Working Title: Fathers Day

Working Title: Fathers DayBy Dan Lane

The Main Conventions of My ThrillerDanger, Death, a Twist, Suspense, TensionFlashbacksClose Ups, Low Key Lighting

The Narrative A father and son- sons has lost reputation- his father has to take care of it

CharactersGeorge (Martins Father)- Shotgun, in powerMartin (Victim)- Begging for his lifeBilly- Pushed off tree-house Michael C. Hall. Tom Hardy and Gary Oldman

Target Audience ResearchLocation- Empty House, City, Library, Woods, Isolated

Dialogue- Even response

Key Elements- Twist, Suspense, Realistic, Cliffhangers, Death, Excitement, Music, Few Characters, Flash Backs

My Focus Group Picture- Greyscale (old fashioned)Make the characters clear

My Target AudienceTeenagers 15+ to older adults (15-30)Males (Action, Violence) Youtube

Things to ConsiderRating: 15Credits at the endSimilar Films: Bourne Franchise

How Will It Attract The Audience?Narrative- Cliffhanger Unanswered QuestionsSoundtrackTension between Characters

Music

Straight into the actionRepetitive

The Die Is CastRandazzoOverkill, track 31, disc 310200679992.0eng - VH/LC12350 - Tense frenzy to serenity back to tense frenzy. Evokes a chase through a jungle, over the tops of buildings -- or entirely in a closet, for you agoraphobic types. Huge drums, various percussion, bells, brass cluster swells and contrabass hits (the big "knocking"/slamming sounds) create bookends of flurried ticking/hit-laden action. The heavenly center section (starting @:29) of ethereal choir and bells lasts until :43, when the contrabass hits enter again, getting faster and more insistent, morphing back to the "tense frenzy" motif @1:02. Works for chases, tense decision-making or pieces with lots of fast cutting.cn4 - VH/LC12350Thriller/Suspense/Adventure/ActionRandazzoTense frenzy to serenity back to tense frenzy. Evokes a chase through a jungle, over the tops of buildings -- or entirely in a closet, for you agoraphobic types. Huge drums, various percussion, bells, brass cluster swells and contrabass hits (the big "knocking"/slamming sounds) create bookends of flurried ticking/hit-laden action. The heavenly center section (starting @:29) of ethereal choir and bells lasts until :43, when the contrabass hits enter again, getting faster and more insistent, morphing back to the "tense frenzy" motif @1:02. Works for chases, tense decision-making or pieces with lots of fast cutting.Orchestral Percussion/Drum Set/Brass Section/Tubular Bells/Finger Cymbals/String Section/SFX (Sound Effects)Tracks that start big - and just get bigger.310OverkillThe Die Is Cast31VDL_VH_0310_03101The Die Is Cast2006emi - 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