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1 Stacey Chavours _August 27, 2012 Room 212 _____ 8th Grade Language Arts Essential Question: How do readers use the elements of plot to create a quality summary? Standard: RL.8.2: Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments. Materials: list that’ personal, specific, diverse and unpretentious: ideas from your own experience that will inspire students to generate their own ideas. Overhead transparencies of Jed and Marnie’s first day writing territories lists; Trimmed photocopies of collecting your writing territories for students to tape into notebook; Glue or Tape; Bellringer: 15 minutes – Silent read. Procedures: 10 minutes: Procedures – Processing and take notes on BIST Cornell Paper Reading: 15 minutes Pass out step by step reading log. Discuss how to write a summary of reading – show 5 finger Chart. Pass out questioning Costa’s house. Together, use elmo and fill out reading log. Reading log goes into their binder. Pass out Writer’s Notebook and Table of Contents. Have students glue Table of Contents into their Writer’s Notebook on the first page. Write down: p. 2 What Poetry Can Do List; p. 4 Writing Territories; p. 6 Questions to Mine Your Heart; p. 8 Ideas for Writer’s Notebook; p. 11 What’s In My Journal; p. 12 Rules for Writer’s Workshop; p. 13 Freewriting Rules; p. 15 Questioning Strategy – Costa’s House; p. 16 4 Square Card; p. 17 Exit Card Template Vocabulary: 20 minutes: Give out the 4 square vocabulary sheets and paste on p. 16. Complete a vocabulary card together using the word procedure – an official way of doing something – strategy for synonym and difference for antonym. Show students how to complete a 4 square vocabulary card using a thinkaloud on the overhead. Explain to students that in order to understand new vocabulary, they need to know what makes up a word’s definition. Students should ask themselves “What is it?” in order to know the definition. Tell them developing a vocabulary map provides another way to elaborate on important concepts. Tell them that expanding definitions helps students attain a better metacognitive awareness about how well they know a concept. Ask: “If you can’t map a word, what does that tell you about how well you understand the word? Why does mapping a word lead to long term retention of the concept?” Pass out the steps to completing a vocabulary map. Students should complete a card. Writing: 10 minutes Writing Territories – Discuss the process of writing. Show students my list and other sample lists. Allow students to tape the collecting your writing paper into notebook. Have students write their lists in their writer’s notebook. Literature: 25 minutes – Continue Elements of Literature plot powerpoint Exit Pass – Pass out exit pass template for students to paste in their Writer’s Notebook. Discuss how to fill it out.

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Stacey  Chavours                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                _August  27,  2012  Room  212                                            _____                                                                                                                                                                                  8th  Grade  Language  Arts    

