find that "hook“…it is one of the hardest aspects of feature writing, it is only one element of what

makes a good feature writer.

Finding out what works whereThink about the features that you have read and enjoyed:

What made you want to read it in the first place? How did the intro grab you?

And what makes you carry on reading it? Is it the clever phrases used by the writer? The

fact you know you can believe what they have told you? The fact they make you laugh?

Making the subject more interestingThere is always a danger of

simply retelling the text, or just telling the reader about

the composer’s life… or giving your judgment on the text.

You need to give more of a “personal expertise” feeling to your article..

Embed your knowledge of how each persona’s personal and public life has influenced the ideas which are suggested by their images (context).

You can include relevant quotes from the actual composer, as well as some of your own personal observations.

Even though you may find the subject matter may (on the face of it) quite dull, you have to try to make it interesting.

It is important to remember that this is not an opinion piece… you must acknowledge that the “main” audience is the “HSC marker!”

you should always remain focused on answering the question and backing-up your explanations with quotes from the text.

PLAN YOUR PARAGRAPHS!!!Use a mind map for each “idea” or interpretation that

you understand from the subtext.Use tables or venn diagrams or post-it notes…

whatever works best for you

PLAN YOUR WORKAND… FOLLOW YOUR PLAN… ‘CAUSE THEN…

YOUR PLAN WILL WORK!!!!

Getting direct quotes is essential for a good feature.

To find an expert, try a search on Google. If that does not work go to bmj.com and put

the subject you are researching in the search engine. You will soon find a list of recent articles.

The introductory paragraphAn anecdote, or an interesting observation, or even a clever play on words will often make a

good introduction.

Sometimes a direct quote will do the trick. Try to avoid the plodding "once upon a time"

style.

It is worth spending time on your introductory paragraph.

Play around with ideas and images until you hit on one that works.

But do not wait for the perfect intro before you start writing.

Sometimes you just need to get it down on paper, then hone the introduction later.

Be Creative!!Unlike news stories (where there is a standard

formula to follow) feature articles can, and should, be more creative so that you keep the reader's attention.

FINALLYGET STARTED NOW AND DON’T WAIT ‘TIL THE

LAST MINUTE!!!

“JUST DO IT!!!”