Argumentative essay:

Question instructions :1, Is this a positive or negative development (good or bad)2, Should or should not3, Agree or disagree4, How far do you agree or disagree or To what extent do you agree or disagree

Example question Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Or Agree or Disagree?

Intro 1, Rephrase question

2, Position : write your opinion clearly ( agree or disagree/positive or negative)

( agree/disagree)

Body 1 1, Topic sentence ( agree or disagree/ positive or negative-- opinion)

2, reason 1

3, explain the reason-1 clearly and fully

Do not write any other reasons in the body 1 or 2 except its explanation.

Body-2 1, Topic sentence ( agree or disagree/ positive or negative-- opinion)

2, reason 2

3, explain the reason-1 clearly and fully

Do not write any new other reasons in the same body

Final paragraph Summary : write reason -1 and reason-2 + repeat the opinion again. Do not change the opinion. Maintain the same opinion.

Model essay version 1: agree or disagree

Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.

Do you agree or disagree?

Many people feel that family life is being harmed by the high-speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles. I agree with this opinion because the fast pace leads to less time for families to be together, and stress leads to arguments among family members; however, due to the increased time pressure and stress families are forced to cooperate more, which brings them closer together.

The main reason why I believefamily life is being compromised is because families have less time to be with each other. As individual family members are busier at work and with their social lives, theyhave less time to spend with their family. As well as this, people have many things they have to do these days such as checking e-mail, updating their online social status and so less time is left for family life. To illustrate, I spend about two hours online every night attending to daily correspondence before chatting with my family members, whereas ten years ago I would spend time with my family from the moment I walked in the door.

In addition,the pressure of life these days means that even when families do get together arguments are more likely. This is because everyone feels tired and they are more likely to get irritated and to react to their heightened emotional levels.

In conclusion, I believe that the rapid pace and stressful nature of contemporary lifestyles are having negative consequences on family relationships. This is because family members have less time, and when they are together they feel less relaxed.

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Both sides + opinion

Discuss both sides and and give your own opinion

Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion ( EXACTLY THE SAME IN TH CONCLUSION)

INTRO: 1, Rephrase question

2, opinion

This essay discusses [both sides + opinion]

BODY-1 SIDE A : Topic sentence ( The first reason why some people think.........+ Reason 1 +explain ).The second reason is Reason 2 +Explain.

BODY-2 SIDE B : Topic sentence ( The first reason why some people think.........+ Reason 1 +explain ).The second reason is Reason 2 +Explain.

Opinion :State that both are important/has merits. State which one is more important/better

Remember : Each side should have two reasons not Just one reason for side. You would lose score in Task response.

Some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions.

Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

Many people feel that getting pupils ready for their careers should be the main focus of schools, where as others believe that schools should have additional purposes. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and I more agree with the second part of the argument.

There are merits of schools only focusing on preparing young people for their working lives. If young people are better prepared for their careers they will be more successful in their working lives. As well as this, they will also make more money and be able to support themselves better. To illustrate, some recent stories in the media highlighted that students who finish high school are less likely to be unemployed, and more likely to earn higher salaries. In addition, by schools preparing young people for jobs there will be a better prepared workforce. This benefits society by raising productivity and ensuring that employers have the necessary labour they need.

However, there are also advantages of schools having other functions. First of all, they should teach students skills to make them well-rounded. By teaching communication skills and how to use technology the students will be better rounded individuals. Clearly,these are important skills in today's society and so they should be learnt at school. As well as this schools should teach morals and ethics because this will make the society better. Many people feel that this aspect of schooling has become neglected, and has led to a deterioration of society.

In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, it seems that schools should have other functions. This is because if the students are well-rounded they will be more successful in their lives and contribute more to society.

TWO QUESTIONS – essay

Problem and solution

Cause and solution

Opinion and solution

Alcohol abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries.