 Essential  Question:  How  do  readers  use  the  elements  of  plot  to  create  a  quality  summary?  Standard:  RL.8.2:  Determine  a  theme  or  central  idea  of  a  text  and  how  it  is  conveyed  through  particular  details;  provide  a  summary  of  the  text  distinct  from  personal  opinions  or  judgments.    Materials:    list  that’  personal,  specific,  diverse  and  unpretentious:  ideas  from  your  own  experience  that  will  inspire  students  to  generate  their  own  ideas.    Overhead  transparencies  of  Jed  and  Marnie’s  first  day  writing  territories  lists;  Trimmed  photocopies  of  collecting  your  writing  territories  for  students  to  tape  into  notebook;  Glue  or  Tape;      Bell-­ringer:  15  minutes  –  Silent  read.    Procedures:    10  minutes:  Procedures  –  Processing  and  take  notes  on  BIST  Cornell  Paper    Reading:    15  minutes  -­‐  Pass  out  step  by  step  reading  log.    Discuss  how  to  write  a  summary  of  reading  –show  5  finger  Chart.    Pass  out  questioning  Costa’s  house.    Together,  use  elmo  and  fill  out  reading  log.    Reading  log  goes  into  their  binder.    Pass  out  Writer’s  Notebook  and  Table  of  Contents.    Have  students  glue  Table  of  Contents  into  their  Writer’s  Notebook  on  the  first  page.    Write  down:  p.  2  What  Poetry  Can  Do  List;  p.  4  Writing  Territories;  p.  6  Questions  to  Mine  Your  Heart;  p.  8  Ideas  for  Writer’s  Notebook;  p.  11  What’s  In  My  Journal;  p.  12  Rules  for  Writer’s  Workshop;  p.  13  Freewriting  Rules;  p.  15  Questioning  Strategy  –  Costa’s  House;  p.  16  4  Square  Card;  p.  17  Exit  Card  Template    Vocabulary:    20  minutes:    Give  out  the  4  square  vocabulary  sheets  and  paste  on  p.  16.    Complete  a  vocabulary  card  together  using  the  word  procedure  –  an  official  way  of  doing  something  –  strategy  for  synonym  and  difference  for  antonym.      Show  students  how  to  complete  a  4  square  vocabulary  card  using  a  think-­‐aloud  on  the  overhead.    Explain  to  students  that  in  order  to  understand  new  vocabulary,  they  need  to  know  what  makes  up  a  word’s  definition.    Students  should  ask  themselves  “What  is  it?”  in  order  to  know  the  definition.    Tell  them  developing  a  vocabulary  map  provides  another  way  to  elaborate  on  important  concepts.    Tell  them  that  expanding  definitions  helps  students  attain  a  better  meta-­‐cognitive  awareness  about  how  well  they  know  a  concept.    Ask:  “If  you  can’t  map  a  word,  what  does  that  tell  you  about  how  well  you  understand  the  word?    Why  does  mapping  a  word  lead  to  long  term  retention  of  the  concept?”    Pass  out  the  steps  to  completing  a  vocabulary  map.    Students  should  complete  a  card.    Writing:    10  minutes  –  Writing  Territories  –  Discuss  the  process  of  writing.    Show  students  my  list  and  other  sample  lists.    Allow  students  to  tape  the  collecting  your  writing  paper  into  notebook.    Have  students  write  their  lists  in  their  writer’s  notebook.    Literature:    25  minutes  –  Continue  Elements  of  Literature  plot  powerpoint    Exit  Pass  –  Pass  out  exit  pass  template  for  students  to  paste  in  their  Writer’s  Notebook.    Discuss  how  to  fill  it  out.        

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Stacey  Chavours                    _____                                                                                                                                                                                                          _August  28,  2012  Room  212                                            ________                                                                                                                                                              __8th  Grade  Language  Arts    

 Essential  Question:  How  do  readers  use  the  elements  of  plot  to  create  a  quality  summary?  Standard:  RL.6.2:  Determine  a  theme  or  central  idea  of  a  text  and  how  it  is  conveyed  through  particular  details;  provide  a  summary  of  the  text  distinct  from  personal  opinions  or  judgments.    Library    Vocabulary:  10  minutes  –  Vocabulary  card    Vocabulary  Lesson:  15  minutes  Display  these  words:  ad-­‐(to;  motion  toward)       bin-­‐  (two)  admit           binary  addict           binoculars  adhere           binomial  admit    Say:  “Most  words  in  English  are  made  by  combining  prefixes  and  suffixes  with  base  words  and  word  parts  from  Greek  and  Latin.    Greek  and  Latin  were  languages  spoken  over  2,000  years  ago.    This  year,  we’re  going  to  be  learning  more  about  the  most  important  prefixes,  suffixes,  and  Greek  and  Latin  roots  in  the  language.    If  you  know  these  words  parts,  you  will  be  able  to  read  thousands  of  words  in  English.    You  will  also  be  able  to  figure  out  the  meanings  of  thousands  of  words  in  English,  too!”    

1. Write  the  word  admit  on  the  board/overhead/lumens.    Ask  the  students,  “If  a  person  must  admit  something,  what  does  that  mean?    So,  if  it  to  welcome,  what  do  you  think  the  prefix  ad-­‐means?”’  

2. Write  the  word  binary  on  the  board.    Ask  the  students,  “If  the  prefix  bin-­‐means,  two,  what  do  you  think  the  word  binocular  means?”  

3.  “The  prefix  ad-­‐  also  means  to  motion  toward.    Have  you  ever  heard  someone  referred  to  a  drug  addict?    If  ad-­‐  means  motion  toward,  what  do  you  think  the  word  addict  means?”  

