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WILLOW CLASS’ FANTASTIC WRITING! TERM 3 DINOSAUR TOPIC

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Page 1: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

WILLOW CLASS’ FANTASTIC WRITING!TERM 3DINOSAUR TOPIC

Page 2: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

WRITING INSTRUCTIONS ON HOW TO LOOK AFTER A DINOSAUR

By Olivia H ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth

will fall out and they will stink. You should feed him meet because he will

get hegry’.

Page 3: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

‘You need to get him a drek (drink) because ofwis (otherwise) he will be festy.

And lest (last) you nee to love him.’

Page 4: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

CREATING A POEM USING ALLITERATION By Keane

‘Brilliant brontosaurusTall T-RexAmazing AbrosaurusSpiky Segosaurus’

Page 5: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

WRITING A POEM USING SIMILES

By Thaddeus The dinosaur is as fus (fast) as a car.The dinosaur is like gen grus (grass).The dinsoaur is fus as a snayoo (snail)His teeth are sharp like a nif (knife).

Page 6: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

WRITING INSTRUCTIONS FOR WHAT TO DO IF A DINOSAUR CHASES YOU

By Tommy

First you run saft (fast) Next you climb saft (to safety) Now you hide Then you call help!

Page 7: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

USING A REPEATING PATTERN OR LINE WHEN WRITING A POEM

By ElizabethDinosaur chompDinosaur stompI fill neves (nervous)Dinosaur angryDinosaur roarI am filling petrifidDinosaur gruntDinosaur loudI coud run away

Page 8: By Olivia H  ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink.  You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’

RECOUNTING AN EVENT IN THE FORM OF A NEWSPAPER ARTICLE

By Lucy S

On Monday 9th January 2014 we found a letta from T-Rex I was excited. We went to Nersry and Found a clue. I red it I was scared! We saw clue 3. The class was excited and it was fun! Then we went to the hall way there was a huge footprint. And (we) found the egg. The T-cher siad “Wow! It is huge”.