves, boy gets

agitated and pulls out a knife about to stab DANIEL

DANIEL

You owe me three bags.

DUSHANE

You know that’s a lie.

DANIEL

This is the second time you have

pissed me off.

DUSHANE pulls out a knife against DANIEL

INT, DANIEL’S BEDROOM NIGHT PRESENT

DANIELS POV shot of R.I.P picture

DANIEL ruffles around in his bed quite disturbed then shuts

his eyes

FADE AWAY