4. “Now  let’s  say  we  ran  into  this  sentence  when  we  were  reading  about  a  scientific  word  named  binary.”    Write  the  following  sentence  on  the  overhead:  

a. The  scientist  used  the  binary  numeral  system.    “How  can  we  figure  out  what  the  word  binary  means?”    Discuss  with  the  students  how  they  can  combine  the  meaning  of  bin-­‐  with  the  word  form  and  together  with  the  rest  of  the  sentence,  figure  out  the  meaning.    A  key  idea  here  is  the  “numeral  system.”        5.  “There  are  two  things  you’ll  be  doing  in  your  writer’s  notebook  today:    First,  write  down  your  

definition  for  ad-­‐.    Then,  write  down  our  definition  for  bin-­‐.”      Poetry  and  Writing:  10  minutes      Maybe  Dats  Youwr  Pwoblem  Too  by  Jim  Hall    Say,  “Last  week  we  began  to  glimpse  what  poetry  can  do  as  a  genre  and  to  understand  that  its  subjects  are  limitless.    Today’s  poem  is  so  bizarre  I  don’t  even  have  a  guess  as  to  how  Jim  Hall  came  up  with  the  subject  or  the  person.    A  persona  is  an  imagined  speaker.    The  speaker  Jim  Hall  images  for  this  poem  is  Peter  Parker,  aka  Spiderman,  but  with  a  couple  of  twists:  here,  Peter  is  sick  to  death  of  the  boring  routine  of  a  superhero’s  life,  plus,  well,  Spiderman  has  a  speech  impediment.”  

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The  voice  should  be  read  aloud  as  written:  prepare  to  become  a  hyper-­‐emotive  Elmer  Fudd.    Discuss:  The  repetition  of  Spiderman  creates  a  cadence  or  rhythm.    The  conclusion  the  last  six  lines  convey  the  poem’s  theme:  each  of  us  is  who  we  are,  and  none  of  us  can  burn  our  suits/identities.        Say,  “Go  back  into  this  funny  poem  on  your  own,  read  it  to  yourself,  and  sound  its  words  in  your  head.    This  time,  please  underline  your  favorite  lines  –  the  ones  that  struck  you.    Then,  would  you  look  for  and  mark  the  lines  that  sum  up  what  this  poem  is  about:  what  is  Jim  Hall  getting  at  in  this  deranged  monologue?”  Students  should  freewrite  for  five  minutes  either  a  poem  or  prose.    Tell  them  to  adopt  a  persona  –  choose  someone  from  popular  culture,  a  fairy  tale,  a  myth,  a  legend  –  then  explore  what  his  or  her  life  is  really  like  in  a  poem.          10  minutes—Heart  Map    Literacy:  25  minutes  –  Finish  powerpoint  for  Elements  of  Literature  plot    5  minutes—review  BIST    1  minute  exit  card  Exit  Pass:  What  makes  a  good  plot?  What  is  the  most  important  thing  I  learned?  How  can  I  use  this  in  other  classes?  Summarize  the  events  in  class.                                                      

