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War Horse
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War Horse
L/O: to write a review of a book
Success Criteria: I can…
• understand and use paragraphs correctly
• check my work very carefully for capital letters,
missed words and correct punctuation
• create simple, compound and complex sentences on
my own
• plan my work and refer to my plan
• write a review that has an introduction, a main section
and a conclusion.
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Writing a Review of “War Horse”
You are going to write a review of
War Horse.
Aim to write 5 paragraphs.
We will look at how to plan this piece
of writing.
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Planning Your Writing
Stage One: Thinking
1.What are you writing about?
2.Who are you writing for?
3.Why are you writing? To entertain?
To inform? To amuse? To
persuade? To excite?
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Two: Outline
Once you have your ideas, you need to
organise them into some sort of shape or
plan. From your topic web (stage 3) you
should see that some points have fallen
naturally into separate areas or paragraphs
for your article. If some areas seem short of
details you could carry out some extra
research by looking at the text again.
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Two: Outline
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Paragraph 2: Background to the story
Paragraph 3: Summary of the book – characters, perspectives, etc.
Paragraph 4: Personal view of the book
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
Now organise your topic web into a series of notes on
each paragraph.
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Three: Notes
Produce a topic web of
all of the information you
will include in your
article.
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Three: Notes – Topic Web
Book Review
of
War Horse
1. Introduction
______________
______________
______________
2. Background to
the story
______________
______________
______________
3. Plot summary
______________
______________
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4. Personal View
______________
______________
______________
5. Conclusion
______________
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Four: First Draft
Check that your ideas are grouped together
sensibly and that they make sense.
Now write up your notes, in rough, in carefully
arranged paragraphs. Refer to your “How to
write a book review” notes.
Then go back and add evidence, opinion
phrases, etc.
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Planning Your Writing
Stage Five: Neat Copy
When you are finally happy with the
organisation of your rough draft, the next
step is to make sure your spellings and
punctuation are correct. Once you are
happy with this, you are ready to write up
the final draft.
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Recap
Stage One: Thinking
Stage Two: OutlineParagraph 1: IntroductionParagraph 2: Background to the storyParagraph 3: Summary of the book – characters, perspectives, etc.
Paragraph 4: Personal view of the bookParagraph 5: Conclusion
Stage Three: Notes (topic web)
Stage Four: First Draft
Stage Five: Neat Copy
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Personal Opinions
In my opinion …
This makes me feel …
I think that …
To me …
When I was reading this, I thought …
From my perspective …
My view is that …
I believe that …
From my point of view …
I consider…
The most exciting part…
The characters were excellent
The ending was really exciting…
The best part was…
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Evidence
Back up any opinions, thoughts, etc. with
evidence.
e.g.: Topthorn was always there for Joey.
Better to say…
Topthorn was a good friend to Joey. When Joey
first joined the army, he was frightened but
Topthorn often stood next to him to comfort him
and they soon became good friends.