the snow queen story
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This is a rewritten version of The Snow Queen based on the Hans Christian Anderson fairy tale rewrite by Ken Setterington - for original audience grade two ELL studentsTRANSCRIPT
Once upon a time, there was an evil magician. He made a magical mirror that made everything good and beautiful look bad and ugly. If a kind person looked into the mirror, than the reflection was hideous. If a person had a kind thought, then an ugly smile would appear. The mirror would laugh meanly at nice people, and the magician would laugh because he thought he was so smart. “This mirror is so much fun,” he would say.
But then one day, the mirror broke into a million pieces. Those pieces caused more unhappiness, as they were spread around the world by the wind. When a piece got into someone’s eye, it made him see the world as bad. If a piece of the mirror went into someone’s heart, their heart became like ice.
There once lived a little boy and a girl, who grew up to be good friends. They played in the rose garden all the time. The little boy was called Kay and the girl’s name was Gerda. Kay lived with his grandmother.
One day the snow was coming down hard, and Kay asked “Is there a queen of the snow?” His grandmother said “Oh yes, The Snow Queen. On winter nights she flies through the streets and looks through the windows.”
“Could The Snow Queen come in here?” asked Gerda.
“Let her try,” said the boy, Kay. “I will push her into the stove, and she will melt because she is made of snow.”
That night when Kay was getting ready for bed, he looked out the window. He saw a snowflake that was small at first, and then it gradually got bigger until it was the size of a woman. She was made of ice and had bright eyes. Kay was frightened and jumped back from the window. The next day there was more snow, and then spring came. The birds came back and the windows were open again.
When it was summer, Kay and Gerda sat reading a book. Then Kay cried out, “ouch, something has hurt my heart.” Then he said “ouch, something has hurt my eye.” Gerda looked into his eyes, but didn’t see anything.
“I think it’s gone” Kay said, but it was not. It was a piece from the mirror. The pain was gone, but the piece of the mirror remained. It made everything good look bad. Kay also had a piece in his heart, and his heart grew cold and would soon become like a piece of ice.
From then on, when he saw flowers he said they were ugly. Whenever his grandma tried to tell him lovely stories, he would argue with her. Whenever anyone came to the house he would make fun of his grandma. Because of the pieces of the mirror in his eye, he hurt everyone, including his best friend Gerda.
He stopped playing with Gerda. Stopped thinking the flowers were pretty and started thinking that snow was more beautiful than flowers ever could be.
One day he shouted to Gerda that he was going to play in the snow on his sled and Gerda could not come. It was there that a woman on a big white sleigh came and kidnapped him, taking him away to a big ice castle. When they stopped, she invited him to get under her blanket, and touched his forehead.
“You feel cold” he said. He thought he would die, but he was only cold for a minute, and then he felt warm. He forgot about Gerda, his grandmother and home.
Kay looked at the Snow Queen. She was so beautiful and perfect. He was no longer afraid. The Snow Queen smiled at him, and Kay fell asleep under his warm blanket beside the Snow Queen.
Gerda didn’t know where Kay was. Where did he go? No one knew. But some of the boys Kay was sledding with when he was kidnapped, said they saw a white woman on a white sleigh. Others said that he may have drowned in the river because the water was so cold and Kay could not swim. Gerda cried. It was a long, cold winter.
Finally spring came. Gerda said “Kay is dead and gone”
“We don’t believe that” said the sun. “Neither do we” said the birds.
Gerda wondered what she could do or who she could ask. She decided to put on her shoes and go to the river to ask about her friend, Kay.
“Is it true you have taken my friend?” she asked the river. “I will give you my beautiful shoes if you give him back to me.” She threw her shoes in the river, but the river would not take them. Then she got into a boat, and it started to float away. Gerda was scared as the boat went faster and faster down the river, but she was wondering if the river was taking her to Kay. She watched the beautiful landscape.
She saw a house, and an old woman pulled the boat ashore with her stick. “Poor child. What a long way the river has carried you.” Said the old woman. “Tell me who you are and how you got here.”
Gerda told her everything, and asked her if she had seen little Kay. The old woman said “no” but that he would come soon, and in the meantime Gerda should eat some cherries and come into her house. The old woman combed her hair, “Oh, I have wanted a little girl like you for a long time. What good friends we shall be.” Gerda thought less and less about Kay while her hair was being combed.
The old woman was a witch, but she wasn’t a bad witch. She just wanted to keep Gerda. She took Gerda out into the garden where she played.
Gerda thought there was something missing, but could not sense what it was. One day she saw the old woman’s hat had a rose on it, and she remembered Kay. She cried.
“I have stayed here for too long” she cried. “I left home to search for Kay. Do you know where he is? Is he dead?”
The old woman used her magic powers. “He is not dead” she said.
“Oh thank you!” She said.
The old woman was sad to see Gerda go, but knew she missed her best friend.