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 Stacey  Chavours                ____                                                                                                                                            _August  29,  2012  Room  212                                    ______                            ____        8th  Grade  Language  Arts      Essential  Question:  How  do  readers  use  the  elements  of  plot  to  create  a  quality  summary?  Standard:  RL.6.2:  Determine  a  theme  or  central  idea  of  a  text  and  how  it  is  conveyed  through  particular  details;  provide  a  summary  of  the  text  distinct  from  personal  opinions  or  judgments.    20  minutes:  Library      Poetry  and  Writing:    15  minutes  Footsteps  to  Follow  by  Kelli  Carter    Say,  “We’ve  been  learning  that  poems  can  be  about  anything.    Today  we’ll  begin  a  new  conversation  about  what  poems  can  be  good  for:  why  people  write  them,  what  poems  do  for  poets,  and  what  poetry  does  for  people  who  read  it.    Kelli  was  an  eighth-­‐grade  poet  who  adored  a  certain  children’s  book  author.    He  lived  in  her  state  and  spent  a  lot  of  time  in  local  schools,  including  Kelli’s,  giving  readings  and  working  with  kids  on  their  writing.    And  suddenly,  one  morning,  there  he  was  in  the  headlines  of  the  local  newspaper.    He’d  been  arrested,  charged  with  molesting  little  boys  and  girls.      Kelli’s  response  to  the  bad  news  about  her  favorite  author  was  a  poem.    He  wrote  it  on  the  bus  on  the  way  to  school,  tore  it  out  of  her  notebook,  folded  it  about  twenty  times,  and  left  it  on  her  teacher’s  desk.  Tell  them  as  I  read  the  poem  to  look  at  the  use  of  questions  –  seven  of  them  –  to  create  cadence,  build  a  theme,  and  suggest  the  poet’s  confusion.    Look  at  the  simple,  direct  language  that  gives  the  poem  its  emotional  power:    Where  have  all  the  good  guys  gone?    Students  should  reread  the  poem  and  mark  the  lines  you’d  like  to  talk  about.    Also,  speculate  about  why  you  think  Kelli  wrote  this:  what  might  naming  and  shaping  her  feelings  in  a  poem  have  done  for  her?  Discuss.    Discuss  the  way  the  pause  after  little  in  the  second  to  last  line  gives  the  word  a  double  meaning,  about  the  loss  of  childhood  innocence.    Discuss  because  of  the  coded  nature  of  poetry,  Kelli  can  write  about  what  happened  and  convey  her  anguished  response  to  it  indirectly.    The  heroes  on  horseback,  knights,  and  Lone  Rangers  function  as  symbols  for  the  children’s  author.    Discuss  how  this  poem  fits  into  our  hero  unit.  For  5  minutes  freewrite  a  poem  your  own  strong  emotions  about  a  situation  that  troubles  you:  use  a  poem  to  help  you  capture,  define,  and  get  some  control  over  what  hurts.    Procedures:    5  minutes  Review  BIST    Vocabulary:  20  minutes  Roots  acid/acri  (bitter,  sour)  and  corp  (body)    Say,  “We’ve  said  that  so  many  words  in  English  come  from  Latin  and  Greek,  two  languages  that  were  spoken  over  2,000  years  ago.    Now,  we’ll  being  looking  at  roots.    Roots  usually  cannot  stand  by  itself  as  a  word,  but  is  a  very  important  part  of  a  word.    We  know  we’ve  probably  found  a  root  in  a  word  when  we  take  off  all  of  the  prefixes  and  suffixes  we  can  and  are  left  with  something  that  doesn’t  look  like  a  word.    For  instance,  look  at  these  two  words.”  Acidity  Corpse    Write  the  words  acidity  and  corpse  on  the  overhead.  “With  acidity,  we  can  take  off  the  suffix  ity  which  means  state  of  and  we  have  the  word  acid.    With  

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corpse,  we  can  take  off  se  and  what  do  we  have  left?    Right!    corpse.    If  you  put  it  together  it  means  the  state  of  being  bitter.    Corpse  means  a  body  –  especially  dead  body.”  Tell  students  to  write  the  definition  and  the  two  examples  in  their  Reader’s  Notebook.    Literacy:  30  minutes  Elements  of  Literature  p.  2  –  Plot  and  The  Wise  Old  Woman  partner  read  and  answer  the  active  reading  questions  in  the  margin.    Exit  Pass                                                                                  

