treatment sheet
TRANSCRIPT
STORY
Enter 2012 Hartlepool, a bustling city filled with
commerce and culture, a city filled with glitz and
glamour but no city is without crime but this city is
home to James White a detective working for
Hartlepool Homicide who’s business is keeping
serial killers off the streets and business is booming.
Now more than ever…
OPENING
Start-A jogger runs along a beach but notices something and then
screams.
A close up of a horrible scared body laying on a beach at dawn with a
low angle showing two men's legs as they discuss how they need to get
detective James White to help them.
Middle-The opening title’s of our film show the detective James White
getting ready to go to the crime scene with the title’s of the other
characters involved in the film. Elliptical editing will be used here to
cut down the process and it would also show that the character has
expertise.
OPENING 2
End-The end of our sequence would feature a tracking shot
following the main character as he walks towards the body
however in the foreground there is two other detectives
interviewing a jogger who is revealed to have been the one to
find the body, the camera then moves to the main character
talking to other detectives and a shot reverse shot is used as
well as an eyeline match to a lighter with a tally chart on it
which the main character will see and will allow them to make
some progress in the case.
SYNOPSIS
James White is a 32 year old veteran of the Hartlepool Homicide, he lives
in a one-room apartment after being divorced from his wife Linda who
lives with his two kids.
During his career as a forensic investigator James has seen some horrific
murders, witnessing some of the worst criminals in the history of the city
but he’s also
put a large number of those criminals behind bars.
The film starts with a jogger running along a beach and then it cuts to two
police officers looking at the body and talking about phoning the police
chief.
SYNOPSIS 2
After James White receives the phone call from the police chief, he
then rolls over to the other side of the bed and looks at a picture of
him with a woman and two kids he then pushes the picture down
and we then see him getting out of bed and getting changed while
he is getting ready to go to work.
We then see him getting out of a car and walking towards the crime
scene with 2 police officers interviewing the jogger and other police
officers looking at evidence around the crime scene. James White
then walks over to another police officer named Richard Pascal.
SYNOPSIS 3
James and Richard then discuss the crime scene and
Richard then tells James that this body has been the 4th one
like this in a month but James then notices a lighter among
the sand/grass and after picking it up he then turns to
Richard and asks him if it is the fourth and then shows him
the lighter which has 7 notches tallied onto the face.
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
Setting-2012
Location-Aidan’s house, Headland beach OR Clavering field.
(Beach is preferred but if we are unable to film due to wind
then the field will suffice)
Rating-18
Run time-2:00 minutes
COSTUMES
For costumes we are using smart shirts for our characters
as it makes them look professional when they are at work.