“I need to go find Kay” said Gerda.
It was winter now, and Gerda needed to stop and rest. While she was resting a bird came down from the sky.
“Caw, Caw, good day, good day.”
Gerda told the bird her story and asked if he had seen Kay.
The raven sad “I may have, it is possible.”
“Oh, he is alive!” said Gerda. She hugged the bird tight.
“Gently, gently.” Said the Raven. “I have seen Kay, but I think he has forgotten you because of a princess.”
“A princess? Does he live with a princess?”
The bird told her everything. “I remember a boy, he was wearing boots and he thought the princess was so beautiful. He went to her castle to try and live there. I think he lives there now.”
“Can you take me to him?” she asked.
“I’ll see what I can do.”
And so the bird flew off, and then came back later that day. Gerda snuck into the palace. She saw a boy sleeping on a bed, but then when she saw the boy’s face she said “oh, I’m so sad, that is not my friend.”
Just then the princess, woke up. At first she was afraid because there was a stranger in her castle. But Gerda explained “I’m sorry. My friend has been taken and I have been trying to find him for more than one year. I am tired and hungry and I have no shoes”
“Please sleep here,” said the princess. “Tomorrow you can go, and I will give you things that might help you.”
So Gerda left on the next day with new clothes and a carriage with a horse. But soon after she left, a robber family saw her. They stopped to carriage, and stole some of her pretty new clothes.
“I like this scarf,” said one of the robbers. “I think it will keep it, but I also like you so come with me and you will live with me.”
Gerda came because she was scared. When she got to the robber’s house, the girl said, “don’t you dare run away, or else I will have one of my dogs hurt you badly.”
When the girl left the room, Gerda started talking with a pigeon. The pigeon said, “I have seen your friend Kay, he was riding north on a sleigh.”
“But how do I get there?” asked Gerda.
“I would ask the reindeer. He knows about the north.”
She walked over to the reindeer. “Reindeer, do you know what is north of here?”
“Yes, it is Lapland. I grew up there! Lapland is beautiful!”
“Could you take me there? Would you let me ride you?”
“Well my master would have to let me go.”
The robber came back in, and Gerda explained, “I have to get to my friend Kay. He was taken away and is now up north. He is my best friend and I’m worried that he might be in danger!”
“Ok” she said. “I can see that you like your friend a lot, I will let you go and you can even use my reindeer, but you have to let me keep your hat and scarf.”
“That’s fine,” she agreed.
So she and the reindeer were off to the north, to go to the Lapland and find Kay. They travelled for many miles together, until a magical old woman invited them inside her house.
“Please come in, and have some fish.” She said. Gerda and the reindeer did.
“What brings you so far up north?” said the woman.
Gerda explained that she was trying to find her friend Kay.
“Oh you poor dear,” said the old woman.
“Please” said the reindeer. “Can you give Gerda a potion, some kind of magic soup that will make her as strong as twelve men?”
“It will be no use,” said the old woman. “That boy, Kay, has a magic piece of evil mirror in his heart. He thinks he is happy with the queen, and you can’t change his mind. Even if you try to make the boy leave, he will want to stay with The Ice Queen, in her castle.”
“Can’t you give Gerda something else to take out the glass?” asked the reindeer.
“That girl already has great power. Why else would the river, the sun and animals help her? She has a pure and loving heart and with that power she can free Kay.”
The Reindeer took her to the castle, and left her there.
She saw two snowflakes, that were getting larger and larger. They became the queen’s giant ice monster body guards. She touched them and they broke into pieces.
The walls of the castle were made of snow. There were hundreds of rooms but most were empty and cold. In the middle of the palace was a large frozen lake. When the snow queen was home her throne was in the middle of the lake. She thought the lake was the best mirror in the world.
Kay was black and blue with cold, but couldn’t feel it. He felt warm, even though his body was cold. His heart was already ice.
The queen had left to visit warmer countries, since she liked to put snow on the top of mountains in warm countries. She left Kay sitting all alone on the frozen lake.
The winds blew terribly as Gerda entered the castle. She entered the front and say Kay. “Kay, Kay, at last I have found you!” She hugged him, but Kay sat cold and stiff. Gerda cried, and her warm tears fell onto Kay’s chest and warmed his heart. Gerda looked at him, hoping he would remember how they were friends. Then Kay looked at her and cried so much that the piece of mirror in his eye was washed out.
“Gerda, my good friend. Where have you been?” He looked around and asked “Where have I been? It’s so cold in here.” Gerda was laughing and crying at the same time. They left the Snow Queen’s palace. The sun came out and the wind returned to normal. The reindeer was waiting for them. He brought another reindeer that had warm milk. They drank and then rode off to the magic old woman’s house. She gave them a meal of warm fish. Then they left her house and rode her sled.
They rode the sled all the way home, and lived happily ever after in their home, playing together and enjoying the roses in the summer.