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Stacey  Chavours                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      _August  30,  2012  Room  212                                        ___                                                                                                                                                                                  ___  8th  Grade  Language  Arts      Essential  Question:  How  do  readers  use  the  elements  of  plot  to  create  a  quality  summary?  Standard:  RL.8.2:  Determine  a  theme  or  central  idea  of  a  text  and  how  it  is  conveyed  through  particular  details;  provide  a  summary  of  the  text  distinct  from  personal  opinions  or  judgments.    Bell-­‐ringer:    10  minutes  –  silent  read;  affix  acid  and  corp;  and  unknown  word    Poetry  and  Writing:    15  minutes  SIMS:  The  Game    by  Elizabeth  Spires        Say,  “Today  we’re  back  in  poems  can  be  about  anything  territory.    This  poem  knocked  me  out  for  at  least  ten  reasons.    At  the  top  of  my  list  was  imagining  your  reactions  to  it.    How  many  of  you  have  ever  played  the  computer  simulation  game  The  Sims?  .  .  .  I  figured  as  much.    I  think  you’re  going  to  appreciate  “Sims:  The  Game”  and  Elizabeth  Spires’  take  on  how  a  little  kid  might  interpret  the  version  of  grown-­‐up  life  it  presents.”  “The  persona  of  the  speaker  is  a  child,  for  whom  the  poet  creates  sincere,  childlike  diction  and  emotions.    Pay  attention  to  the  use  of  white  space  to  reinforce  the  voice  –  to  create  childlike  pauses  and  emphases  –  and  the  lack  of  punctuation.      The  use  of  stanza  breaks  to  signal  and  set  off  categories  of  information,  which  function  here  much  as  paragraphs  do  in  prose.    The  use  of  irony  :  the  humorous  differences  between  real  life  and  the  version  of  real  life  simulated  in  SIMS.”  Read  the  poem  aloud.  Tell  students  to  go  back  into  this  poem  on  your  own  and  mark  the  lines  that  strike  you  as  funny.    Then,  we’ll  talk  about  Spires’  use  of  irony  to  create  humor  –  about  the  distance  between  the  child’s  vision  of  adult  life  and  the  real  thing.  Discuss.  Ask  students  where  the  irony  was  and  have  them  mark  the  text  and  write  “irony.”  Say,  “Something  you  can  do  as  an  adolescent  poet  is  adopt  a  childlike  persona  and  create  your  own  ironic  situation:  speak  in  a  little  kid’s  voice  about  something  a  little  kid  doesn’t’  fully  understand  yet,  but  you  do.    Write  your  poem  in  your  writer’s  notebook.”    Give  them  five  minutes  to  write.    Vocabulary:  10  minutes  Suffixes  –ary  (of;  like;  relating  to)  and  –ive  (of;  relating  to;  belonging  to)  Write the following words on the board: honor and act. Say, “Any ideas about the meaning of honor and act?” “So what does honorary mean? Active?” Say, “Write down the definition for –ary and –ive in your writer’s notebook.” Literacy:  15  minutes—  Continue  with  The  Wise  Old  Woman.    Exit  Pass  

           

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Stacey  Chavours                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      August  31,  2012  Room  212                                                                                                                                                                                                                            _____8th  Grade  Language  Arts      Essential  Question:  How  do  readers  use  the  elements  of  plot  to  create  a  quality  summary?  Standard:  RL.8.2:  Determine  a  theme  or  central  idea  of  a  text  and  how  it  is  conveyed  through  particular  details;  provide  a  summary  of  the  text  distinct  from  personal  opinions  or  judgments.    Bell-­ringer:    15  minutes  –  Reading  log  and  silent  read  and  affix  ary  and  ive.    Vocabulary:  10  minutes  –  Vocabulary  card    Poetry:  10  minutes  Today’s  poem  shifts  gears  again.    I’d  call  it  a  poem  of  social  consciousness.    It’s  about  contemporary  American  society  –  about  the  world  we  live  in  and  whether  it’s  the  world  we  want  to  live  in.    Something  else  a  poem  can  do  is  draw  back,  show  us  the  bigger  picture  of  our  lives,  and  ask  what’s  wrong  here?  I  want  you  to  notice  the  form:  unrhymed  couplets:  stanzas  of  two  line  s  each.    The  form:  the  poem  is  one  long  interrogative  sentence;  the  only  end-­‐stop  punctuation  is  the  question  mark  after  the  last  line.    Sensory  language  that  readers  can  see  and  hear.    The  use  of  specific  brand  names  to  represent  contemporary  consumerism.    The  tone:  conversational  and  informal  at  some  points,  and  rich  with  figurative  language  at  others.    The  theme,  which  is  especially  clear  in  the  final  seven  stanzas:  how  middle-­‐class  Americans  use  stuff  and  noise  to  dull  our  social  consciousness  –  our  awareness  of  others  who  are  suffering  and  need  our  help.  Read  the  poem  out  loud.  Please  go  back  into  this  powerful  poem  on  your  own  and  mark  its  most  important  lines:  the  lines  where  you  think  the  poet’s  meaning  –  about  what’s  wrong  with  America  today  –  is  strongest.      Discuss.  Write  a  poem  about  what’s  not  right  about  the  society  we  live  in,  protest  it,  even  show  how  it  could  be  different.    Literature:  10  minutes    Finish  Wise  Old  Woman.    20  minutes  –    Introduce  literature  circle  autobiography  books  and  talk  about  them.    Pass  out  the  literature  circle  sheets  and  discuss.    Pass  out  a  tub  with  each  book  for  them  to  preview  and  use  the  five  finger  rule.    On  a  sheet  of  paper  they  should  write  their  name  and  list  the  book  they  want  to  read.    They  should  write  two  more  books  they  want  to  read.    Exit  Pass                      

