using r.a.p.p. to answer a short-response question
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Using R.A.P.P. to Answer a Short-Response Question. First, the question:. Explain why Percy thinks his mom has bad luck. Use two details from chapter 3 to support your response. R = Restate the Question. Explain why Percy thinks his mom has bad luck. - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
Using R.A.P.P. to Answer a Short-Response Question
First, the question:
Explain why Percy thinks his mom
has bad luck. Use two details from
chapter 3 to support your response.
R = Restate the Question
Explain why Percy thinks his mom has bad luck.
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck.
(In this case, it’s almost the same as the original question.)
A = Answer the question.
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck.
There are many things that have happened to his mom that makes him think this.
P = Prove it
Before you write, go to the text and find the reasons.
How many are there? How many should you put into
your answer? Which do you think are the best?
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck.There are many things that have happened
to hismom that makes him think this.
For instance, her parents died in a plane crash when she was five, so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t much care about her. She also ended up marrying Gabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk.
How many examples can you find in this response?
Are we done writing?
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk.
What about a conclusion?
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck.There are many things that have happened
tohis mom that makes him think this. Forinstance, her parents died in a plane crashwhen she was five, so she was raised by anuncle who didn’t much care about her. Shealso ended up marrying Gabe Ugliano, whowas a world-class jerk.
As you can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
P = Proofread and edit
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
The 2-point rubric
Now let’s see how our answer stacks up against the rubric we re-wrote.
The features of a 2-point response are: - correct inferences and details that answer the question - show understanding of text - appropriate information - enough information - complete sentences with few errors
correct inferences and details that answer the question
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
show understanding of text
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
appropriate information
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
enough information
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, (1) herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so (2) she was raised by an uncle who didn’tmuchcare about her. She also ended up (3) marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
complete sentences with few errors
Percy Jackson thinks his mom has bad luck. Thereare many things that have happened to his momthat makes him think this. For instance, herparents died in a plane crash when she was five,so she was raised by an uncle who didn’t muchcare about her. She also ended up marryingGabe Ugliano, who was a world-class jerk. Asyou can see, she didn’t have very good luck!
Scoring:
What would you score this answer?
How does yours stack up against this one?