Zoe Armitage

For this question, it is clear by the results that the film idea was clearly communicated to the group.

For this question, I think that we could have been more enthusiastic by using a different tone of voice instead of rushing the words.

For these results I think that we could have told a bit more about the film to make the audience interested.

For these results I think that we needed to use more eye contact to make sure that we were addressing the group properly.

For questions 6 and 7 I think that we got positive feedback for the originality of the idea and the clear delivery, although the negatives would be that we need to use eye contact and to answer any questions with confidence.

Zoe Armitage

Overall I think our group produced what we were going to say well, although we all need to have more confidence when delivering the pitch including eye contact, speak clearly and have a more relaxed body language.