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Jed’s First Day Writing Territories List Lesson 1

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Marnie’s First Day Writing Territories List Lesson 1

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© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

Collecting Your Writing Territories Lesson 1

memories: early, earlier, andrecent

obsessions

idiosyncrasies

problems

dreams

itches

understandings

confusions

passions

sorrows

risks

accomplishments

fears

worries

fantasies

family, close and distant

friends, now and then

fads

favorites, now and then

pets, now and then

teachers, now and then

places: school, camp, trips, timesaway with friends and relatives

hobbies

sports

games

music

books

poems

songs

movies

writers and artists

food

pet peeves

beloved things—objects andpossessions—now and then

all the loves of your life

In Collecting Your Writing Territories, Consider . . .

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         Literature  Circles:  

Students  will  meet  at  least  twice  per  week.    Each  student  will  have  a  specific  role.    Everyone  will  

get  a  chance  to  work  in  each  role  at  least  once.    The  roles  are  numbered  (1-­5).    Students  will  

draw  numbers  to  determine  initial  roles.  

All  groups  will  have  discussion  roles  for  literature  circles.    The  roles  are  discussion  director,  

quote  finder,  illustrator,  seed  maker,  and  vocabulary  expert.  

1.  The  discussion  director  (role  #1)  leads  the  group  in  discussion  of  higher  level  questions  

developed  by  the  student.    She  takes  notes  during  the  meeting  and  makes  sure  that  every  group  

member  participates  in  discussion.  

2.    The  quote  finder  (role  #2)  finds  important  and  memorable  sections  and/or  quotes  to  read  

out  loud  to  the  group.    He  writes  down  important  passage  and  the  reasons  why  this  passage  is  

important  or  marks  important  passages  with  sticky  notes  along  with  notes  about  why  the  

passage  is  important.  

3.    The  illustrator  (role  #3)  provides  graphic  or  artistic  response  to  the  text  through  drawings,  

pictures,  or  political  cartoons.    She  explains  the  graphic  to  the  group.  

4.    The  seed  maker  (role  #4)  prepares  a  brief,  written  summary  (at  least  1  full  paragraph)  of  

the  assigned  reading.    He  presents  to  the  group.  

5.    The  vocabulary  expert  (role  #5)  finds  and  shares  complicated  or  important  words.    He  

includes  at  least  5  words  from  the  reading  and  their  definitions.    He  explains  how  the  words  

were  used  in  the  text.  

 

The  progression  of  role  assignments  for  succeeding  discussions  will  be  as  follows:  (1  to  2,  2  to  

3,  3  to  4,  4  to  5,  5  to  1)  

 

Grading:  Students  will  turn  in  the  work  for  each  role.    Your  role  is  worth  20  points.    I  will  be  checking  mainly  for  completion,  but  I  will  deduct  points  for  lack  of  effort.    Student  will  get  a  grade  for  notes  they  take  on  each  person’s  report  on  the  role.    While  the  person  discusses  his  role,  each  student  should  make  brief  notes.  Your  note  taking  is  part  of  your  20  points  for  the  role.  

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© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

Questions to Help Mine Your Heart Lesson 2

QUEST IONS TO HELP MINE YOUR HEARTWhat has stayed in your heart? What memories, moments, people, animals, objects, places, books, fears, scars, friends, siblings, parents, grandparents, teachers, other people, journeys, secrets, dreams, crushes, relationships, comforts, learning experiences? What’s at the center? The edges? What’s in your heart?

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© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

Peter’s Heart Map Lesson 2

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EMERALD MEMOR I ESThey lie there,emerald stones embedded in gold posts,one backing different from the other.

I flinch when I recallthe sharp painthat lasted only a second.

I rememberthe way my hands learnedto absentmindedly turn

the backs of the emerald stones,making little indents on the tipsof my fingers.

Now I pick up my emerald postsand place them beside my otherearrings—

the only gold pairin a sea of silver,a souvenir

of the price I paidfor something like beauty.

—Audrey Stoltz

Emerald Memories Lesson 2© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

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This summer,with nothing better to do,I began to play Ping Pong.Soon I was obsessed.I breathed it,I spoke it,it became my fixation.

I began to master the techniques:frontspin,backspin,fronthand,backhand,fronthand slam,backhand slam.

