by olivia h ‘you must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink. you...
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WILLOW CLASS’ FANTASTIC WRITING!TERM 3DINOSAUR TOPIC
WRITING INSTRUCTIONS ON HOW TO LOOK AFTER A DINOSAUR
By Olivia H ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth
will fall out and they will stink. You should feed him meet because he will
get hegry’.
‘You need to get him a drek (drink) because ofwis (otherwise) he will be festy.
And lest (last) you nee to love him.’
CREATING A POEM USING ALLITERATION By Keane
‘Brilliant brontosaurusTall T-RexAmazing AbrosaurusSpiky Segosaurus’
WRITING A POEM USING SIMILES
By Thaddeus The dinosaur is as fus (fast) as a car.The dinosaur is like gen grus (grass).The dinsoaur is fus as a snayoo (snail)His teeth are sharp like a nif (knife).
WRITING INSTRUCTIONS FOR WHAT TO DO IF A DINOSAUR CHASES YOU
By Tommy
First you run saft (fast) Next you climb saft (to safety) Now you hide Then you call help!
USING A REPEATING PATTERN OR LINE WHEN WRITING A POEM
By ElizabethDinosaur chompDinosaur stompI fill neves (nervous)Dinosaur angryDinosaur roarI am filling petrifidDinosaur gruntDinosaur loudI coud run away
RECOUNTING AN EVENT IN THE FORM OF A NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
By Lucy S
On Monday 9th January 2014 we found a letta from T-Rex I was excited. We went to Nersry and Found a clue. I red it I was scared! We saw clue 3. The class was excited and it was fun! Then we went to the hall way there was a huge footprint. And (we) found the egg. The T-cher siad “Wow! It is huge”.