what is your definition of descriptive feedback?
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What is your definition of descriptive feedback?
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
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What is descriptive feedback?
Feedback…..• Focuses on providing information to
the student with the goal of improving what is being addressed.
• Allows the student to adjust and revise their thinking.
• It is conversational, less formal and is not judgmental or evaluative.
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How can we provide assessment experiences for students that will start them on an “upward spiral?”
Assessment FOR Learning has 3 major components:• Accurate Information• Descriptive Feedback • Student Involvement
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Effective Descriptive Feedback
• Should be specific to how to improve performance
• Should be timely• Should be relevant to the
student and their goals• Should be clear and concise
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Feedback CONTENT can be EFFECTIVE or INEFFECTIVE:
Ineffective Descriptive Feedback
• Irrelevant• General• Delayed• Overwhelming
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Utilizing Descriptive Feedback in Science:
• Science notebooks• Homework assignments• Science Projects (Ongoing)• Essential Lab Reports• Research Papers• Performance Task Items• Presentations
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Effective vs. Ineffective? you be the judge
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Descriptive Feedback Sample 1: “I love the chart that starts with trees and ends up at the recycling plant (instead of back at more trees). It follows the relevant section of your report and illustrates the complete cycle so clearly! How did you come up with that idea? “
FocusComparisonFunctionValence (positive)ClaritySpecificityTone
Effective Descriptive Feedback
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Descriptive Feedback Sample 2:
“Your report was the shortest one in the class. You didn’t put enough in it. “
FocusComparisonFunctionValence (positive)ClaritySpecificityTone
Ineffective Descriptive Feedback
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Effective Descriptive Feedback addresses both cognitive and motivational factors.
• Cognitive factors: Corrective feedback gives specific information students can use. It focuses on their strengths and ways to improve.
• Motivational factors: Once the students feel they understand what to do and why, a sense of control is developed.
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Category Average Effect Size
% Gain # of Studies
Identifying Similarities & Differences 1.61 45 31
Summarizing & Note-Taking 1.00 34 179
Reinforcing Effort & Providing Recognition .80 29 21
Homework & Practice .77 28 134
Nonlinguistic Representation .75 27 246
Cooperative Learning .73 27 122
Setting Objectives & Providing Feedback .61 23 408
Generating & Testing Hypotheses .61 23 63
Cues, Questions, & Advance Organizers .59 22 1251
Effectiveness of providing feedback
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Which group of students has been motivated for success?
OR
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So, how can we give descriptive feedback that is informational as well as motivational?
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Descriptive Feedback Strategies
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Descriptive Feedback Strategy #1
Model both giving and using feedback:• Use think-aloud activities so students see how revisions
are made and why• Create a classroom environment where feedback is
expected and “mistakes” are recognized as opportunities for learning
• Provide feedback PRIOR to providing the grade
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Descriptive Feedback Strategy #2
Be clear about the learning target and the criteria for good work:• Use assignments with obvious value and interest• Explain to the student why an assignment is given;
set a relevant purpose for the work• Make directions clear• Utilize student friendly rubrics• Have students develop their own rubrics or translate
yours into student friendly language if appropriate• Design lessons that incorporate using the rubrics as
students work
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Descriptive Feedback Strategy #3
Teach students self and peer assessment skills. This will:
• Teach students where feedback comes from• Increase students’ interest in feedback by helping
them to ‘own’ it and track it themselves• Answer students’ own questions• Develop self-regulation skills, necessary for using any
feedback
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Students can use tools to help determine and track their own data and feedback.
HOW CLOSE AM I TO MY TARGET?
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Data-Feedback-Strategy Method in the CLASSROOM / STUDENT
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Question f or Simple More I am good at:
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Total # CORRECT: My Score/ Grade:
DFSM/C- 2a
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Descriptive FeedbackStrategy #4
Design lessons in which students use feedback on previous work to produce better work:• Provide opportunities to redo assignments• Give new but similar assignments for the same learning
targets• Give opportunities for students to make the connections
between the feedback they received and the improvement of their work
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How will you know if your feedback was effective?
• Your students learn; their work improves.
• Your students become more motivated; they believe they can learn, want to learn and take more control over their own learning.
• Your classroom becomes a place where feedback is valued and viewed as productive.
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Descriptive Feedback Starter Stems
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APPLICATION
Let’s review some student work:• Review the item sample, sample answer,
student response and provide feedback .• Compare your feedback to that of the State.
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
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Note:
Even though performance task
items will not be assessed on
the 2010-2011 FCAT, they are a
critical component of
instruction. They assist teachers
in understanding a student’s
ability to think critically and
they prepare students for
rigorous question items .
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Activity:
• Look at the student sample.
• What type of corrective feedback would you give this student so that they can improve their response.
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The State’s Descriptive Feedback
Did your Descriptive feedback address these weaknesses?
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In closing descriptive feedback:
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Tutorial and Enrichment
Act
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
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Tutorial and Enrichment: Purpose
• Provide additional instruction for students who do not demonstrate mastery on the assessments.
• Provide instruction that provides accelerated learning experiences to students through access to more challenging content, new concepts, and higher order thinking strategies.
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APPLICATION•The ACT section of FCIM indicates that you will implement tutorials and enrichment based on data.
In your small group:•In pairs, indicate what type of extended learning opportunities you would provide for the sample student provided (Place that child activity).
PDCA Instructional Cycle
PLAN
ACT
DO
CHECK
• Data Disaggregation
• Calendar Development• Direct Instructional
Focus
• Tutorials
• Enrichment
• Assessment
• Maintenance
• Monitoring
Act