winter intensive 2013 class 1 soka university world language center sou koike
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Winter Intensive 2013Class 1
Soka UniversityWorld Language Center
Sou Koike
Table of Contents
I. Introduction to Independent Writing– Basic information– Scoring criteria– Requirements & recommendations
II. Writing an effective introduction– Three steps to Go– How to deal with the questions– Drill
III. Peer feedback and Whole-class review
INTRODUCTION TOINDEPENDENT WRITING
Winter Intensive 2013 Class 1
Basic Information
1topic
30minutes
300words
Scoring Criteria
5.0 - 1.0• Organization
• Content
• Structure & Written Expressions
• Number of words30 - 0
Requirements
• Paragraphed essay
• Appropriate response to the topic
• Coherence and consistency
• Length of the work
• Time management:– Planning– Presenting– Revising
Recommendations
WRITING ANEFFECTIVE INTRODUCTION
Winter Intensive 2013 Class 1
Three Steps to Go
Pick aside
State yourposition
State the reason for
your opinion
Pick a side
Agreement/Disagreement
Advantage(s)over others
Choice/Preference
Personalexperience
State your position
Do you agree with the following statement? Parents should select their children’s friends carefully to make sure those friends reflect proper values. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do not believe that parents should select their children’s friends.
I believe In my opinionI feel that
In my view
I do not feel that
I think that
My position is
I do not believe
It is my belief that
State the reason for your opinion= Thesis Statement
Do you agree with the following statement? Parents should select their children’s friends carefully to make sure those friends reflect proper values. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do not believe that parents should select their children’s friends. It would be harmful to children if they were not allowed to choose their friends. Parents should be interested in their children’s friends, but they should let their children pick their own friends.
I believe this because I feel this way because The reason I think this is
This is because Since
How to deal with the questions
Number of sentences in the questions
Number of issuesto be mentioned in the passage
Drill1. It is the teacher’s responsibility to make a student learn the material.
2. Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public.
3. Colleges and universities should offer more distance learning courses to accommodate the needs of students.
4. When choosing a career, financial gain should be the most important consideration.
5. Schools should have mandatory testing each year to prove they are meeting minimum educational standards.
Answers: One paragraph requiredTime: 30 minutes
Drill #2
1. A knowledge of history is absolutely essential.
2. Some students prefer to study alone, while other students prefer to study with others. Discuss the advantages of each type of studying. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
3. Patience is the most important characteristic of a boss.
4. Some people work better during the day, while some other people work better at night., Which kind of person are you, and why? Use reasons and examples to support your response.
5. Time should never be wasted.
Answers: One paragraph requiredTime: 30 minutes
Peer Feedback
Whole-Class Review