What are some of the problems associated with alcohol abuse (question 1), and what are some of thepossible solutions? (question 2)

INTRO :

1,Rephrase question

2, This essay discusses [problem and Two Questions solution] ( no opinion being asked so do not write any opinion)

BODY 1: Problems

1, Topic sentence ( The first problem is that......+ Point 2 Reason + explain)

2, The second problem is that....+ Point 2 Reason+ explain)

You should write some decent reasons and explain clearly

Body -2 Solutions

1, Topic sentence ( the first solution for this issue is ...) Solution 1 and reason+explain

2, Solution 2 reason +explain

You must write the solutions that solves or deals with the issues, not any general solutions.

Summary of problems and solutions (rephrased) Opinion/recommendation

Model essay :

Some people think that in the future lots of changes will occur that will improve our society.Do you agree or disagree?

What kind of changes will occur?

As a result of developments that are taking place, many people believe that life will become better. This essay discusses the reasons why the changes that are coming arepositive, and also suggests what kind of changes will occur.

The changes that are coming are positive for two main reasons. The main reason is that they will make our lives more convenient. We are likely to have more free time asa result of technology taking over many of our everyday tasks. For example, we may have robots capable of doing many household chores, and this will enable us to have more free time for enjoyment and relaxation. Another factor is that our recreational time will be enhanced by new technologies that make our entertainment and even more fun. If we enjoy ourselves more we will be happier and more relaxed.

There are two main types of developments that are likely to occur. The first of these is time-saving technologies. Future enhancements of robotics are likely to lead to even more household tasks being performed by machines. As well as this, the entertainment industry looks likely to soon make enhancements to our recreational experiences by making new technologies available. A good example of this is 3-D television, which will make watching movies even more fun.

In conclusion, the future looks promising because we will have technology takeover many of life's mundane tasks and we'll have better forms of entertainment. The most likely changes appear to be technologies to save us time and also enhance our leisure time. [256 words]

Advantages OUTWEIGH disadvantages?

Computers are being used more and more in education. Do you think the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages?

Intro

1,Rephrase question

2,This essay discusses [both sides + opinion]: write if it outweighs or not.

BODY-1 SIDE A Topic sentence ( The advantages are as follows or The first advantage is ..)

Advantage 1 + example

Cohesion+ The second advantage or merit is

Advantage 2 +example

BODY-2 SIDE B

Topic sentence ( The disadvantages are as follows

or The first disadvantage is ..)

Disadvantage 1 + example

Cohesion+ The second disdvantage or demerit is

Disadvantage 2 +example

Conclusion: Opinion :State that both are important/has merits. State which one is more important/better in your opinion.

Many people make new friends through social networking sites and the internet. Some peoplebelieve that it is good but others think that needs to have face to face communication. Discussboth the views and your opinion

Social networking sites and the internet have been becoming more popular for people who intendto meet new friends. While some people believe it is a preferable way of communication, othersargue that it is essential to have face to face communication. In this essay, I will explain bothsides of this argument and I believe the advantages weigh out the disadvantages.

The two reasons why some people favour online chatting via social networking sites or theinternet are for relationships such as business or pleasure. Many people broaden their socialnetwork and meet new people through the internet and think it is an ideal way to developfriendship circle with similar interests. For example, even though many English students live indifferent parts of the world, they can join websites like Facebook.com and start to chat and sharetheir knowledge. Another benefit is adults can find their potential partners from theseonline social networking websites or chat rooms via the internet. They can first have a casualconversation and if they like each other, then they can enter into a serious relationship.

However, others believe that traditional way of communication such as face to face interactionsare required due to the following reasons. Facial expressions and emotions are unable to bereplaced by any communication tools on the internet. Body language or any form of non-verbalcommunication has an important part in human interactions. It is impossible to shake hands orcuddle a friend through the internet; similarly, we cannot understand others' emotions via theinternet. Also, it is very hard to find out if someone is genuine or not due to the absence of facialexpressions when people chat online. These situations would not happen if it is a directconversation of meetings. In such cases, face to face communication is essential and preferred.

In conclusion, In my opinion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, Itend to believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks because it is more importantto meet friends with similar interest than to see them face to face"

Estimated Grade: Task Response:8 Cohesion and Coherence 8 Good overall structureVocabulary 8 . Grammar 8Overall 8