I learned to love the soundthe ball made as it bounded acrossthe warped table.The rivalries that swelled among me and my brothersbecame so intensethat brawls over the matcheswere commonplace.

As the summer wore on I became even more intent on besting my brothers,and I practiced long and longer:frontspin,backspin,fronthand,backhand,fronthand slam,backhand slam.

I knew that table by heart,I knew exactly where it ended.I could have played with my eyes

closed,just by sound and touch.

But the rivalries became too intense,the matches too serious.One day my brothers and I came to a horrible realization.This simple game was tearing our family apart.It was time to abandon Ping Pongfor the welfare of the family.

But while it lastedit sure was a good way to pass a

summerwith nothing better to do.

—Nicholas Miller

TABLE TENN IS

Table Tennis Lesson 2© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

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OB ITUARY FOR A DUTCH DOLLI rip off the colorful wrapping,and my tiny handsgrasp two soft braids.The doll’s wooden clogs click together,and her deep blue eyes stare up into mine.She is more than a doll.I introduce her to her new family,and they throw a ball for her.Only she dances with the prince.But her beauty fades fastas I drag her mercilesslyacross the kitchen floor,as I play her to death.

Now I remember how I feltopening that package.Today her face still turns up to me,but her eyes are hidden in deep blackbehind empty sockets.The braids are frayed,their honey color coatedwith gray dust.I brush it away.I want to make her beautiful again.I pick her up,and her threadbare dress tears.

Her cold plastic skinhas lost the spark of lifethat used to ignite my imagination.I lay her down into a boxand move on.

—Alison Rittershaus

Obituary for a Dutch Doll Lesson 2© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

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SOUR PATCH K IDS

Grinning, ecstatic, crazed, I hand the dollar-fifty to the cashier.She looks like a fan has been blowing on her face on high for way too long.

“Thankyouhaveaniceday.” I know that I will.

I snatch the package of watermelon Sour Patch Kidsand plop down on the bench outside the convenience store.

First I look, then I tear.The loose sugar flies up in my face.

I lick it off like a seagull at the beach.Then the process begins.

I shake the contents into my lap and gaze into the shiny,glittering, red section of each half melon.

Then I pick each one up like an ancient artifactand place it back in the bag, carefully.

The sugar sprinkled on my lap I dispose of with my tongue.Then I repeat steps one and two,

greedily scarfing every last delectable sugar grain.

The whole process takes three hours.

The once glittery watermelons no longer sparkle in the sun.I lift the bag to my face

and pour the sugar-stripped candy down my gullet.Soon, there is nothing left but sweet aroma

wafting from a lifeless bag.

It is over—not just the bag of candy,

not just my money,not just my happiness . . .

but, well, life itself.I frown hard and shove my hands into my pockets.

Like a gift from God, a dollar bill finds my fingertips.

My life rewinds three hours.

—Forrest Carver

Sour Patch Kids Lesson 2© 2002 by Nancie Atwell from Lessons That Change Writers(Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann)

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 Name _____________________ Date _____________________ Class _____________________ Assignment __________________ TOPIC: I can understand how to make meaning out of plot. We will watch a multimedia presentation to help us understand the components of plot to become better readers.  What is plot? What can a story’s conflict be a struggle with? What does a complication do to the plot? Where does a story’s climax fit into the plot chain? What does a resolution do? What is a subplot? What are parallel episodes? Practice: What is the conflict in this story?

 

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What complications have occurred in the story so far? What subplot is developed on this page? What parallel episodes have appeared in the story so far? Which paragraph contains the story’s climax? What are the boldface words in the story? Retelling: Summarizing What is retelling? Why use the retelling strategy? What is the one retelling tip? What is another retelling tip?   KEY MESSAGE:

 

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Table  of  Contents  Heading  or  Name  of  Handout   Page  Number                                                                                                          

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Definition Visual representation

Synonyms Antonyms

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Quarter 1 Week 1 Draw this chart in your notebook. Add any words you can think of that fit the categories.

Prefixes Roots Suffixes ad-

(to; motion toward;

addition to)

bin- (two)

acid/acri (bitter, sour,

sharp)

corp (body)

-ary (of; like;

relating to)

-ive (of; relating to; belonging

to) Adapt Addict Adhere Admit

Binary Binomial

Acidity Acrid

Corporation Incorporate Corpulent

Corpse

Customary Honorary Obituary

Inquisitive Active

Creative